2023年12月大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)真題作文題目及參考答案一、真題題目（三套全）（一）第一套：“濃縮的就是精華”的思考有人說(shuō)，園林是自然山水的濃縮，縮寫(xiě)讀物是原著的濃縮，博物館是歷史文化的濃縮……人們傾向于認(rèn)為“濃縮的就是精華”，對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)你怎么看？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識(shí)和思考。要求：1.不少于120詞；2.思路清晰，論證充分；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。（二）第二套：對(duì)“重要的東西早已提及”的看法有人說(shuō)，所有重要的東西在很早以前就提到過(guò)了。你是否認(rèn)同這一觀點(diǎn)？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識(shí)和思考。要求：1.不少于120詞；2.思路清晰，論證充分；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。（三）第三套：綜合已有知識(shí)與創(chuàng)新的關(guān)系對(duì)已有知識(shí)的綜合，是創(chuàng)新嗎？請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇文章，談?wù)勀銓?duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題的認(rèn)識(shí)和思考。要求：1.不少于120詞；2.思路清晰，論證充分；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。二、參考答案與范文解析（一）第一套：“濃縮的就是精華”的思考高分范文Thesaying"concentrationistheessence"hasgainedwideacceptanceduetoitsreflectioninvariousfields.Landscapegardensdistillthebeautyofnaturalmountainsandriversintolimitedspaces,whileabridgedbooksextractcoreplotsfromlengthyoriginals,makingknowledgemoreaccessible.Suchconcentrationindeedhelpspeoplegraspkeyinformationefficientlyinafast-pacedsociety.However,weshouldalsorecognizeitslimitations.Thevalueofmanythingsliesnotonlyintheircorecontentbutalsointhedetailsandprocesses.Amuseummayshowcaseculturalrelicsashistorical濃縮，butitcannotfullyconveythesocialcontextandcraftsmanshipbehindtheircreation.Similarly,abridgedclassicsoftenlosetheliterarynuancesthatmaketheoriginalstimeless.Inconclusion,concentrationcanserveasausefultoolforquickunderstanding,butitshouldnotreplacetheexperienceofthecompleteversion.Weneedtobalancetheconvenienceofconcentrationwiththedepthofcomprehensiveexplorationtotrulyappreciatetheessenceofthings.核心解析結(jié)構(gòu)邏輯：采用“肯定合理性—指出局限性—總結(jié)平衡觀”的三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，符合議論文“辯證分析”的高分要求。亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)：o（提煉為）、literarynuances（文學(xué)韻味）、balance...with...（平衡……與……）等短語(yǔ)提升語(yǔ)言質(zhì)感。論證素材：結(jié)合園林、縮寫(xiě)讀物、博物館三類典型案例，貼合題目提示且論據(jù)具體，增強(qiáng)說(shuō)服力。（二）第二套：對(duì)“重要的東西早已提及”的看法高分范文Theclaimthat"allimportantthingswerementionedlongago"holdssometruthwhenwelookathumancivilization.Corevalueslikehonesty,kindness,andjusticehavebeenemphasizedbyancientphilosophersfromConfuciustoSocrates.Similarly,fundamentalscientificprinciplessuchasthelawofgravitybuiltthefoundationofmodernphysicscenturiesago.Yetthisviewignorestheprogressofhumansociety.Manycriticaldiscoveriesandconceptsemergedinrecenttimes.Thetheoryofrelativity,whichreshapedourunderstandingoftheuniverse,wasproposedjustoveracenturyago.Inthedigitalage,conceptslikeartificialintelligenceethicsandsustainabledevelopmenthavebecomeincreasinglyimportant,thoughtheywereunheardofinancienttimes.Tosumup,whileancientwisdomlaidthegroundworkforimportantvaluesandprinciples,newchallengesanddevelopmentscontinuetogivebirthtonew"importantthings."Weshouldrespecttraditionalwisdomwhileembracingnewinsightstoadvancesociety.核心解析立意角度：通過(guò)“傳統(tǒng)智慧奠基—現(xiàn)代發(fā)展補(bǔ)新”的對(duì)比論證，避免片面認(rèn)同或否定，體現(xiàn)思維深度。素材選擇：涵蓋哲學(xué)、科學(xué)、科技倫理等多領(lǐng)域，從孔子到人工智能，時(shí)空跨度大，展現(xiàn)知識(shí)廣度。句式變化：采用“yet”“similarly”等連接詞，結(jié)合讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，使行文流暢且邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。（三）第三套：綜合已有知識(shí)與創(chuàng)新的關(guān)系高分范文Therelationshipbetweensynthesizingexistingknowledgeandinnovationhaslongbeendebated.Inmyview,synthesizingexistingknowledgeisnotonlyaformofinnovationbutalsoacrucialfoundationforit.Manygroundbreakingachievementsstemfromintegratingscatteredtheoriesintoasystematicframework.Forexample,thedevelopmentofmodernmedicinereliesonsynthesizingknowledgefrombiology,chemistry,andphysics.Doctorscombineanatomicalresearchwithpharmaceuticalsciencetocreatenewtreatmentmethods.Similarly,海南's"underwaterdatacenter"project,amodeloftechnologicalinnovation,integratesmarineengineering,renewableenergy,anddigitaltechnology—allbuiltonexistingscientificachievements.Itisworthnotingthatsynthesisisnotmererepetition.Trueinnovationrequirescriticalthinkingtoidentifyconnectionsbetweendifferentfieldsandapplythemtonewscenarios.Withoutsynthesizingexistingknowledge,innovationwouldbelikebuildingacastleintheair.Inconclusion,synthesizingexistingknowledgeisanessentialpartofinnovation.Itprovidesthenecessarybasisforcreatingnewideasandtechnologiesthatdrivesocialprogress.核心解析觀點(diǎn)明確：開(kāi)篇即亮明“綜合是創(chuàng)新的基礎(chǔ)與重要形式”的核心論點(diǎn)，立場(chǎng)清晰?，F(xiàn)實(shí)素材：引用海南海底智算中心案例，將抽象的“知識(shí)綜合”與具體科技創(chuàng)新結(jié)合，增強(qiáng)時(shí)代感。邏輯遞進(jìn)：從“是什么”（綜合是創(chuàng)新基礎(chǔ)）到“為什么”（舉例論證）再到“怎么做”（需批判性思維），層層深入。三、共性寫(xiě)作技巧與備考建議（一）結(jié)構(gòu)模板（適用于所有議論文題型）開(kāi)頭段（3句公式）：引出話題（Somepeoplearguethat...）+亮明觀點(diǎn)（Frommyperspective...）+總述理由（Thisisbecause...）。主體段（論證邏輯）：分論點(diǎn)1+案例支撐；分論點(diǎn)2+對(duì)比補(bǔ)充（However/Meanwhile...）。結(jié)尾段（升華公式）：總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)（Inconclusion...）+提出啟示（Weshould...）。（二）高分素材積累方向經(jīng)典