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讀后續(xù)寫地窖脫險(xiǎn)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。TheChristmasholidayswerefastapproaching,andwehadorderedmanygiftsonline.So,whenthedoorbellrang,Iwassuresomeofthepackageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulcalicokitten(雜色貓)sittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasnowaythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere??Wefiguredthatsomeonehadfoundthekittensomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.Theyaccuratelyguessedwewouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.?Myhusbandcalledherourlittleangel,sowenamedheraccordingly.Shehadacalmaura(氣質(zhì))aboutherasshewalkedstraightintoourhomeandhearts,fittinginperfectly.Itseemedasifshewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisbighousewithus.Shewasanoldsoulandturnedouttobetheperfectcompanion.Alwaysbymyside,shewasmorelikeapuppythanakitten.Wisebeyondheryears,sheenjoyedwanderingthroughthetunnelsandmysteriousroomsasmuchasIdid,butwithmuchlessfear.Angelicathecalicowascourageous.?So,Itookapagefromherbookanddecidedtobebrave,too.Therewasanundergroundstonecellar(地窖)Ihadbeeneagertoexplore.Theonlywayinwasdownarickety(搖晃的)laddertoitsmurkydepths.Iguesseditwasanoldrootcellar,probablytwelvefeetdeep.?IhadpromisedmyhusbandthatIwouldn'texploredangerousareasunlessheorsomeoneelsewasaround.ThoughIknewIwasstretchingit,IfiguredthatAngelicawouldcountasmycompanion.Iwasreadytoexplorethiscellar,andsowasshe.?Iequippedmyselfwithagoodflashlightandwarmclothes,andcarefullystarteddownthericketyladderwhileAngelicawaslookingdownatmefromabove.FaintcrackandsuddencrashwerewhatIcouldremember.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1:Iwokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor.Para2:Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,wasmylasthope.參考范文1:Iwokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor.DizzinesssweptovermeasIfiguredoutthatIhadtoppledofftheladderandfallenbackfirsttothecellarground.Myrightfootfeltnumbandeverypartofmybodyachedbadly.Thingsgotworsewhentheoldrootcellarfloateditsmustydampnesstomynose.Wasitmydoomsday?Tryinghardtogetridofthisthought,Iusedallmymighttoscreamoutloud“Help!Help!”.Noluck!Feelingfreezingcoldbothphysicallyandmentally,Ifumbledformyclothesandaccidentallyfelttheflashlight,whichagainflaredmyfaithtogoout.However,itfailedmeasalways—theflashlightdidn’tworkduetothehardcrashagainsttheground.Indesperation,Idecidedtogiveintomyfatewhentherecameafaintpurr.Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,wasmylasthope.Justforaglimmerofhope,Ilookeduptotheventofthecellar,delightedtofindmydearAngelicastoodstillalertly,pokingherheadoutandstaringatmefromabove.“Angelica,gofindJack!”Atmyrequest,thecalico-coloredfursoondisappearedfrommysight.Itwasn’tlongbeforeIheardthehurriedapproachingfootsteps.Eventually,Iwasrescued!AccordingtoJack,itwasAngelicawhokeptpawingatthedoortogethisattentionandnavigatedhimtowhereIwas.Spontaneously,Ipulledherclosertomychest,extremelygratefulforthisspecialChristmasgiftwhowasdestinedtobeourcompanionandfamilymember.參考范文2:Iwokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor.Myheadwaspounding,andIcouldn’tseemtofocusonmythoughts.Ihadlostmyfooting/missedasteponthethirdrung(第三級(jí)階梯),andtheladderhadgivenaway,sendingmecrashingtotheground.Thepaininmyarmwasintense,andIknewitwasbroken.Iwastrapped,alone,inthedarkcellarwithnowaytoclimbout.Icalledoutforhelp,butmyvoiceechoedbacktome,hollowandempty.Despairwasabouttoswallowmewhentherecameafaintbutfamiliarmew.Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,wasmylasthope.Iprayedthatshewouldrealizesomethingwaswrongandcometomyrescue.Herfearlessnatureandloyaltygavemeaglimmerofhope.Lyinginthedarkness,Itriedtocalmmybreathingandlistenedforanyothersoundfromabove.Timestoodstilltillhurriedfootstepsbrokethedeadsilence.ItwasAngelicaandmyhusband!Shehadseeminglysensedmysituationandledmyhusbandherebypullinghispantwithunremittingefforts.Strokinghersoftfur,Iwasconvincedthattheangelwasindeedrightbymyside.試題呈現(xiàn):閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Missywasabsolutelymybestfriendinthewholeworld.Wehadknowneachothersincefirstgrade,andweliterallydideverythingtogether.Wefrequentlyvisitedeachother’shomes,wekneweachother’sfamiliesliketheywereourown.Theinterestingthingaboutourrelationship,howeverthefactwasthattheolderwegot,themoreourvaluesseemedtodiffer.Westillenjoyedalotofthesamethings,butIwasabitmoresettledwhileshelovedbeingassociatedwithpopularpeopleandthings.
Althoughshewasbasicallyagoodperson,shehadnoproblemwithforcingthingstogoherway.Perhapsthisiswhyitseemedthatherfamilyactuallytrustedmemorethantheytrustedher.So,onthedaywhenMissyshowedupatmyhousewithahugedent(凹痕)
inherfather’scar,Iknewthatwewereinforatroublesometime.Shehadbangedthecarintoatreewhileoutthatday,andsheknewherfatherwasgoingtohaveanexplanation.Soshestoppedbymyhouseinorderto
makeupastory
thatwouldlessenherfather’srage.Missydecidedtotellhimthatwhileinaparkinglot,someonemusthave
backedintothecar
anddentedit.Lookingatthedentwithsomecrashedleavesandbark(樹(shù)皮)
stillstickingthere,Iattemptedtoperish(打消)
herthought.“Idon’tthinkyourfatherwill
buy
it.”
“Don’tworry,”sheinsisted,
“evenifmydaddoesn’ttrustme,he’lltrustyou.”Myrolewastoconfirmforher.NowkeepinmindthatI
hadstrongobjectionsto
lyingandIwantedabsolutelynothingtodowiththesituation.Ilovedherparentsjustlikemyown,andIdidnotwanttobeapartytothisliethatMissywascreating.Nevertheless,aftermuchrequestandageneralquestioningofmyloyaltytoourfriendship,IdecidedthattheleastIcoulddowastoactasasilentwitness.Thatway,Iwasn’tactuallylying;Ijustwasn’ttellingthefulltruth.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Anhourorsolater,wepresentedMissy’sfatherwiththecarandtheinquirybegan.Herfatherlookedatmewithgreatdisbelief.文本關(guān)鍵詞:1.lying-truth
2.friendship-relstionship
3.honesty
4.trust
5.silent-silence下水文:107+119Anhourorsolater,wepresentedMissy’sfatherwiththecarandtheinquiry
began.
Heapproachedthecarandhadacloselookatthedent,afterwhichhethrewaquestioninglookatSissy,obviouslydemandinganexplanation.Withwhattosaywellinmind,shepouredouthermade-upstoryinaseeminglyhonestvoice.Sheevensignalledmetoconfirmherstatementtoherfather,whichimmediatelyinvitedhisattention.Heturnedtome,lookingintomyeyes,expecting.Iwantedtodisclosethewholething,butthepromiseIhadmadetoSissyheldmeback.Afteramomentofsilenceandinnerstruggle,Isimplynoddedyes,notdaringtolookuptomeethiseye.Herfatherlookedatmewithgreatdisbelief.
Thedisbeliefwrittenonhisfaceandinhiseyesmademefeelthousandsofbutterfliesinmystomach.HowIregrettedmakingsuchastupidpromisetoSissy,notonlygoingagainstmyprincipleofhonesty,butalsounderminingthetrustSissy’sfamilyhadinme.Embarrassingairfilledeverycorneroftheroom,whichmadebothSissyandmesufferbitterly.Nolongerabletostandtheannoyanceanddisbeliefinherfather’sburningeyes,Sissyfinallybrokedownandtearfullyadmittedherlying.Atthis,Iheavedasighofrelief.ButwhetherSissywouldlearnalessonfromthisandourfriendshipwouldlastandhisfatherwouldstilltrustme,Ihadnoidea.參考范文:83+104Anhourorsolater,wepresentedMissy’sfatherwiththecarandtheinquiry
began.Underabarrageofinquiries,Missyrecappedherconcoctedstoryunhurriedly,whileIstoodthereinsilentagreement.AfterMissyfinished
herseeminglyperfectstatement,herfatherraisedhiseyebrowsandturnedtome,waitingformyproof.However,onceagain,Ichosesilenceunderhisscrutinizingeyeswithmyheartpoundingviolently.Suddenly,hewalkedovertothedentedareaforacloserinspection.ItwasatthatpointthatpiecesofbarkfromthetreethatMissyhadhitfellout.Herfatherlookedatmewithgreatdisbelief.Anenormoussenseofguiltroseupinmeashiscoldeyesseemedtoproclaimmeasthe“guilty”bystander.IwassoflusteredthatIwantedtoexplainbutwasinterruptedbyhisharshwords,“Youguysreallyfailedme!Especially...”Insteadofcontinuinghisreproach,hetookadeepbreathandturnedhisbackonme.Itdawnedonmethatthepreciousbutfragiletrusthadbeensmashedbymysilence.Infact,theprocessofhowweapologizedtomakeamendswasjustablur,butthebitterlessonofbeingasilentaccomplicewas
brandedonmymemory.考場(chǎng)優(yōu)秀作品:Anhourorsolater,wepresentedMissy'sfatherwiththecarandtheinquirybegan.Thoughutterlyreluctant,IforcedmyselftonarratethestoryMissyhadmadeup,includingthe“unexpected"
scrouge
andheraskingmeforhelp.InitiallyMissy’sfatherstaredatherskepticallyeyes,glintingwithconfusion.Butthemomenthesethiseyesonme,thoseconfusionweregushedawayLikewaterintoaplughole.Hepattedmyshoulderandsaidgently,“Itrustyouandyounevertelllie."Withthesewords
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