Unit1LookitupSection5Writing寫作優(yōu)質(zhì)課

滬教版（2024）八年級上Learningobjectives1LeadinPre-writing3ReadforwritingWhile-writing5SummaryAssessment7Homework2468Bytheendofthelesson,Iwillbeableto...1234learntostructureanencyclopaediaentryproperly.collectandorganizefactualinformationaboutanotableperson.writeanencyclopaediaentryusingfacts,notopinions.applytargetwordsandexpressionsfromtheunitinwriting.00LearningobjectivesLeadinPre-writingWritinganencyclopaediaentryWritingWearecallingforarticlesaboutfamouspeoplearoundtheworld.Writeanencyclopaediaentryandsendittous.OnlineEncyclopaediaforTeensPre-Writing02二一教育BasicinformationyearofbirthanddeathMainachievementshybridriceresearchAwardsandtitlesMedaloftheRepublicTipEncyclopaediaentriesshouldcontainfactsinsteadofopinions.YuanLongpingPre-writing03二一教育BasicinformationyearofbirthanddeathMainachievementshybridriceresearchAwardsandtitlesMedaloftheRepublicWriting042Whodoyouadmire?Findinformationaboutthispersonandwriteanencyclopaediaentry.Step1PlanDrawyourownmindmap.Step2WriteWriteanencyclopaediaentryaboutthepersonyouadmire.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________05BasicinformationyearofbirthanddeathMainachievementsAwardsandtitlesQianXuesengWritingBodyEndingBeginning1.Basicinformation(Name,identity...)2.LifetimeImportantstory3.AchievementsEvaluation

Structure

引出人物---簡要介紹基本信息如生平，教育，職業(yè)等介紹人物主要經(jīng)歷---挑比較重要的事跡進(jìn)行描寫，貢獻(xiàn)或成就等人物成就以及評價---人格，貢獻(xiàn)，閃光點(diǎn)注意：運(yùn)用正確的時態(tài)。評價人物等常用

，

而描寫人物的出生地、教育背景、

經(jīng)歷、事跡時常用____________

一般現(xiàn)在時一般過去時人物介紹的寫作要點(diǎn)可分為三部分：WritingWriting【寫作指導(dǎo)】1.審題本篇書面表達(dá)要求介紹科學(xué)家錢學(xué)森。主題：人物類介紹體裁：anencyclopaediaentry時態(tài)：以一般過去時為主人稱：以第三人稱為主Writing行文布局第一段：開頭。引入寫作主題，說明自己最喜歡的科學(xué)家是錢學(xué)森，總體介紹。第二段：主體。具體介紹科學(xué)家錢學(xué)森的生平經(jīng)歷及成就第三段：結(jié)尾。給出評價WritingStep1審題時態(tài):V-ed

人稱:Hehimhis

文體:anencyclopaediaentryWritingStep2列要點(diǎn)1.

開頭簡介：

oneofthegreatest/mostfamous....

hisgreatachievementin...2.

生平

：wasbornon(某天)showedgreatinterest/intelligencein...graduatedfrom....(從...畢業(yè))showedgreatperseverance3.

成就

：

gained得到alotofexperience/prizes.madegreat/significantcontributions4.

評價/看法：is

considered

to被認(rèn)為dedication...admirablesuch...that...WritingStep3連框架(Firstofall,Besideds,Inaddition...)Whenhewasachild....Ashegrewolder...AfterhegraduatedStep4加細(xì)節(jié),加梯度，查錯誤每個點(diǎn)適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充Writing

Agreatscientist--QianXuesen

Amongthegreatscientists,IlikeQianXuesenbest.Heiswell-knownforhisgreatachievementinChina'saerospaceindustry.

Hewasborn

onDecember11,1911inShanghai.Ashegrewolder,heshowedgreatintelligenceinMaths.AfterhegraduatedfromNationalChiaoTungUniversity,hewenttoAmericaforfurthereducationin1935.QianXuesenreturnedtoChinain1955afterovercominglotsofdifficulties.

Hardworkpaidoff.Hemadegreat/significantcontributionsto

China’saerospaceindustry,andwasknownasthe“FatherofChineseAerospace”.

QianXuesenissuchagreatscientistthateveryoneinChinawillnotforgethim.Hisperseverance毅力anddedication奉獻(xiàn)

makehimarolemodelformanyyoungpeople.Weshouldlearnfromhim.WritingWritingSummary06二一教育出生于：_____________表現(xiàn)出極大的興趣：____________在……方面有天賦：_______________beborninshow

greatinterestinbetalentedin...1.引出人物：---簡單介紹人物背景(出生日期/出生地+職業(yè)/興趣)072.介紹人物主要經(jīng)歷做…工作：____________把…奉獻(xiàn)給…：___________________起重要作用：_______________堅(jiān)定的決心__________________在…獲得巨大的成功：___________________下定決心做某事：_____________________devoteoneselfto...playaimportantroleinstrongwillachievegreatsuccessin...makeupone’smindtodoSummaryworkas3.人物評價及對作者的影響---重要詞匯做出巨大貢獻(xiàn)：_________________________作為……而聞名：__________________樹立好榜樣：_________________

值得我們尊重：_________________________________makegreatcontributionstobeknown/famousassetagoodexampledeserveourrespectWriting1.He/Sheputhis/herheartinto…andmadegreatcontributionsto…他/她全心全意投入…,并為…做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)…2.Asagreat...，he/shewillberememberedbyusforever.作為一個偉大的……，他/她將被我們永遠(yuǎn)銘記。3.Havingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.他為我們樹立了一個偉大的榜樣，是一個非常優(yōu)秀的人，值得我們欽佩和尊重Writing下面內(nèi)容是從《百科全書》上摘取的關(guān)于中國科學(xué)家屠呦呦的介紹，請你根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一段文章介紹屠呦呦

?；拘畔ⅲ褐袊茖W(xué)家，1930年生于浙江寧波，至今在世

。成長背景：早年對中醫(yī)藥和化學(xué)極感興趣。一生致力于抗瘧疾藥物研究

。主要成就：發(fā)現(xiàn)青蒿素（artemisinin），有效治療全球瘧疾患者，讓中醫(yī)藥獲國際認(rèn)可

。榮譽(yù)與影響：獲“共和國勛章”（theMedaloftheRepublic），被譽(yù)為中醫(yī)藥抗瘧研究先驅(qū)

。PracticePractice

TuYouyouisaremarkablemedicalscientistinChina.Shewasbornin1930.Whenyoung,shewasdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChinesemedicineandchemistry.Fordecades,shefocusedonresearchingantimalarialdrugs.Finally,shediscoveredartemisinin.ThisdiscoverycaneffectivelytreatmalariapatientsallovertheworldandhelpstraditionalChinesemedicinegetmoreinternationalattention.TuYouyouhaswontheMedaloftheRepublic.SheisagreatpioneerinusingtraditionalChinesemedicineforantimalarialresearch.Herworksavesmillionsoflivesandinspiresmorepeopletoexploretrad