Unit4InventionsWriting假設(shè)你是李華，上周五你的發(fā)明在“深圳小發(fā)明展”上獲獎(jiǎng)。你的英國(guó)筆友Hans對(duì)你的發(fā)明很感興趣，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示給他寫一封郵件。參考詞匯：深圳小發(fā)明展ShenzhenMini-InventionExhibition注意：1.詞數(shù)為80左右;2.可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息;3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱;4.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearHans，Iamhappytosharesomethingaboutmyinvention.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Myinvention，asmartplantpot，wonanawardatShenzhenMini-InventionExhibitionlastFriday.Itwassuchanamazingexperience.

Mysmartplantpotisgreen，withasmallsensorandawatertank.Itcanchecksoilmoistureandwaterplantsautomatically.Itsworkdependsonsolarpower，soitsaveselectricity.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaWithoutdoubt，itwillhelpbusypeoplekeepplantsalive.Inthefuture，itmayconnecttophones，lettinguserscheckplantsanytime.

I'msoexcitedandproudofthisexperience.Whatdoyouthinkofmyinvention？【寫作評(píng)價(jià)】分項(xiàng)自評(píng)分互評(píng)分老師評(píng)分內(nèi)容分布

(8分)1.描述獲獎(jiǎng)經(jīng)歷(2分)2.介紹發(fā)明(5分)3.分享感受(1分)文體結(jié)構(gòu)和

特征(3分)1.文體特征(1分)2.結(jié)構(gòu)完整(1分)3.邏輯清晰，銜接自然(1分)語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量

(3分)第一檔：表達(dá)自然得體，用詞準(zhǔn)