XuLiuWriting:HowI’vechanged!WarmingupInthepast,Iusedtobeshy,butnowIammoreoutgoing.playingping-pongaminterestedinwatchingfootballgamesInthepast,Iwenttoschool_________,butnow,I_________________NowIhavelonghair,butIusedto____________.haveshorthairgotoworkbycar.bybikeIusedtolike________________,butnowI__________________________________.TalkingMr.Lin’slifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.InthepastNowthebiggestchange?likeeatingjunkfoodenjoyeatingvegetablesandfruitfatstrong/fitwatchTVworkinthegardenMr.Lin’sbiggestchangewas______________________.havingahealthylifestyleTalkingMissChenMr.Lin’sbiggestchangewashavingahealthylifestyle.How:Why:Oneday,hemethisfriendMissChen.Shetoldhimmanydisadvantagesofeatingjunkfood.Thenshegavehimsomeadviceaboutkeepinghealthy.Afterthat,hebegantochange.Heknowstheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.Heismuchhappiernow.whatresultswhogoodthingsfeelingsthesimplepasttense(一般過去時(shí))OnedayThenAfterthatReadingMr.Lin’slifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Inthepast,heusedtobefat,butnowheisstrong.Heusedtoeatalotofjunkfood,likeicecreamandpizza.Nowheeatsmanyvegetablesandfruit.Whenhewasfree,helikedwatchingTVHowever,heenjoysworkinginthegardennow.Thebiggestchangewashavingahealthylifestyle.Oneday,hemethisfriendMissChen.Shetoldhimmanydisadvantagesofeatingjunkfood.Thenshegavehimsomeadviceaboutkeepinghealthy.Afterthat,hebegantochange.Thisisthemostimportantchangebecauseheismuchhappiernow.Andheknowstheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.

Para.1:GeneralintroductionaboutMr.Lin’schangesinlifePara.2Thebiggestchange:“what,how,why”topicsentencetopicsentence()details(細(xì)節(jié))()details(細(xì)節(jié))endingTalkingInthepast,Iusedto…..Butnow,Iam/do…..Iwas/did…..Iamnolonger…..Idon’t…..anymore.Inolongerdo….Trytousedifferentsentencepatterns.thesimplepasttense（一般過去時(shí)）

Payattentiontothetense(時(shí)態(tài)).thesimplepresenttense（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）Talkaboutyourchanges.InthepastNowthebiggestchangewhat:how:why:Pre-writingWritedownthekeywordsofyourchanges.whatresultswhogoodthingsfeelingsgeneralintroductionaboutyourchanges

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Inthepast,Iusedto____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thisisthemostimportantchangebecause___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WritingHowI’vechanged!Para.1Generalintroduction

Para.2Thebiggestchange:WhatHowWhyCheck(評(píng)價(jià)):Readthewritingtoseeifit

hasfullcontents(內(nèi)容)----“generalintroduction”and“what,how,why”.

hasrighttenses(時(shí)態(tài)).usesdifferentsentencepatterns.showsthetimeorder. hastidyandnicehandwriting.Total:▁▁Evaluating

1.Doyoulikeyourchanges?Whyorwhynot?Thinking2.Whatotherthingsdoyouwanttochange?

Iwantto_______________.Ihope_________________.AppreciatingChangeisnevereasybutnecessary.Everynewdayisachancetochangeyourlife.Beopentochange.HomeworkLevelA：Finishandpolish(潤色)yourwritingandshareitwithyourclassmates.LevelB：Findoutwonderfulsentencesinyourclassmates’writingsandwritethemdown.BrainstormAppearance:Personality:Hobbies&InterestsHair:Height:Build:Clothing:……shy,outgoing,friendly,lazy,hard-working,helpful,selfish……enjoy,like,lovebeinterestedin……getgoodgradesbegoodat…belateforschoolhateP.E.class……Schoollife:Iusedtobethin,butnowIamofmediumbuild.Inthepast,Iwasafraidofdoingmanythings,butnowI’mbraver.WhenIwasfree,Iusedtolikebeingaloneandwatchingmovies.NowIaminterestedinreadingbooks.Thebiggestchangeinmylifewasbecomingmuchbraver.________IwenttoanamusementparkwithPeter.Lookingatthescaryride,Ithoughtaboutgivingup.However,Peteraskedmetotryit._____________,IfeltsogladthatIhadtriedit.Itwassoexciting.________,Iamnolongerafraidofdoinganythingnew.ThisisthemostimportantchangebecauseIhavelearnedthatIwillneverknowuntilItrysomething.Anditmakesmefeelmoreconfidentnow.Exercise1.Giveatopicsentencetothepassage.2.FillinsomewordsinPara.2toshowthetimeorder..Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.