SectionB3a—3bSelfcheckLearntowriteWritingUnit11Sadmoviesmakemecry.3a—3bSelfCheck3Brainstorming:allkindsofmoodsadjectivespleased,sad,upsetangry,mad,crazybored,sleepy,tiredworried,afraid,scaredproud,satisfiedembarrassedhappy,glad,excitednervous4Brainstorming:allkindsofmoodsadjectivespleased,sad,upsetangry,mad,crazybored,sleepy,tiredworried,afraid,scaredproud,satisfiedembarrassedhappy,glad,excitednervousgoodluckgiveconfidencewarmone'sheart...getonwellPowerofsmiles

Yourownstoryaboutsmiles.Discussion

Whatyou'velearntfromthestory.2017年中考

英語真題

微笑是人類最美的語言。某英文報(bào)以“Smile”為題，舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動。請根據(jù)下面的圖表信息，寫一篇英文短文。內(nèi)容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事給予你的啟示。1短文中應(yīng)包括所給的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；

2短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名。

3詞數(shù)不得少于80。

Powerofsmiles(getonwell,bringgoodluck,…）YourownstoryaboutsmilesWhatyou’velearntfromthestory.SmilesSample1

Asmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.Thesmileisalwaysaroundusanditcangivemepower.Lastweekend,whenIinthebus,awomanknockintowithme.SoIamsoangrywithher.Becausesheisnotsaysorry.SoIfeellikeshoutingforher.Inthenextstation,aboywalkedinthebus.Isawhe.Then,hesmilestome.compareSample2

Asmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.Asmileislikethesunshineinwinter.Itwarmsourheartsandhelpsusgetonwellwitheachother.Apersonwhooftensmilesusuallybringsgoodluck.What’smore,smilescangiveusconfidence.WhenIwasyoung,Iwasveryshy.Iwasafraidtospeakinpublic.OnedayIneededtogiveaspeechinmyEnglishclass.IwassofrightenedthatIdidbadlyatthebegining.ButwhenIsawabigsmileonmyteacher'sface,Igotmoreandmoreconfident.FinallyImadeit.Smilesareveryhelpfulinourlives.Weshouldoftenkeepsmilesonourfaces.Ifwearehappy,wesmile.Ifwemeetdifficulties,weshouldsmile.Ifwemeetdifficulties,weshouldsmile,too.Let'ssmiletolife!

1.第一檔（13-15分）

信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤。

2.第二檔（10-12分）

信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量錯誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。3.第三檔（7-9分）

能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，但句子基本可讀。

4.第四檔（4-6分）

只能傳遞少量信息，表達(dá)不通順，只有少量句子可讀。

5.第五檔（1-3分）

只能傳遞個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。

評分檔次Structure（結(jié)構(gòu)）Isthearticledividedintoparts?Doesthepassagehavetopicsentences?Content（內(nèi)容）Areallkeypointsmentioned?Arethereanywriter’sideas?LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns?Assessment(Tips)

Asmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.Asmileislikethesunshineinwinter.Itwarmsourheartsandhelpsusgetonwellwitheachother.Apersonwhooftensmilesusuallybringsgoodluck.What’smore,smilescangiveusconfidence.WhenIwasyoung,Iwasveryshy.Iwasafraidtospeakinpublic.OnedayIneededtogiveaspeechinmyEnglishclass.IwassofrightenedthatIdidbadlyatthebeginning.ButwhenIsawabigsmileonmyteacher'sface,Igotmoreandmoreconfident.FinallyImadeit.Smilesareveryhelpfulinourlives.Weshouldoftenkeepsmilesonourfaces.Ifwearehappy,wesmile.Ifwemeetdifficulties,weshouldsmile.Let'ssmiletolife!Sample2Part1Part2Part3

Asmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.Asmileislikethesunshineinwinter.Itwarmsourheartsandhelpsusgetonwellwitheachother.Apersonwhooftensmilesusuallybringsgoodluck.What’smore,smilescangiveusconfidence.WhenIwasyoung,Iwasveryshy.Iwasafraidtospeakinpublic.OnedayIneededtogiveaspeechinmyEnglishclass.IwassofrightenedthatIdidbadlyatthebegining.ButwhenIsawabigsmileonmyteacher'sface,Igotmoreandmoreconfident.FinallyImadeit.Smilesareveryhelpfulinourlives.Weshouldoftenkeepsmilesonourfaces.Ifwearehappy,wesmile.Ifwemeetdifficulties,weshouldsmile.Let'ssmiletolife!Sample2

Asmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.Asmileislikethesunshineinwinter.Itwarmsourheartsandhelpsusgetonwellwitheachother.Apersonwhooftensmilesusuallybringsgoodluck.What’smore,smilescangiveusconfidence.WhenIwasyoung,Iwasveryshy.Iwasafraidtospeakinpublic.OnedayIneededtogiveaspeechinmyEnglishclass.IwassofrightenedthatIdidbadlyatthebegining.ButwhenIsawabigsmileonmyteacher'sface,Igotmoreandmoreconfident.FinallyImadeit.Smilesareveryhelpfulinourlives.Weshouldoftenkeepsmilesonourfaces.Ifwearehappy,wesmile.Ifwemeetdifficulties,weshouldsmile.Let'ssmiletolife!Sample2表原因表轉(zhuǎn)折表順序表舉例表總結(jié)表讓步表遞進(jìn)what’s

more，besides;

however,but

；…firstly,

...

secondly,…then

...

finally；…

suchas;forexample；…

although,

even

though,

though;

…

because,

because

of；…

inaword;allinall；…

…Linkingwords

Asmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.Asmileislikethesunshineinwinter.Itwarmsourheartsandhelpsusgetonwellwitheachother.Apersonwhooftensmilesusuallybringsgoodluck.What’smore,smilescangiveusconfidence.WhenIwasyoung,Iwasveryshy.Iwasafraidtospeakinpublic.OnedayIneededtogiveaspeechinmyEnglishclass.IwassofrightenedthatIdidbadlyatthebegining.ButwhenIsawabigsmileonmyteacher'sface,Igotmoreandmoreconfident.FinallyImadeit.Smilesareveryhelpfulinourlives.Weshouldoftenkeepsmilesonourfaces.Ifwearehappy,wesmile.Ifwemeetdifficulties,weshouldsmile.Let'ssmiletolife!Sample23a

在成長的道路上,你一定經(jīng)歷過各種各樣的事情，讓你開心或是難過。請以“MyExperience”為題,講述讓你開心或是難過的經(jīng)歷，這個(gè)經(jīng)歷給你帶來的怎樣的感受及原因，和你從中獲得的啟示。

1短文中應(yīng)包括所給的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；

2短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名。

3詞數(shù)不得少于80。PracticeMyExperienceWhathappened?Howdiditmakeyoufeel?Why?Whatdidyoulearnfromtheexperience?Usethefollowingideastohelpyouwinning/losingacompetitiongettinggood/badgradesonanexamperformingsomethingwell/badlyinfrontofabiggroupofpeoplegettingintoa