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寫”借景抒情、寓情于景是寫作中常用的手法。恰當?shù)谋尘皥鼍懊鑼懹欣谕苿庸适虑楣?jié)的發(fā)展，烘托人物的心理活動，給讀者身臨其境的感受。背景場景描寫要有全貌有細節(jié)，有全景有特寫，要點面結合，重點突出?？梢悦鑼懯录l(fā)生的時間、地點、環(huán)境等，也可以描寫人看到的景象或感受到的某種情緒。注意：環(huán)境描寫只是起畫龍點睛的作用，環(huán)境描寫不要寫太長，且環(huán)境描寫一定為你的內容服務，而不是為了看起來高大上。所以寫作的時候千萬不要本末倒置，寫一些無關緊要的套句或者環(huán)境描寫只會對情節(jié)起到反作用。Part1

環(huán)境描寫的語言技巧Skill1劉德華《冰雨》：冷冷的

冰雨

在我臉上

胡亂地

拍

形容詞

意象

介詞短語

副詞

動詞Theicyrainiswhippingmyfacemercilessly.adj+意象+特定動詞+副詞/介詞短語思維訓練1.Thewindblew.2.Thetreeswaved.3.Thesunshone.

思維訓練1.Thewindblew.Thegentlewarmwindblewsoftlyontheface.2.Thetreeswaved.3.Thesunshone.思維訓練1.Thewindblew.Thegentlewarmwindblewsoftlyontheface.2.Thetreeswaved.Thetallgreentreeswavedquietlyontheroadsides.3.Thesunshone.思維訓練1.Thewindblew.Thegentlewarmwindblewsoftlyontheface.2.Thetreeswaved.Thetallgreentreeswavedquietlyontheroadsides.3.Thesunshone.Themorningsunshoneonthegroundwarmlyandgently.blazing熾熱的glaring耀眼的shimmering閃爍的lingering逗留不去的weak微弱的sunsunlightsunshineshine

發(fā)光/照耀floodin

射進來kiss親吻burn燃燒bright明亮地dazzlingly燦爛/耀眼地lively充滿活力地likeanoven像烤箱一樣gentle/mild

溫柔/和的soft柔和的weak微弱的white/silvery

白/銀白的moonmoonlightshine發(fā)光glow發(fā)光weakly微弱地lightly輕輕地gently輕柔地softly輕柔地glittering閃閃發(fā)光的starstwinkle閃爍sparkle閃耀/爍glimmer發(fā)微光vividly生動地/活潑地quietly安靜地peacefully平靜地Skill2許嵩《斷橋殘雪》：我望著湖面，水面寒月如雪。Myeyesgazinguponthelake,thewaterglitteredinthemoonlight,coldasthewintersnow.寫景句+比喻/擬人思維訓練1.windTheicywindstartedhowling,_________________________________.2.

sunThemorningsunlightfloodedinthroughthecurtain,_______________________________________________________________________3.treeTalltreeslineduponbothsidesofthestreet,_____________________________________________________________________________likeasharpknifescratchingmyfacelikepiecesofgolddancingonthefloor.likesoldiersthrowinglongshadowsontheground.思維訓練4.cloudThewhitecloudshanglowinthesky,___________________________________________________________________________________5.rainThedreadfulrainwaspouringdown,____________________________________________________________________________________6.flowerTheflowersdottedthegarden,________________________________likepiecesofcottonsailingwiththewindlikemonstersbeatingwildlyagainstthewindows.likeelvesdancinggracefullyintheair.1.Thestarsareinthesky.2.Thetreeiswaving.3.Thestarssparkled.4.Thelastleafoftheautumnfellontheground.Thebrightstarsscatteredinthesky,likegemstwinklingbrilliantly.Thetreeswavedwildlyintheair,likeadrunkenmantremblingfromsidetoside.Thestarssparkledvividly,likenaughtychildrenlookingatuswithcuriosity.Thelastleafofautumnflutteredtotheground,likeadropofautumn’stear,meltingsilentlyinhisoverwhelmingsorrow.翻譯練習Skill3李宗盛《漂洋過海來看你》：在漫天風沙里望著你遠去，我竟悲傷的不能自已Withthesandalloverthesky,yourfamiliarfigurefadedaway,andafloodofgriefwelledupinmyheart,sweepingovermybody.寫景

+感受(無靈主語)arippleof+情感名詞runthroughsb’sheartaflood/waveof+情感名詞wellupinsbasenseof+情感名詞+creepoversb/creepontosbsb.wasimmersedin+情感名詞.思維訓練1.windTheicywindhowling,arippleoftensionranthroughhisheart.2.sunThemorningsunlightfloodinginthroughthecurtain,arippleofsatisfactionranthroughthetwins’heart.3.moonThesilverymoonglowinginthesky,arippleofgriefranthroughJane’sheart.思維訓練1.windTheicywindhowling,arippleoftensionranthroughhisheart.2.sunThemorningsunlightfloodinginthroughthecurtain,arippleofsatisfactionranthroughthetwins’heart.3.moonThesilverymoonglowinginthesky,arippleofgriefranthroughJane’sheart.思維訓練1.windTheicywindhowling,arippleoftensionranthroughhisheart.2.sunThemorningsunlightfloodinginthroughthecurtain,arippleofsatisfactionranthroughthetwins’heart.3.moonThesilverymoonglowinginthesky,arippleofgriefranthroughJane’sheart.思維訓練1.windTheicywindhowling,arippleoftensionranthroughhisheart.2.sunThemorningsunlightfloodinginthroughthecurtain,arippleofsatisfactionranthroughthetwins’heart.3.moonThesilverymoonglowinginthesky,arippleofgriefranthroughJane’sheart.思維訓練4.snowFeatherilysnowflakefallingfromthesky,Iwasimmersedindelight.5.rainHeavyrainbeatingdownonthestreet,Iwasimmersedinregret.6.crowdCrowdsofpeoplegatheringintotheclassroom,Iwasimmersedinawkwardness.思維訓練4.snowFeatherilysnowflakefallingfromthesky,Iwasimmersedindelight.5.rainHeavyrainbeatingdownonthestreet,Iwasimmersedinregret.6.crowdCrowdsofpeoplegatheringintotheclassroom,Iwasimmersedinawkwardness.思維訓練4.snowFeatherilysnowflakefallingfromthesky,Iwasimmersedindelight.5.rainHeavyrainbeatingdownonthestreet,

Iwasimmersedinregret.6.crowdCrowdsofpeoplegatheringintotheclassroom,

Iwasimmersedinawkwardness.思維訓練4.snowFeatherilysnowflakefallingfromthesky,Iwasimmersedindelight.5.rainHeavyrainbeatingdownonthestreet,

Iwasimmersedinregret.6.crowdCrowdsofpeoplegatheringintotheclassroom,Iwasimmersedinawkwardness.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature.Asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Part2

環(huán)境描寫的應用原則融“情”于景1.融“情感”于景：烘托氣氛，刻畫心理，體現(xiàn)情感2.融“情節(jié)”于景：推動情節(jié)發(fā)展Part2

環(huán)境描寫的應用原則融“情”于景1.融“情感”于景：烘托氣氛，刻畫心理，體現(xiàn)情感2.融“情節(jié)”于景：推動情節(jié)發(fā)展1.Thesunshonewarmlyontherunway,andthetreesglowedinthewarmsunlight,allofwhichwereencouragingDavidtocompletetherun.這一切都在鼓勵著David堅持完成跑步。2.Theleaveswereshimmering,theairwasfilledwithdelight,andeverythingaroundwascelebratingDavid’sbravery.周圍一切都在慶祝David的勇敢。3.ThewarmsunshoneonDavid’sface,thetreesswayedwiththewind,andthewholeforestapplaudedDavid’scourage.整座森林都為大衛(wèi)的勇氣而喝彩。4.Bathedinthewarmsunshine,thetreeswavedinthebreeze,sharingDavid’sdelightoffinishingthegame.分享著David完成比賽的喜悅。1.Thesunshonewarmlyontherunway,andthetreesglowedinthewarmsunlight,allofwhichwereencouragingDavidtocompletetherun.這一切都在鼓勵著David堅持完成跑步。2.Theleaveswereshimmering,theairwasfilledwithdelight,andeverythingaroundwascelebratingDavid’sbravery.周圍一切都在慶祝David的勇敢。3.ThewarmsunshoneonDavid’sface,thetreesswayedwiththewind,andthewholeforestapplaudedDavid’scourage.整座森林都為大衛(wèi)的勇氣而喝彩。4.Bathedinthewarmsunshine,thetreeswavedinthebreeze,sharingDavid’sdelightoffinishingthegame.分享著David完成比賽的喜悅。1.Thesunshonewarmlyontherunway,andthetreesglowedinthewarmsunlight,allofwhichwereencouragingDavidtocompletetherun.這一切都在鼓勵著David堅持完成跑步。2.Theleaveswereshimmering,theairwasfilledwithdelight,andeverythingaroundwascelebratingDavid’sbravery.周圍一切都在慶祝David的勇敢。3.ThewarmsunshoneonDavid’sface,thetreesswayedwiththewind,andthewholeforestapplaudedDavid’scourage.整座森林都為大衛(wèi)的勇氣而喝彩。4.Bathedinthewarmsunshine,thetreeswavedinthebreeze,sharingDavid’sdelightoffinishingthegame.分享著David完成比賽的喜悅。1.Thesunshonewarmlyontherunway,andthetreesglowedinthewarmsunlight,allofwhichwereencouragingDavidtocompletetherun.這一切都在鼓勵著David堅持完成跑步。2.Theleaveswereshimmering,theairwasfilledwithdelight,andeverythingaroundwascelebratingDavid’sbravery.周圍一切都在慶祝David的勇敢。3.ThewarmsunshoneonDavid’sface,thetreesswayedwiththewind,andthewholeforestapplaudedDavid’scourage.整座森林都為大衛(wèi)的勇氣而喝彩。4.Bathedinthewarmsunshine,thetreeswavedinthebreeze,sharingDavid’sdelightoffinishingthegame.分享著David完成比賽的喜悅。1.Thesunshonewarmlyontherunway,andthetreesglowedinthewarmsunlight,allofwhichwereencouragingDavidtocompletetherun.這一切都在鼓勵著David堅持完成跑步。2.Theleaveswereshimmering,theairwasfilledwithdelight,

andeverythingaroundwascelebratingDavid’sbravery.周圍一切都在慶祝David的勇敢。3.ThewarmsunshoneonDavid’sface,thetreesswayedwiththewind,

andthewholeforestapplaudedDavid’scourage.整座森林都為大衛(wèi)的勇氣而喝彩。4.Bathedinthewarmsunshine,thetreeswavedinthebreeze,sharingDavid’sdelightoffinishingthegame.分享著David完成比賽的喜悅。5.Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,hequickenedhissteps.隨著天色漸晚，光線漸暗，他加快了腳步。6.Shehadnochoicebuttostopforanothernight.AgustofcoldwindblewandshestartedtomissthewarmthofTom’shug.她別無他法，只能在這里再待上一晚。一股冷風吹來，

她開始想念Tom溫暖的懷抱。7.Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,toweringmountains,deepvalleys

andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.在飛馳的車上，我閉上雙眼。蜿蜒的小溪，高聳的群山，幽深的山谷，明媚的海灘，讓我深深著迷。5.Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,hequickenedhissteps.隨著天色漸晚，光線漸暗，他加快了腳步。6.Shehadnochoicebuttostopforanothernight.AgustofcoldwindblewandshestartedtomissthewarmthofTom’shug.她別無他法，只能在這里再待上一晚。一股冷風吹來，

她開始想念Tom溫暖的懷抱。7.Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,toweringmountains,deepvalleys

andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.在飛馳的車上，我閉上雙眼。蜿蜒的小溪，高聳的群山，幽深的山谷，明媚的海灘，讓我深深著迷。5.Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,hequickenedhissteps.隨著天色漸晚，光線漸暗，他加快了腳步。6.Shehadnochoicebuttostopforanothernight.AgustofcoldwindblewandshestartedtomissthewarmthofTom’shug.她別無他法，只能在這里再待上一晚。一股冷風吹來，

她開始想念Tom溫暖的懷抱。7.Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,toweringmountains,deepvalleys

andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.在飛馳的車上，我閉上雙眼。蜿蜒的小溪，高聳的群山，幽深的山谷，明媚的海灘，讓我深深著迷。5.Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,hequickenedhissteps.隨著天色漸晚，光線漸暗，他加快了腳步。6.Shehadnochoicebuttostopforanothernight.AgustofcoldwindblewandshestartedtomissthewarmthofTom’shug.她別無他法，只能在這里再待上一晚。一股冷風吹來，

她開始想念Tom溫暖的懷抱。7.Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,toweringmountains,deepvalleys

andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyin