北京卷2024年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】【2024北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的外國好友Jim準(zhǔn)備給其校報的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中國成立75周年，他打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國的發(fā)展成就，發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)建議投稿內(nèi)容；(2)就以上建議簡要說明理由。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【文本解讀】2024年是中華人民共和國成立75周年，是實(shí)現(xiàn)“十四五”規(guī)劃目標(biāo)任務(wù)的關(guān)鍵一年，也是全面落實(shí)教育強(qiáng)國戰(zhàn)略部署的重要一年。2024年高考英語（北京卷）試題（以下簡稱“2024年高考英語試題”）及時回應(yīng)時代新呼喚，對標(biāo)建設(shè)教育強(qiáng)國新要求，試題命制堅持“四個突出，四個考出來”的命題理念，以《普通高中英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2017年版2020年修訂）》和高校人才選拔要求為依據(jù)，結(jié)合中學(xué)英語教學(xué)實(shí)際，守正創(chuàng)新，穩(wěn)中求進(jìn)，全面落實(shí)立德樹人根本任務(wù)，凸顯價值引領(lǐng)，強(qiáng)化試題“培根鑄魂”的育人功能；充分發(fā)揮試題的教學(xué)導(dǎo)向作用，彰顯新課程理念，堅持“素養(yǎng)立意”，促進(jìn)學(xué)生的全面發(fā)展。此試題以情境為載體，依托人與自然、人與社會、人與自我三大主題，創(chuàng)設(shè)了學(xué)習(xí)情境、生活情境、社會情境和學(xué)術(shù)情境，在突顯時代感的情境中考查學(xué)生理解和表達(dá)意義、情感、觀點(diǎn)的能力。同時，試題突出語用，考查學(xué)生在真實(shí)場景中使用語言與交際對象進(jìn)行交流的能力，實(shí)現(xiàn)在情境中認(rèn)識問題、分析問題和解決問題的核心要求。試題凸顯真實(shí)性和任務(wù)性。試題在選材上把語言在現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中的使用情況作為一個重要質(zhì)量控制指標(biāo)，試卷中所用素材均來自外文期刊，語言地道，題材豐富，體裁多樣。同時，試題設(shè)計依托情景和任務(wù)，盡可能接近現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中語言使用的實(shí)際情況。【思路點(diǎn)撥】本次高考英語北京卷的書面表達(dá)題目要求考生以紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華的身份，給外國好友Jim提供關(guān)于向校報AsiaToday欄目投稿的建議。具體背景是，得知今年新中國成立75周年，Jim打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國的發(fā)展成就，并向李華詢問相關(guān)建議。第一步：審題本題要求考生以李華的身份，針對Jim的投稿需求，給出關(guān)于介紹中國發(fā)展成就的建議，并解釋為何選擇這些內(nèi)容。第二步：寫作提綱開頭：簡短問候并感謝Jim的詢問。主體：建議投稿內(nèi)容：中國的經(jīng)濟(jì)增長，特別是近幾十年的快速發(fā)展。科技進(jìn)步，如高鐵、移動支付、電子商務(wù)等領(lǐng)域的創(chuàng)新。環(huán)保成就，比如綠化工程、減少污染等。理由闡述：經(jīng)濟(jì)增長顯示了中國的強(qiáng)大活力和市場潛力。科技進(jìn)步反映了中國的創(chuàng)新能力和對未來的投資。環(huán)保成就是中國對全球環(huán)境責(zé)任的體現(xiàn)。結(jié)尾：表達(dá)對Jim投稿的期待，并希望他的文章能夠引起廣泛關(guān)注。第三步：選詞組句可能用到的詞語及中文解釋：Economicgrowth:經(jīng)濟(jì)增長Technologicaladvancements:科技進(jìn)步Environmentalprotectionachievements:環(huán)保成就Rapiddevelopment:快速發(fā)展Innovation:創(chuàng)新Globalenvironmentalresponsibility:全球環(huán)境責(zé)任【滿分范文】范文一DearJim,

Gladtohearfromyou.Asyoumentionedintheletter,it'sagoodchoicewritingthegreatachievementsofChinaforthecolumn,theAsiaToday,ofyourschoolnewspaper.

Thepast75yearshavewitnessedthedevelopmentofChina.Insteadofinvolvingalltheaspects,you'dbetterfocusontheonesrelatedtopeople'slife.Transportationandtechnologyarethesuitabletopicsthatyourteachersandschoolmatesmaybeconcernedabout.High-speedtrainsarethemostpersuadingproof,combiningthetransportationandtechnology.Notonlyhavetheyshortenedtheexacttimebetweenplaceswhenpeopletravel,buttheygetpeopleclosertooneanother.That'sreallyworthintroducing.

HopeyourarticlewillbeamarvelouswindowforpeoplearoundyoutogetinsightsintoChina.(127words)

Yours,

LiHua范文二DearJim,Ihopeyouaredoingwell.DelightedtohearthatyouarewritinganarticleforAsiaTodayaboutthe75thanniversaryofNewChina,Iamwritingtosharemysuggestions.ItisagoodoptiontowriteaboutChina'sfasteconomicgrowth.Overthepast75years,Chinahaschangedfromafarmingcountrytotheworld'ssecond-largesteconomy,showinghowquicklyChinahasdeveloped.AnotherhelpfulstrategyisfocusingonChina'samazingnewtechnology,suchashigh-speedtrains,spaceexploration,andrenewableenergy,allofwhichshowthatChinaisnowaleaderintechnologyandinnovation.IfIwereyou,IwoulddiscussChina'seffortstoreducepoverty,whichhaveliftedmillionsofpeopleoutofpovertyandimprovedthelivesofmanypeople.ThesepointsnotonlyhighlightimportantachievementsbutalsohelpreadersunderstandhowChinahasbecomesuchanimportantcountry.Ihopethesesuggestionshelp!Ifyouneedmoreinformation,feelfreetoask.Bestregards,LiHua范文三DearJim,Iamgladtolearnthatyou

arescheduled

to

contributetoyourschoolnewspaperonthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople'sRepublicofChina.IsuggestyourfocusingonChina'seconomicgrowth,povertyalleviationandprosperity,andtechnologicaladvancements

to

introduceChina'sdevelopmentachievements.Withthehistoricleapineconomicpower,

thepasttwodecadeshaveseen

China'sriseand

transformationinto

aglobaleconomicpowerhouse.China'scomprehensivevictoryinprecise

povertyalleviationhas

contributedChinesewisdomandChinesesolutionsto

theglobalpovertyreduction,writingabrilliantchapterinthehistoryofhumananti-poverty.China's

remarkableachievementsin

scientificandtechnologicalinnovation,suchasAI

andspaceexploration,havewonworldwideattention.Ihopemyadvice

isofsomehelpto

you.Lookingforwardtoyourarticle!

(131words)Yours,LiHua范文四DearJim,HardlycouldIhidemyexcitementwhenhearingthatyourintendtocontributeto"AsiaToday"andshowcaseChina'sachievements.Ican’twaittosharemymysuggestionforyoursubmission.Firstandforemost,focusingontheeconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancementsChinahasacquiredoverthepast75yearsisamust.Additionally,itisalsoafabulousideatohighlighttheBeltandRoadInitiative,whichhasfosteredglobaltradeandcooperation.Lastbutnotleast,don'tmissoutonthegreendevelopmentandpovertyalleviationeffortsChinahasmadetosignificantlyimprovethelivesofmillionsofChinesepeople.NotonlyarethesetopicscentraltoChina'sdevelopmentbuttheyalsoresonatewithglobalthemesofsustainabilityandprogress.IamfirmlyconvincedthattheywillprovideacomprehensiveviewofChina'sjourneyanditsimpactontheworldstage.Yours,LiHua范文五DearJim,

ThanksforreachingoutaboutyourAsiaTodayarticle.

Incelebrationofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople'sRepublicofChina,IrecommendhighlightingChina'srapideconomicdevelopment,technologicalinnovationssuchase-commerceandmobilepayments,andournotableenvironmentalconservationefforts.ThesetopicsnotonlyreflectChina'sgrowthbutalsodemonstrateourglobalenvironmentalresponsibility.

Yourarticleissuretocaptivatereaders.Goodluckwithyourwriting!

Warmregards,

LiHua2023年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動，他發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)活動形式；(2)活動內(nèi)容。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【文本解讀】立足北京，講好“中國故事”。2023年高考英語試題立足北京、放眼中國、展望全球，有利于把學(xué)生培養(yǎng)成具有中國情懷和國際視野的社會主義建設(shè)者和接班人。例如，書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)以“綠色北京”為主題創(chuàng)設(shè)情境，引導(dǎo)考生關(guān)注北京的綠色發(fā)展，關(guān)注中國的生態(tài)文明建設(shè)，認(rèn)同“綠水青山就是金山銀山”的發(fā)展理念，激發(fā)考生熱愛首都、熱愛祖國的真摯情懷，幫助考生堅定“四個自信”，用英語講好“美麗中國”的故事?！熬G色北京”的活動可以選擇節(jié)能家電、重復(fù)利用紙箱、堅持綠色出行……這些綠色生活新選擇正在成為潮流新風(fēng)尚。之前為促進(jìn)綠色消費(fèi)，引導(dǎo)首都市民踐行綠色低碳生活方式，北京市節(jié)能環(huán)保中心主辦了“2022北京綠色生活季”活動?；顒右浴熬G色消費(fèi)，低碳生活”為主題，包含綠享生活、綠動京城、綠暢出行、綠喚未來、綠游山水、綠助光盤、綠色金融和綠碳積分等八個板塊。這要求我們時刻關(guān)注北京當(dāng)?shù)氐闹卮髸r事活動，對于我們擴(kuò)展綠色北京的社團(tuán)活動提供素材?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】1、首先，我們需要考慮活動形式。可以建議組織一次綠色環(huán)保主題的社區(qū)清潔活動，邀請志愿者一起清理公園、街道或者河流等公共場所?？梢蕴峁┫嚓P(guān)的清潔工具和垃圾袋，讓參與者親身體驗(yàn)環(huán)保的重要性。2、其次，關(guān)于活動內(nèi)容，可以提議進(jìn)行一次綠色生活講座或者展覽，邀請專家學(xué)者或者環(huán)保組織代表來分享綠色生活的理念和實(shí)踐。可以涵蓋節(jié)能減排、垃圾分類、植樹造林等方面的內(nèi)容，讓參與者了解和學(xué)習(xí)如何在日常生活中實(shí)踐綠色環(huán)保。3、此外，還可以建議組織一次綠色旅游活動，帶領(lǐng)參與者去參觀北京的自然景點(diǎn)或者生態(tài)農(nóng)場，讓他們親身感受大自然的美麗與脆弱，增強(qiáng)環(huán)保意識?！緷M分范文】范文一DearJim,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.It’sgreattohearaboutyourplanfora“GreenBeijing”themedclubactivity.I’dbehappytogiveyousomesuggestions.Fortheactivityformat,Irecommendorganizinga“GreenBeijing”campaign.Thiscanincludeaseriesofeventssuchastreeplanting,clean-updrives,andeducationalsessionsonenvironmentalconservation.Additionally,youcouldconsiderorganizinga“GreenFair”wherelocalbusinessesandorganizationscanshowcaseeco-friendlyproductsandservices.Intermsoftheactivitycontent,itwouldbebeneficialto

collaboratewith

localenvironmentalorganizationsandexpertstodeliverinformativepresentationsontopicslikerecycling,sustainableenergy,andreducingcarbonfootprint.Youcouldalsoarrangevisitstoeco-friendlysitesinBeijing,suchasparksandgardens,toraiseawarenessabouttheimportanceofpreservinggreenspaces.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbehelpfulforyourclubactivity.Bestofluckwithyourplanning!Yours,

LiHua范文二DearJim,

I’mthrilledtohearthatyou’reorganizingthe“GreenBeijing”event,andI’dliketooffersomesuggestionsfortheactivitycontent,whichincludespromotinggreentraveland

garbageclassification.

Tohighlighttheimportanceofgreentravel,youcanorganizeaneventofridingsharedbikestogether.Withthesameclothesandbanners“GreenBeijing”,theeventissuretoattractcitizens’attentionandraisetheirawarenessofgreentravel.Regardinggarbageclassification,IfIwereyou,Iwouldorganizeaneducationalworkshop,whererelevantexpertscanbeinvitedtodiscusstheimpactofimproperwastedisposalontheenvironmentandenlightenushowtobetterclassifygarbage.

IhopethesesuggestionshelpyoutoplanyoureventmoreeffectivelyandincreaseenvironmentalawarenessinBeijing.Pleasefeelfreetoletmeknowifyouneedanyfurthersupport.Bestregards,LiHua范文三DearJim,Your"GreenBeijing"eventisanexcitingprospect!Iapplaudyourendeavortopromoteenvironmentalconsciousness.AsaBeijinger,I'veobservedourcity'scommitmenttosustainability,particularlywithinoureducationalinstitutions.Thecruxofmysuggestionisa'GreenCampusVisit'atarenownedBeijinguniversity,suchasTsinghuaorPekingUniversity.Participantscouldengageinaneducationaltouraroundthecampus,learningabouttheirongoinggreenprojectssuchasenergy-efficientbuildingsandsolarpowersystems.Thiscanbefollowedbyaninteractivesessionwithstudentswholeadtheseinitiatives,providinginsightsandsparkingintellectualconversationsonsustainability.Lookingforwardtowitnessingourcombinedeffortinpromoting"GreenBeijing".Yours,

LiHua范文四DearJim,Iamgladtolearnthatyouareplanningaclubactivitythemedwith"GreenBeijing".Herearemysuggestions.Italwayscomesfirsttoinviteacelebratedexpertforalectureonenvironmentalprotection.Toact,afterall,weshouldthinkfirst.ActivitieslikegarbagepickingandwasteclassificationinfamousscenicspotsinBeijingarealsopreferable,whichwillpromotetheecologicalconceptofhealthandenvironmentalprotectiontotouristswithpracticalactions.PluswhynotchoosegreentravelsothatyoucancontributetoBeijing'senvironmentalprotection?Ihopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.(98words)Yours,LiHua范文五DearJim,Iamverydelightedtolearnthatyouareplanningaclubactivitythemed“GreenBeijing”andseekingsomeadvicefromme.Iamwritinginresponsetoyourinquiry.Asweallknow,greenlifestyleshavedeeplyrootedinBeijingrecently,soincampus,Iwouldliketosuggestagreenwayof“clearyourplatecampaign”incanteentosavefood.Outsidecampus,itishighlyrecommendedthatgreentransportationtoandfromcampusbywalkingorbybikeorbypublictransportationinsteadofdriving.Besides,somecampaignslikeadoptingrecyclingbags,plantingmoretreestoleadalowcarbonlife,choosingthemoreenergysavingelectricfacilitiesarealsopartofthiscommunityactivity.Ibelieveyoucansuccessfullyhostthisactivityandachieveyourintendedpurposeofpromotinggreenwayoflife.Iwouldliketooffermytipsatanytimeifneeded.AndhopeonedayyoucandropinBeijingagaintoexperiencethegreenlifeinperson.Yours,LiHua2022年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】【2022年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你打算邀請英國好友Jim為你們班做一次關(guān)于英語寫作的線上經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．建議交流的具體內(nèi)容及其原因；2．交流時間和其他相關(guān)事項(xiàng)。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【文本解讀】主題語境：人與社會---人際溝通（良好的人際關(guān)系）話題選擇：邀請朋友在線分享英語寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn)語篇類型：邀請信邀請信是邀請對方參與某種活動或邀請對方做某事。邀請信最重要的就是自然流暢，對象不同，信中的表達(dá)方式也不同。比如你邀請某位老師組織活動，如果是不認(rèn)識的老師，就要說下自己是誰，有什么事情，要顯得很尊敬對方。再比如你邀請朋友參加某個活動，你已經(jīng)知道對方是誰了，那自然沒必要自我介紹，語氣可以顯得活潑一些?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】（1）首段：開門見山說明寫作目的。（2）主體：a.具體交代邀請原因；b.邀請內(nèi)容：活動性質(zhì)、時間、地點(diǎn)、日期；c.有關(guān)要求和希望。（3）尾段：a.再次盛情邀請；b.希望盡快答復(fù)?！緷M分范文】范文一DearJim，Ihopeyou'rewell.

I'dliketoinviteyoufor

anonlineEnglishwritingexchangewithmyhighschoolclassmates.

We'reeagerto

improveourEnglishwritingskills,andyournativeEnglish

perspective

wouldbe

invaluable.The

specificcontent

ofthisexchangewould

involve

twoaspects.

Inthefirstplace,

youcould

shareinsightson

effectivewritingtechniques,grammar,andstyle,

whichwouldbeincrediblyenriching

andbeneficialforus.

Besides,

we'dloveforyoutoreviewouressaysandgive

constructivefeedback,whichwill

enableustolearnfrom

ourmistakesand

make

necessaryimprovements,

helpingusbecome

more

proficient

writersinEnglish.Theexchange

isscheduledfor

nextWednesdayat8:00PMviavideo.I'mlookingforwardtoyourresponseandtheopportunitytolearnfromyour

expertise.Thankyouforconsideringthisinvitation!Yours

LiHua范文二DearJim,Knowingthatyouhavegotagoodgradeinthewriting,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutodoaonlineexperiencesharingabouttheEnglishcomposition.TheexperiencesharingistobeheldontheMondaymorninganditwilllastforanhour.Inthesharingprocedure,youcanintroducehowtoorganizethestructureofacompositionbetter,becausesomeofuscan’tdoitwell.Besides,youcanalsogivesomesuggestionsabouthowtoconnectthesentenceslogically,whichwillleadstudentstoexpresstheirthoughtsbetter.Atlast,youshouldtellmewhichplatformyouwillchoosetogivethesharingaheadoftimeandweshouldleavesometimetoanswerthequestionsfrommyclassmates.Sincerelyhopeyoucanaccepttheinvitationandgiveusaimpressiveexperiencesharing.Yours

LiHua范文三DearJim,How'sitgoing？I’mwritingtoinviteyouto

giveusanonlinetalkon

Englishwritingbecauseourclassmatesseemtobeweakinorganisation.Wouldyouplease

giveussomesuggestionson

howtoconnectsentenceslogically，howtodevelopaparagraph，andhowtostructureanessay?Thetalkwilllastaboutanhour，

andyoucandecideonadateatyourconvenience.Pleaseletmeknowwhichplatformyou’lluse.Itwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua范文四DearJim,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoaninternet-basedtalkabouthowtoimproveEnglishwriting.ThetalkisthoughtimportantforusChinesestudents,ofwhommostarepoorinwritingacompositioninEnglish.Therefore,wehopeyou,anativespeaker,wouldliketogiveussomeadviceonwhatwecandowellwithourEnglishcompositions.Theonlinetalkisscheduledtotakeplacebetween5:00pmand6:30pmthisSaturday,andifyouwill,IwillsendyouthelinktoTencentMeeting,anvideoappcomparabletoZoom.Iwouldappreciateitsomuchifwecouldhaveyouinthetalk.Yours,LiHua范文五DearJim,IamwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusanonlinelectureonEnglishwriting.Sincethefinalexaminationiscoming,somestudentsarestillstrugglingwithwritinganEnglishessay.Thingsexpectedtobecoveredareasfollows.First,youmaygivesomegeneralguidanceonhowtowriteEnglishessays.Then,youcouldusesomerealexamplestogivesomespecificguidanceonorganizingstructuresaswellaswordingandphrasing.Additionally,itwouldbegreatifyoucouldgiveussomepracticaltipsonhowtoimprovewritinginourday-to-daylearning.Asforthetime,I'mwonderingifyouareavailableat3pmthisFridayafternoon.Ifso,Iwillsendthelinktotheonlinemeetingtoyouinadvance.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua2021年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)歉意并說明原因；2.提出建議并給出理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【文本解讀】這封電子郵件屬于個人道歉及建議類書信文體。在這類文體中，作者需要以一種真誠、禮貌且直接的方式向收件人表達(dá)歉意，并由于某種原因無法履行先前的約定。同時，為了維護(hù)雙方的關(guān)系和計劃的延續(xù)性，作者還需要提出一個或多個合理的替代方案，并解釋這些方案為何是可行的或更合適的?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】【滿分范文】范文一DearJim,IamwritingtomakeasincereapologytoyouthatIwillnotbeabletoattendthephotographicexhibitionwhichisscheduledtotakeplacethisSaturday.Idofeelbadaboutinformingyouonsuchashortnotice,butIneedtohaveaphysicalcheckupthisSaturdayafternoonandIalmostforgot.Tovisittheexhibition,firstyouneedtotakethebusandthenchangesubwaylinestwice.Itiskindofcomplicated.ConsideringthatyouhaveonlybeeninBeijingforaweekandarelikelytohaveaproblemgettingaround,Icouldaskmycousin,whowasbornandbredinBeijing,togowithyoutotheexhibitionvenue.NotonlyishefamiliarwithBeijing,heisfluentinEnglishaswell.Inotherwords,hecouldbeyourperfecttourguide.IfmycousinisnotavailableonSaturday,asalastresort,wemightgotothephotographicexhibitionsomeothertime.Ihearthatitwillbeheldagainnextmonth.Anyway,Iamsorryagainfornotbeingabletogowithyouthistime,butdonothesitateto1contactmeifIcanbeofanyfurtherhelp.Yours,LiHua范文二DearJim,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mwritingto

expressmysincereapologiesfor

notbeingabletojoinyouthisweekend

asplanned.Unfortunately,I've

encountered

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unexpectedfamilymatter

duetomygrandfatherfallingill,whichrequiresmy

immediatepresence

athome.Ihopeyoucanunderstandthesituation.Asanalternative,

Isuggestthatwe

rescheduleouroutingto

thefollowingweekend.Thisway,I'llbeableto

fulfillmycommitments

andensurewehaveamoreenjoyabletimetogether

withoutanydistractions.

Ivalueourfriendshipandwould

reallyappreciateyourunderstanding.

Lookingforwardtoyourresponse,and

onceagain,I'msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Yours,LiHua范文三DearJim,I’mwritingthelettertoshowmysincereapologytoyoufornotbeingabletogooutwithyoutogetheratthisweekend.Iknewthatwe’vemadetheplanbutunfortunately,therearesomethingunexpectedhappenedandIhadtochangetheplan.Ibegantocoughyesterdaymorning,andIwenttoseeadoctor.ShetoldmethatitwasasobadcoldthatIwouldhavetostayathomeforafewdays.Hopeyouwillacceptmyapologyandwecanmakeanotherappointment.HowaboutgoshoppingnextweekendbecauseIreallyliketospendsometimewithyou.I’msorryabouttheinconvenienceagain.Yours,LiHua范文四DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua范文五DearJim,IamterriblysorrytoinformyouthatIwillfailtogooutwithyouasscheduledthisweekendbecauseIsprainedmyanklewhileplayingbasketballyesterday.Thedoctoradvisedmenottowalkasmuchaspossibletoavoidswellingandpaininmyinjury.NowIhavetoattendtheclasswiththehelpofmyfatherorclassmates,andcannotbutrestinbedonweekends.Myapologiesagain,Ipromisetogooutingwithyouaftermyrecovery,preferablydoingsomethingwithlittlephysicalactivity.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.(96words)Yours,LiHua2020年高考英語作文真題【北京卷】【2020年北京卷】第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們學(xué)校英語戲劇俱樂部外籍指導(dǎo)教師Jim因疫情滯留英國。復(fù)學(xué)在即，作為俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人，你給Jim寫一封電子郵件，請他推薦一名外籍指導(dǎo)教師，內(nèi)容包括：1.條件及要求；2.表示感謝并提醒注意防護(hù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【文本解讀】書面表達(dá)繼續(xù)保持選擇性和開放性的特點(diǎn)，為考生展示個性、思維的多樣性提供了廣闊空間。應(yīng)用文題目要求中涉及外籍指導(dǎo)教師的條件和要求，但是具體的內(nèi)容并未羅列，這需要考生展開積極的、合理的、有邏輯的思考完成寫作任務(wù)，為考生提供了展示自我能力的機(jī)會。情景作文需要考生不僅具備較扎實(shí)的語言功底和表達(dá)能力，也需要考生展開想象，提供合理的細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容。【思路點(diǎn)撥】應(yīng)用文首段，需要我們做到：打招呼+描述題干+寫信目的。這樣寫的話，才能將寫信的背景和目的交待清楚，有助于下一步的展開。次段：進(jìn)入正文，開門見山地，客氣地提出條件，并盡量表明為什么提這樣的條件，這是細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，是很有必要的安排，這種方法會在后面的學(xué)習(xí)中反復(fù)提到的。第三段：提醒對方注意防護(hù)，并提出一些建議，這也是交際的一個具體體現(xiàn)，可以結(jié)合我們的實(shí)際情況，結(jié)出一些中肯的建議。結(jié)尾：提出感謝（對方是外教老師身份，一定要更客氣，有禮貌）【滿分范文】范文一DearJim,Howiseverythinggoingwithyouthesedays?We’reveryworriedaboutyouduetothesevereepidemicsituation,forwhichyouaretrappedintheUKandcouldn’treturntoChinaasplanned.Consideringthatourschoolisgoingtoresumesoon,I,onbehalfofourEnglishPlayClub,sincerelyaskyoutorecommendanexcellentforeigninstructorlikeyou.Herearesomebasicqualifications.Ifpossible,anEnglishnativespeakerwouldbebetter,whichmakessureofamorestandardpronunciationintheplay.Besides,weareexpectingateacherwhoisasprofessionalasyou,withrichexperienceinEnglishplay.Atlast,whatmattersisthatheorshemustberesponsibleandpatientsothatwecanmakesmoothcommunication,makingsureofahealthydevelopmentforourclub.Duringsuchaspecialperiod,nothingismoreimportantthanahealthbody.Pleasetakecareofyourselfanddosomeprecautionstokeepawayfromthevirus,likewearingmaskswhenyouhavetogoout,washingyourhandsfrequently,workingoutregularlytokeepfitandsoon.Allofourclubmembersarelookingforwardtoyourreturn.Atlast,pleaseallowmetosaythanksagain.Ihopeourrequirementwouldnotcauseyouanytrouble.Lookforwardtoyourgoodnews.yours,LiHua范文二DearJim,Howareyoudoing?I’msorrytohearthatyoucan’tmakeitbacktoChinaduetothepandemicinyourcountry.However,westillneedaforeignteacherforourclub.Consequently,Iamwritingtoturntoyouforhelp.Firstandforemost,thereisnodoubtthatheorshemustcomefromanEnglish-spokencountry,sothatheorshecanspeakEnglishwithaperfectaccent,consideringthatpronunciationhasalwaysbeenaheadacheforusChinesestudents.Additionally,heorshemusthaveacertificateasanEnglishteacher,whichisrequiredinourcountry.Lastbutcertainlynotleast,needlesstosay,heorshemustbeavailableandcurrentlyinBeijing.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanfindsuchapersonforus.Ifso,Iwonderifit’sconvenientforyoutotellmehisorhernameandEmail.Thankyouforreadingmyletteranddoingmesuchafavor.Pleasetakegoodcareofyourselfagainstthevirus.Bestwishes!LiHua范文三DearJim,Ihopeyouaredoingwell.Duetotheongoingpandemic,weunderstandthatyoucannotreturntoguidetheEnglishDramaClubinthenewschoolyear.Therefore,wekindlyrequestyourassistanceinrecommendingaqualifiedforeignteacher.Wearelookingforanidealcandidatewhopossessesarobustbackgroundindramaeducationandsharesagenuinepassionforworkingwithstudents.Additionally,proficiencyinEnglishisessential.Weappreciateyourcontinuoussupportandguidance.Pleasetakeprecautionsagainstthevirusandtakecareofyourhealth.Yours,LiHua范文四DearJim,IamverysorrytohearthatyouhavetostayinBritainbecauseofthecoronavirus.Asweareabouttoreturntoschool,ourEnglishdramaclubneedsateachertodirectustemporarily.WeneedateacherwhoisanativeEnglishspeakerandhasexperienceinEnglishdrama.Couldyourecommendateachertous?I’dappreciateitifyoucandomethisfavor.Atlast,pleasedoremembertotakeprotectivemeasurestakecareofyourselfduringthecoronavirus.Yours,Lihua范文五Dear.Jim,Howareyoudoing?Ihopeeverything'sOKwithyou.Ourschool'sdramachubplanstostartpractising.Sinceyou'reawayinBritain,weneedadramateachertobeinyourplace,wouldyoupleaserecommendoneforus?HeorsheshouldbeanativeEnglishspeaker,currentlyinBeijing,andexperiencedinbothdirectingandteaching.Thankyouforyourhelp.Pleasetakecareofyourself,Remembertowearamaskwhennecessary.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua第二節(jié)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班班長李華。居家學(xué)習(xí)期間，你們班開展了一次以“自律”為主題的調(diào)研活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文稿件，給你們學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，記述你在本次活動中發(fā)現(xiàn)問題并解決問題的過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：自律self-discipline___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【文本解讀】此試題緊扣時代脈搏，與疫情有關(guān)，講述的是在家上課期間，李華的班上做了一個學(xué)生調(diào)研，調(diào)查結(jié)果表明學(xué)生自律情況堪憂，李華向父母征求建議，父母建議他征求大家意見。李華召開了一個在線班會，大家出謀劃策，想提高自律的辦法。三個月后自律情況明顯改善，李華向老師做了匯報，老師很欣慰，李華也很有成就感。情景作文對人物情感心理的把握及細(xì)節(jié)的拓展，是作文高下的關(guān)鍵。詞匯積累儲備是平時備考的關(guān)鍵。【思路點(diǎn)撥】描題干+議論看圖作文，最重要的幾個要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)齊全，細(xì)節(jié)到位，也就是圖片中的細(xì)節(jié)要處理好。比如每幅圖片中，李華的表情，文字?jǐn)⑹龅?。圖片與圖片之間的過渡要通順，要有合理的連接詞或連接句。圖片描述時，要注意高級寫作句型的運(yùn)用，比如定語從句，非謂語動詞，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等。詞匯也要注意豐富和多樣性，比如寫了chance,下一個就要用oppotunity來替換。happy也不要再過多使用，可以用delighted,joyful等詞來替換。如果有必要，需要有一個積極向上的結(jié)尾，像語文作文一樣，升華主題。【滿分范文】范文一Duetothesevereepidemicsituation,allofourstudentshadtofinishourschoolworkathome,duringwhichourclassheldaonlineresearchonthethemeofself-disciplinetoenhanceourself-learningability.時間狀語入圖+

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