基礎(chǔ)寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Criteria

MarksContent（內(nèi)容）５４３２１(是否包括所有提示要點,是否用5句話表達全文）Language（語言）８７６５４３２１０

(觀點表達是否清晰、明確，句子是否得當(dāng))

Coherence（連貫）２１０（是否用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，副詞，短語來銜接句子）第一種：

要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。

1．

有一些人認(rèn)為……2．

另一些人認(rèn)為……3．

我的看法……如何寫好正反觀點的文章？Writingstructure

--Howtowriteanessay(議論短文)(Inmyopinion，Ithink---/Asforme,Ithink---/Personally,Ithink---.)(Therearedifferentopinionsaboutwhether---.)

(Somepeoplethinkthat---.What’smore/Moreover---.

However,otherpeopleholdtheoppositeopinionthat---.andworsestill---.)Thethemeoftheessay(陳述議論的主題)Opinion1Opinion2Reasons1,2Reasons1,2Personalopinion注意事項：①條理要清晰，觀點明確；②文章必須包括所有提示要點，同時切記用5句連篇；③運用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，副詞，短語等來銜接句子；④注意時態(tài)，議論文形式還是以現(xiàn)在時為主.⑤對立觀點式議論短文的基礎(chǔ)寫作模板：

Therearedifferentopinionsaboutwhether______.Somepeoplethinkthat_____________.What’smore/Moreover/Furthermore______.However,othersholdtheoppositeopinionthat_____,andworsestill，________.Asforme/Inmyopinion/Personally,Ithinkthat___________.表示不同觀點的套語總起:

Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Peoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowards…

Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.

1.學(xué)會使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞羅列觀點時常用的過渡詞:1.Firstly…;Secondly…;Thirdly…;2.Besides…;Inaddition…;3.What’smore…;Moreover;Furthermore;4.Atlast;Finally;Eventually;表轉(zhuǎn)折時常用過渡詞\句1.Ontheotherhand;2.However;3.Onthecontrary;4.Everycoinhastwosides二、學(xué)會使用正確的句型陳述觀點:Somepeoplesaystudentsshould…Somepeoplearefortheideathat…Somepeopleholdtheviewthat…Somepeoplesaystudentsshouldn't…Somepeopleareagainsttheideathat…3.Somepeopledon’tagree,theythink…正方觀點陳述常用句型:反方正方觀點陳述常用句型:不同觀點之間的銜接:

Onthecontrary,othersholdadifferentview.Ontheotherhand,peopleobjecttothereasonthat….對比觀點題型常用句型：(綜合)Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.Somepeoplethinkthat…whileothersthinkthat…Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof/that…whileothersthink…inthefollowingreason.First,…,Secondly(besides),…Thirdly(finally).Frommypointofview,/Inmyopinion,/Asforme,(我的觀點)第二種：

給出一個觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點Somepeoplebelievethat①----------------（觀點一）.Forexample,theythink②-----------------（舉例說明）．Anditwillbringthem③---------------(為他們帶來的好處).Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤---------(反對的理由之二)．FromwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥-----(我對文章所討論主題的看法)．TaskWriting

?人們對網(wǎng)上購物持有不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購物的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點，并表達你的看法。贊成的理由反對的理由自己的看法1

網(wǎng)上購物更方便，省時2

人們可以在網(wǎng)上買到各種各樣的東西，而且價格也較便宜.3是一種時尚而新潮的購物方式1無法預(yù)先體驗商品2人們?nèi)菀咨袭?dāng)受騙，因為很難確保商品的質(zhì)量[寫作內(nèi)容]1文章必須包括所有提示要點,但不要逐條譯成英語;2請根據(jù)以上提示，最后談?wù)勀愕挠^點；[寫作要求]

只能用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。詞匯:商品:

goods

體驗:

experience

預(yù)先：inadvance

上當(dāng)受騙:becheated1網(wǎng)上購物更方便，省時.2人們可以在網(wǎng)上買到各種各樣的東西，而且價格也較便宜.3是一種時尚而新潮的購物方式.4無法預(yù)先體驗商品.5人們?nèi)菀咨袭?dāng)受騙,因為很難確保商品的質(zhì)量.1.句子翻譯：Shoppingonlineismoreconvenientanditcanhelppeopletosavemuchtime.

PeoplecanbuyallkindsofthingsatalowerpriceontheInternet.Itisafashionableandnewwayofshopping.

Peoplecan’texperiencethegoodsinadvance.Peopleareeasytobecheated,becauseitisdifficulttomakesureof/guaranteethequalityofgoods.參考范文：

Therearedifferentopinionsaboutwhetherpeopleshouldgoshoppingonline.Somepeoplethinkthat

shoppingonlineismoreconvenientanditcanhelppeopletosavemuchtimeandthatpeoplecanshopforavarietyofthingsatalowerpriceontheInternet.What’smore,

Itisafashionableandnewwayofshopping.However,othersholdtheoppositeopinionthat

peoplecan’texperiencethegoodsinadvance，andworse

stilltheyareeasytobecheated,becauseitisdifficulttomakesureof/guarantee

thequalityofthegoods.Asforme,

Ithinkthatpeoplecouldbemoreenjoyablewhenshoppingonlinecarefully.

Let'stry!寫作訓(xùn)練：[寫作內(nèi)容]根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文。介紹正反兩方觀點；表達自己的看法。[寫作要求]只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容；已給出的句子不包括在五句話中；不要逐字逐句翻譯所給信息。[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。贊成的理由：反對的理由：你的看法廣交朋友，可自由表達思想，利于外語學(xué)習(xí)浪費時間，影響學(xué)習(xí)，可能上當(dāng)受騙？人們對于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。以下是正反兩方所持觀點。Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Somepeoplesayyes.

Theinternethelpsusmakefriendsbychattingonlinesothatstudentscanexpresstheirfeelingsandopinionsmorefreely,andevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.Others,

however,

thinkstudentsshouldnot.Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy;besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.Itismyopinion

that

studentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.近幾年，“考生該不該復(fù)讀？”這一話題一直為社會各界所關(guān)注。下表是某班同學(xué)就此問題的討論結(jié)果，請你給某英文報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論的情況,并寫出你的觀點．多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為少數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為1.不該復(fù)讀2.對于應(yīng)屆生不公平3.增加家庭經(jīng)濟負(fù)擔(dān)4.精神壓力大，易出問題1.應(yīng)該復(fù)讀2.可以考上理想的大學(xué)3.上何種大學(xué)是人生重要的轉(zhuǎn)折點，直接影響將來的就業(yè)Deareditor,

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhether

studentsshouldretakeclassesafterfailingtheentranceexamination.

Mostofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofretakingclasses.Theythinkitisunfairforthestudentswhotaketheexamforthefirsttime.Besides,italsoaddstothefamilyburden.What’smore,theyaredifferentfromthosetakingtheexamforthefirsttime,fortheyhavefailedonce.So,theyhavemuchmorementalpressureandthereisoftensomethingwrongwithmanyofthem.

Ontheotherhand,

somethinkthatitcanbedonebecausethroughone-yearhardwork,theycangetachancetoentertheirsatisfactoryuniversity.Aboveall,whatkindoftheuniversitytoenterwilldirectlyaffectstheirfutureemployment.

Inmyopinion,everyonecanbesuccessfulinlifesolongashetrieshisbest,whetherornothecangotocollege.

Yourstruly, LiHua據(jù)報道，一位１２歲的少年救起了一名落水兒童，此事在當(dāng)?shù)匾鹆藦娏曳错懀惆嗤瑢W(xué)就“少年見義勇為行為是否應(yīng)該提倡”為主題展開了討論．請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息寫一篇短文，客觀的介紹討論情況并說明你的觀點．有些同學(xué)贊成有些同學(xué)反對１.見義勇為是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，應(yīng)給予鼓勵；２.會鼓勵更多的英雄出現(xiàn)；３.促使社會變得更美好．１.少年的行為不理智；２.少年很有可能犧牲自己的生命；３.用其他方法來救這個兒童，如丟塊木頭給落水兒童，喊大人幫忙．寫前熱身：翻譯下列短語和句子：１.見義勇為２.中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德３.使．．．變得更美好鼓勵某人做某事４.某人做某事不理智５.少年很有可能犧牲自己的生命．６.我們可以用其他方法來做這件事．fightforajustcause

thetraditionalvirtuesoftheChinesepeopleItisunwiseforsbtodosthItislikely/possiblethat…Wecandoitinotherways.make…morebeautifulencouragesb.todosth.

Ourclassheldadiscussiononwhetherteenagersshouldbeencouragedto