2026屆新高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫詞匯升級(jí)

從讀后續(xù)寫的評(píng)分原則可知，讀后續(xù)寫作文對(duì)應(yīng)用的豐富性、準(zhǔn)確性都做出了明確的要求。因此考試中除了要準(zhǔn)確使用外，還要注意所用詞匯的豐富性，減少基礎(chǔ)詞匯（如籠統(tǒng)詞、低年級(jí)常用詞等）的使用，培養(yǎng)使用復(fù)雜詞匯（如派生詞、短語(yǔ)等）的習(xí)慣，從而使文章內(nèi)容更加生動(dòng)、豐富，提升文章檔次。常用詞匯升級(jí)方法基礎(chǔ)用法高級(jí)用法低年級(jí)詞語(yǔ)（義務(wù)教育階段）高年級(jí)詞語(yǔ)（如選擇性必修詞語(yǔ)）籠統(tǒng)的詞語(yǔ)（如walk）具體的詞語(yǔ)（如tiptoe,wander等）單詞（如visit）短語(yǔ)（如payavisitto）單詞原形（如happy）單詞派生詞（如unhappy,happily等）一、籠統(tǒng)詞→具體詞（PrecisionUpgrade）

籠統(tǒng)詞指一些描述范圍較大、指向作息不太明確的詞；而具體詞往往是這類詞的具體描述。通過替換泛化詞匯為具象詞匯，可以使敘述的內(nèi)容更加準(zhǔn)確、行文更加生動(dòng)，增強(qiáng)畫面感和專業(yè)性。如：

Assoonasthepuppyheardhisfootsteps,itrantowardshim.

一聽到他的腳步聲，小狗就朝他跑了過來(lái)。rundartsprint(飛奔、像飛鏢一樣射出去)，可以更為準(zhǔn)確地表面出小狗激動(dòng)的情緒，使讀者產(chǎn)生更直接的觀感。(全速?zèng)_刺)，則無(wú)法展現(xiàn)小狗對(duì)主人的友好，不符合語(yǔ)境。名

詞籠統(tǒng)詞具體詞升級(jí)示例thingadvantagedisadvantagemistakefameabilitytopcompetitorwaybusiness(事情)，issue(問題)，affair(事件)，matters(事態(tài))，event(大事)，trifle(瑣事)virtue(優(yōu)點(diǎn)；長(zhǎng)處)，merit(優(yōu)點(diǎn)；價(jià)值)，benefit(優(yōu)勢(shì)；益處)shortcoming(缺點(diǎn)；短處)，drawback(缺點(diǎn)；不利條件)，defect(缺陷)，demerit(短處)fault(過錯(cuò)),error(錯(cuò)誤;差錯(cuò)),fallacy(謬論;謬誤)reputation(名譽(yù)；名聲)，renown(名譽(yù)；聲望)，prestige(聲望；威望)capacity（能力），capability（能力；才能），competence（能力；勝任）climax(極點(diǎn)：頂點(diǎn))，peak(頂峰)，zenith(鼎盛時(shí)期，頂峰)，summit(最高點(diǎn)，頂點(diǎn))rival(競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手),opponent(對(duì)手;競(jìng)爭(zhēng)者),contestant(比賽者;競(jìng)爭(zhēng)者)，match(對(duì)手;旗鼓相當(dāng)?shù)娜耍﹎ethod(方法：辦法)，approach(方式；方法)，avenue(途徑；手段)動(dòng)

詞籠統(tǒng)詞具體詞升級(jí)示例walkrunlooksay/talklaughcryeatdrinkwantcatchhitbreakstroll(溜達(dá))，stagger(蹣跚)，trudge(跋涉)，tiptoe(踮著腳走；躡手躡腳地走)，creep(緩慢行進(jìn)：潛行)，stride(大步走),stumble(絆倒)charge(猛沖)，dart(飛奔)，gallop(疾馳)，scamper(歡快地奔走)，sprint(沖刺)glance(瞥一眼)，glimpse(瞥見)，glare(怒目而視)，peek(偷窺)，stare(盯著看)，gaze(凝視)announce(宣布)，argue(爭(zhēng)論)，chat(閑聊)，complain(抱怨)，debate(辯論)，discuss(討論)，murmur(低語(yǔ))，whisper(低語(yǔ)；耳語(yǔ))，persuade(說(shuō)服)，stammer(結(jié)巴),exclaim(驚呼),retort(反駁)chuckle(輕聲地笑)，giggle(咯咯地笑；傻笑)，guffaw(大笑；哄笑)，snigger(竊笑；暗笑)wail(哭號(hào)，慟哭)，sob(啜泣；嗚咽)，whimper(抽泣；嗚咽)bite(咬)，chew(咀嚼)，devour(狼吞虎咽地吃光)，gobble(狼吞虎咽；貪婪地吃),swallow(吞下；咽下)drain(喝光；喝干)，sip（小口喝；抿)crave（渴望；熱望），desire（渴望；期望）capture(捕獲)，grasp（抓緊；抓牢），seize（抓??；捉?。﹑at(輕拍)，beat(敲打；錘砸)，strike（撞擊）crack(裂開；破開)，demolish(拆毀，拆除)，destroy(摧毀；毀滅)形

容

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動(dòng)

詞籠統(tǒng)詞具體詞升級(jí)示例beautifulgladimportantbadgoodpoorverynearbyallonlyusuallyhandsome(英俊的),attractive(吸引人的),graceful(優(yōu)雅的)，fine(精美的)excited(興奮的)，pleasant(愉快的),joyful(歡喜的)vital(至關(guān)重要的),critical(決定性的),significant(意義重大的),primary(首要的),profound(深刻的）mean(卑鄙的)，evil(邪惡的)，selfish(自私的)，disgusting(令人厭惡的)excellent(優(yōu)秀的)，awesome(令人驚嘆的)，outstanding(杰出的)impoverished(赤貧的)，poverty-stricken(一貧如洗的)，needy(貧困的)terribly(極度地),extremely(極其),highly(非常),greatly(大大地)adjacent(毗連的)，neighboring(鄰近的，毗鄰的)completely(徹底地)，absolutely(絕對(duì)地)，fully(充分地)merely(只不過)，solely(單獨(dú)地；唯)periodically(周期性地)，regularly(定期地)

在讀后續(xù)寫中，將籠統(tǒng)詞匯升級(jí)為具體生動(dòng)的表達(dá)可以顯著提升文采。以下是常見分類的短語(yǔ)升級(jí)方案，附帶例句對(duì)比：1.情感描寫升級(jí)

【籠統(tǒng)】Shewashappy.

【升級(jí)】Hereyessparkledlikesunlightdancingonwater.(眼睛如陽(yáng)光躍動(dòng)般閃亮)

【其他方案】Aradiantsmilespreadacrossherface.(容光煥發(fā)的笑容)Sheclappedherhandsinchildlikedelight.(孩子氣地拍手)2.動(dòng)作描寫升級(jí)

【籠統(tǒng)】Hewalkedquickly.

【升級(jí)】Hesprintedlikeanarrowreleasedfromitsbow.(如離弦之箭般沖刺)

【其他方案】staggeredforwardlikeadrunkard(醉漢般踉蹌)glidedacrossthefloorwithballerinagrace(芭蕾舞者般滑行)3.環(huán)境描寫升級(jí)

【籠統(tǒng)】Itwasdark.

【升級(jí)】Shadowsclungtothewallslikevelvetcurtains.(陰影如天鵝絨幕布附著墻面)

【其他方案】Moonlightdrippedthroughtheleaves.(月光從葉隙滴落)Anoppressivedarknessswallowedthecorridor.(壓迫性的黑暗吞噬走廊)4.心理描寫升級(jí)

【籠統(tǒng)】Shefeltnervous.

【升級(jí)】Herpulsehammeredafranticrhythmagainstherribs.(脈搏在肋骨間敲擊狂亂節(jié)奏)

【其他方案】Coldsweattracedicypathsdownherspine.(冷汗沿脊柱流下)Thoughtscollidedlikebumpercarsinhermind.(思緒如碰碰車般碰撞)5.外貌描寫升級(jí)

【籠統(tǒng)】Helookedold.

【升級(jí)】Timehadcarvedcanyonsacrosshisforehead.(時(shí)間在他額頭刻出溝壑)

【其他方案】Silverstrandsgleamedlikemoonlitthreads.(銀發(fā)如月光絲線閃爍)Hisspinecurvedlikeaweatheredwillow.(脊背如經(jīng)年柳樹般彎曲)6.天氣描寫升級(jí)

【籠統(tǒng)】Itrainedheavily.

【升級(jí)】Theheavensunleashedliquidbullets.(天空傾瀉液態(tài)子彈)

【其他方案】Rainneedlesstitchedtheearthtothesky.(雨針將天地縫合)Aweepingskydissolvedthecity’soutlines.(哭泣的天空溶解城市輪廓)【高級(jí)技巧】感官疊加：Thescentofburntsugar(嗅覺)mingledwiththemetallictangoffear(味覺)inherthroat.反常搭配：Thesilencewassothickitcouldchokeaman.(沉默濃得令人窒息)動(dòng)態(tài)比喻：Doubtcreptupherspinelikeaspiderwithicylegs.(懷疑如冰腿蜘蛛爬上脊背)練習(xí)：結(jié)合語(yǔ)境，將句中籠統(tǒng)詞替換成具體詞以優(yōu)化表達(dá)。1.Becauseofherhatred,shelookedathim.Becauseofherhatred,she__________athim.2.Withonlytwentysecondsleft,Irantotheline.Withonlytwentysecondsleft,I_________totheline.3.Hefell,hittinghisheadontheedgeofthedesk.Hefell,_________hisheadontheedgeofthedesk.4.Ithadtakenthemaweektocatchtheescapedpigs.Ithadtakenthemaweekto_________theescapedpigs.5.Withonlytwominutesleft,heatehismeal.Withonlytwominutesleft,he___________hismeal.glareddartedstrikingcapturegobbled6.Idon’twanttostayupallnightoversuchanunimportantthing.Idon’twanttostayupallnightoversucha(n)__________.7.Theywalkedonwardswithexhaustedbodiesthroughthedesert.

They__________onwardswithexhaustedbodiesthrouglthedesert.8.IdecidedthatIamverybad.I’vebeenmainlyconcernedwithmyself.IdecidedthatIamvery_______.I’vebeenmainlyconcernedwithmyself.9.Bathshebawasatthistimeinherroom,dressingforthesolemnevent.Bathshebawasatthistimeinherroom,dressingforthesolemn___________.10.Itwasonlyaflickeroflightinthedistance,yetitfilledthemwithhope.Itwas_________aflickeroflightinthedistance,yetitfilledthemwithhopetrifletrudgedselfishoccasionmerely11.Aftertwoweeksofhardwork,hedetectedthefalsenessofherargument.Aftertwoweeksofhardwork,hedetectedthe_________ofherargument.12.He’snotreallygood-looking,buthe’shandsomeinastrangekindofway.He’snotreallygood-looking,buthe’s__________inastrangekindofway.13.Sheheardhermothersayquietlyasshewalkeddownthehall,“Don’twakeyourfatherup.”Sheheardhermother________asshe_____________downthehall,“Don’twakeyourfatherup.”14.Thosegirlstalkedhotlyaboutthequestionofthemostbeautifulprincessinfairytales.

Thosegirls_______________hotlyaboutthequestionofthemostbeautifulprincessinfairytales.15.Shechokedandbegancoughing.Whenhepushedaglassofwatertohermouth,shedrankallof.Shechokedandbegancoughing.Whenhepushedaglassofwatertohermouth,she________it.fallacyattractivewhispertiptoed/creptargued/debateddrained二、單詞→短語(yǔ)/習(xí)語(yǔ)（LexicalSophistication）

使用釋義相同或相近的短語(yǔ)替換單詞，可以提升語(yǔ)言的自然度和表現(xiàn)力，達(dá)到優(yōu)化表達(dá)的效果，較為常見的是將動(dòng)詞替換成動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，也有一些將副詞替換成副詞短語(yǔ)，介詞替換成介詞短語(yǔ)的情況，同時(shí)將形容詞替換成“of+名詞”的情況也較常見。例如，valuable→ofgreatvalue.1.表達(dá)情緒/感受happy

→

oncloudnine（欣喜若狂）

【原句】Shewasveryhappyafterwinningthecompetition.

【升級(jí)】Shewas

oncloudnine

afterwinningthecompetition.sad

→

downinthedumps（情緒低落）

【原句】Hefeltsadafterhisdogranaway.

【升級(jí)】Hewas

downinthedumps

afterhisdogranaway.angry

→

seered（勃然大怒）

【原句】Shegotangrywhenheliedtoher.

【升級(jí)】She

sawred

whenheliedtoher.scared

→

shakelikealeaf（嚇得發(fā)抖）

【原句】Hewasscaredwhenheheardthestrangenoise.

【升級(jí)】Hewas

shakinglikealeaf

whenheheardthestrangenoise.2.表達(dá)行動(dòng)/行為runquickly

→

dashlikethewind（如風(fēng)般飛奔）

【原句】Heranquicklytocatchthebus.

【升級(jí)】He

dashedlikethewind

tocatchthebus.walkslowly

→

dragone’sfeet（慢吞吞地走）

【原句】Shewalkedslowlybecauseshewastired.

【升級(jí)】She

draggedherfeet

becauseshewastired.workhard

→

burnthemidnightoil（挑燈夜戰(zhàn)）

【原句】Heworkedhardtofinishtheproject.

【升級(jí)】He

burnedthemidnightoil

tofinishtheproject.wait

→

hangaround（閑逛等待）

【原句】Shewaitedforherfriendatthecafé.

【升級(jí)】She

hungaround

atthecafé,waitingforherfriend.3.表達(dá)思考/決定thinkcarefully

→

rackone’sbrains（絞盡腦汁）

【原句】Hethoughtcarefullyabouttheproblem.

【升級(jí)】He

rackedhisbrains

overtheproblem.changeyourmind

→

haveachangeofheart（改變主意）

【原句】Shechangedhermindaboutgoingtotheparty.

【升級(jí)】She

hadachangeofheart

aboutgoingtotheparty.understand

→

getthepicture（明白情況）

【原句】Finally,heunderstoodwhatshemeant.

【升級(jí)】Finally,he

gotthepicture.4.表達(dá)成功/失敗succeed

→

hitthejackpot（大獲成功）

【原句】Theirbusinesssucceededbeyondexpectations.

【升級(jí)】Theirbusiness

hitthejackpot.fail

→

fallflat（徹底失敗）

【原句】Hisjokefailedtomakeanyonelaugh.

【升級(jí)】Hisjoke

fellflat.tryhard

→

gotheextramile（加倍努力）

【原句】Shetriedhardtoimpressherboss.

【升級(jí)】She

wenttheextramile

toimpressherboss.5.表達(dá)時(shí)間/速度happenquickly

→

intheblinkofaneye（眨眼之間）

【原句】Theaccidenthappenedquickly.

【升級(jí)】Theaccidenthappened

intheblinkofaneye.waitalongtime

→

forages（等了很久）

【原句】Iwaitedalongtimeforthebus.

【升級(jí)】Iwaited

forages

forthebus.finally

→

atlonglast（終于）

【原句】Finally,therainstopped.

【升級(jí)】Atlonglast,therainstopped.6.表達(dá)人際關(guān)系becomefriends

→

hititoff（一見如故）

【原句】Theybecamefriendsquickly.

【升級(jí)】They

hititoff

rightaway.argue

→

haveafalling-out（鬧翻）

【原句】Theyarguedandstoppedtalking.

【升級(jí)】They

hadafalling-out

andstoppedtalking.helpsomeone

→

givesomeoneahand（幫一把）

【原句】Canyouhelpmemovethistable?

【升級(jí)】Canyou

givemeahand

withthistable?現(xiàn)將一些高頻的單詞替換成短語(yǔ)的情況歸納如下：?jiǎn)?/p>

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詞短

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likerememberstartownbeginbelieveappreciatedtiredraisestressdesiresolveusereplacedecideseecrysuitcomerefusemeetattractthink(思考)usuallythink(認(rèn)為)aboutbearfinallyaffectimportanthaveapassionforbeinitiatedtogetdowntobeindebtedtoputforwardlongformakeuseofmakeupone’smindburstintotearsdrawnearcomeacrossmulloverholdtheviewputupwithbear...inmindhaveaneffectonbeinpossessionofbeconvincedofwornoutlayemphasisonworkout,figureouttaketheplaceofcatchsightofbesuitableforturndownappealtomoreoftenthannotwithregardtointheend,atlengthofimportance練習(xí)：結(jié)合語(yǔ)境，將單詞替換成短語(yǔ)以優(yōu)化表達(dá)。1.Usually,hewouldwalkalonebythelakeinadaze.__________________,hewouldwalkalonebythelakeinadaze.2.Ithasgivenusaricherunderstandingofcertainlearningmechanisms,particularlyaboutnonhumans.Ithasgivenusaricherunderstandingofcertainlearningmechanisms,particularly______________nonhumans.3.Itisatruthuniversallyacknowledgedthatasinglemanowningagoodfortunemustbeinwantofawife.Itisatruthuniversallyacknowledgedthatasingleman_______________agoodfortunemustbeinwanofawife.4.TheminuteIheardthefirstnoteofhervoice,Icried.TheminuteIheardthefirstnoteofhervoice,I______________.5.Rememberthattheruleswe’retalkingaboutherearenotrulesyouexplicitlyknow.___________thattheruleswe’retalkingaboutherearenotrulesyouexplicitlyknow.Moreoftenthannotwithregardto

inpossessionofburstintotearsBearinmind6.I’mnotgoingtobearitandI’mgoingtodowhateverittakesI’mnotgoingto___________itandI’mgoingtodowhateverittakes.7.Ifyouwanttobeoutstanding,youmustfirstbelievethatyoucanbesuccessful.Ifyouwanttobeoutstanding,youmustfirst_____________yourcapabilitytosucceed.8.Keepaneyeoutforthebeautiful,observetheunusual,andseethesurprising.Keepaneyeoutforthebeautiful,observetheunusual,and____________thesurprising.9.Itisimportanttokeepcalminsuchanemergency.

Itis_____________tokeepcalminsuchanemergency.10.Itriedtothinkabouttheproblemandthenfigureouthowtosolveit.Itriedto__________theproblemandthenfigureouthowtosolveit.putupwithbeconvincedofcatchsightofofimportancemullover11.Sheisagoodsinger,andhermusicattractsamuchlargeraudience.Sheisagoodsinger,andhermusic_________amuchlargeraudience.12.Hadmymotherstressedtheimportanceofreadingless,Iwouldn’thavefoundinterestinit.

Hadmymother________________________________ofreading,Iwouldn’thavefoundinterestinit.13.Jerryraisedtheissueofmultimediaapplicationandheateddiscussionfollowed.Jerry___________theissueofmultimediaapplicationandheateddiscussionfollowed.14.Weweresotiredwhenwereturnedfromthefieldsthatwewenttobedimmediately.

Wewereso_________whenwereturnedfromthefieldsthatwewenttobedimmediately.15.Finally,theambulancecameandcarriedawaytheirinjuredteammate._________________,theambulancecameandcarriedawaytheirinjuredteammate.appealstolaidlessemphasisontheimportanceputforwardwornoutAtlength/Intheend三、詞匯派生（MorphologicalFlexibility）

通過詞根詞綴變化提升詞匯多樣性。當(dāng)英語(yǔ)學(xué)到了高級(jí)階段后，往往難以將所學(xué)高級(jí)低頻詞產(chǎn)出到書面表達(dá)中，這種現(xiàn)象被稱為二語(yǔ)習(xí)得中的“石化現(xiàn)象”。而充分利用派生詞，可以提高詞匯記憶效果和輸入質(zhì)量，從而提高詞匯產(chǎn)出能力。另外，英語(yǔ)中的派生詞往往由特定的前綴、后綴構(gòu)成，通過后綴可以初步判斷單詞的詞性甚至含義，而通過記憶前綴的含義以快速擴(kuò)大詞匯量,通常情況下,加上前綴不會(huì)改變單詞的詞性,而加上后綴會(huì)帶來(lái)單詞詞性的改變。在記憶單詞原形的基礎(chǔ)上再經(jīng)過整合，就可以構(gòu)筑一個(gè)豐富的詞匯倉(cāng)庫(kù)，滿足不同句子成分對(duì)詞性的不同需求，從面提升詞匯應(yīng)用的豐富度。以下為一些常見的單詞前綴和后綴的形式：前

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例un-不；非im-/in-/il-/ir-不；非non-無(wú)；沒有dis-不：非；相反re-又：再；重新anti-反對(duì)auto-自己(的),無(wú)人操作(的)bi-二；雙co-共同de-……的反義；除去pre-先于；在……前unconsciously(無(wú)意識(shí)地),untruth(謬誤),uncover(打開)impolite(沒禮貌的),illogical(不合邏輯的)，irrelevance(不相關(guān)),inaccurate(不準(zhǔn)確的)nonsense(廢話),non-stop(直達(dá)的;不停的),non-smoker(不吸煙的人)dishonest(不誠(chéng)實(shí)的),disappear(消失),discouraged(泄氣的)reapply(再申請(qǐng)),reassuring(令人放心的),retell(重述)antifreeze(防凍劑),anticlimax(掃興的結(jié)局),antibiotic(抗生素)autobiography(自傳),automatic(自動(dòng)的),autocrat(獨(dú)裁者)bicentennial(兩百周年),bilingual(雙語(yǔ)的),bicycle(自行車)coexist(共存),cooperatively(合作地),coauthor(合著者)decentralization(權(quán)力分散),defrost(除霜),deforestation(森林砍伐)preheat(預(yù)熱),precaution(預(yù)防),prehistoric(史前的)名詞后綴示

例-ship才能，狀態(tài)，資格，品質(zhì)等-ful量-tion/-ion狀態(tài)，行動(dòng)等-ment狀態(tài)，行動(dòng)等-ness;-ity(ty)狀態(tài)，品質(zhì)動(dòng)詞后綴示

例-ify轉(zhuǎn)為，變?yōu)?en使；變得形容詞后綴示

例-ful充滿……的；有……性質(zhì)的-less沒有；不受影響-ly具有……性質(zhì)-ing/-ed具有……特征的-ous有……性質(zhì)的副詞后綴示

例-ly以……方式-wards向……地leadership(領(lǐng)導(dǎo)才能),membership(會(huì)員資格),professorship(教授資格)handful(一把的量),mouthful(一滿口的量),spoonful(一勺的量)starvation(饑餓),oppression(壓迫),competition(競(jìng)爭(zhēng))movement(運(yùn)動(dòng)),improvement(改善、提高),judgement(判斷)happiness(幸福),kindness(善良),rapidity(迅速)purify(凈化),beautify(美化),solidify(使凝固)widen(使變寬),blacken(使變黑),sadden(使悲傷)sorrowful(悲傷的),masterful(專橫的),forgetful(健忘的)meaningless(無(wú)意義的),tireless(孜孜不倦的),careless(粗心的)cowardly(怯懦的),scholarly(學(xué)者型的),friendly(朋友般的)surprising(令人吃驚的),amused(逗樂的),exciting(興奮的),disappointed(失望的)spacious(寬敞的),dangerous(危險(xiǎn)地),luminous(發(fā)光的；明亮的)happily(幸福地),stupidly(愚蠢地),surprisingly(令人驚訝地)eastwards(向東),forwards(向前的),homewards(向家)練習(xí)：使用括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的適當(dāng)形式填空。1.Thoughthefatherwasrichand_________(power),hewasstill__________(power)inthefaceofhisson’sdisease.2.John_______(usual)startshisbasketballtrainingat6o’clockontime.Itis_________(usual)forhimtobelate.3.Iam______(real)thankfulformodernscientifictechnology,whichhasmademanybeautifuldreamsturninto________(real).4.Davidfeltso_______(bore)withthe_______(bore)meetingthatherosetohisfeetandmadehiswaytothedoor.5.Thewomanstoodonthebeach,lookingatthe________(peace),warmsea,withhersonlying___________(peace)inherarms.powerfulpowerlessusuallyunusualreallyrealitiesboredboringpeacefulpeacefully6.Iwasstruckwith___________(amaze)asIsawthegreatand_________(amaze)shipforthefirsttime.7.The_________(invite)wereceivedfromourauntyesterdaymeantthatwecouldenjoyher_________(invite)cuisineagain.8.Sheisa_________(fortune)girlwithafinesingingvoice,but____________(fortune),shecaughtaheavycoldbeforeshewasreadytoperformonstage.9.Theconcertwasso____________(disappoint)thatshecouldn’thideher____________(disappoint).10.Hewasso__________(create)thathecouldcombinemodernmusicandtraditionalmusic__________(create).amazementamazinginvitationinvitingfortunateunfortunatelydisappointingdisappointmentcreativecreatively11.Thephysicaldisabilitycouldn’t___________(courage)thegirl,whowasas___________(courage)asawarrior,fromfightingforherdream.12.Myfatherdidthemost_________(amuse)thingonmytenthbirthday.Hetookmetothe____________(amuse)parkandforgottobringmehome.13.Ifoundhimlying____________(conscious)onthefloorandafterIwokehimup,hesaidhehadlost_____________(conscious).14.Hisquestionsaboutthelady’sprivatelifemadeherfeel____________(embarrass).However,theladyusedunexpectedhumortoresolvethe______________(embarrass)successfully.15.Themoneywasdivided________(equal)amongthesefourchildren.Althoughtheyhadjustgottoknoweachother,theystilllivedincomplete________(equal)andbrotherhood.discouragecourageousamusingamusementunconsciousconsciousnessembarrassedembarrassmentequallyequality四、感官細(xì)節(jié)升級(jí)（SensoryLanguage）通過五感描寫替代抽象描述，增強(qiáng)畫面感和沉浸感。抽象表達(dá)感官升級(jí)（五感描寫+修辭手法）分

析Itwasdark.Shewassad.Thefoodsmelledgood.Hewasnervous.Theroomwasmessy.Thewindwasstrong.Thedrinkwasrefreshing.Theshadowscoiledlikeserpentsinthedimmoonlight,swallowingeveryglimmerofhope.Alumpformedinherthroat,andhervisionblurredwithunshedtears,saltyandburning.Thearomaofsizzlinggarlicandrosemarywaftedthroughtheair,tuggingathisstomachlikeaninvisiblehook.Hispalmsturnedclammy,andthetickingoftheclockgrewlouder,eachsecondahammerstriketohisribs.Clothessprawledacrossthefloorlikeexhaustedsoldiers,andthestalescentofoldcoffeeclungtotheair.Thegalehowledthroughthetrees,itsicyfingersclawingathisexposedskin.Theicylemonadecrackledagainsthistongue,burstingwithtartsweetnessthatmadehischeekstingle.視覺+比喻：用“蛇般纏繞”的陰影增強(qiáng)壓迫感，并暗示危險(xiǎn)。觸覺+視覺+味覺：喉嚨發(fā)緊、淚水灼熱，讓悲傷更具體可感。嗅覺+擬人：香氣“鉤住”胃，增強(qiáng)誘惑力。觸覺+聽覺+比喻：手心出汗、時(shí)鐘聲如錘擊，強(qiáng)化緊張感。視覺+嗅覺+擬人：衣物如“疲憊的士兵”，咖啡味“黏附”空氣，使雜亂更生動(dòng)。聽覺+觸覺+擬人：風(fēng)“嚎叫”并如“冰冷的手指”抓撓，增強(qiáng)沖擊力。味覺+聽覺+觸覺：氣泡感、酸味、臉頰發(fā)麻，讓清爽感更立體。感官升級(jí)的實(shí)操方法1.視覺（占比最高，但需避免平庸）

【低級(jí)寫法】Thereareflowersinthegarden.

【升級(jí)技巧】

動(dòng)態(tài)光影：Thesettingsuntingestherosepetalswithtranslucentamber,eachedgeoutlinedwithagoldenthread.

顏色具象化：避免直接說(shuō)red，改用rustyred,burgundywinered,fadedrouge。

空間層次：Themoonlightcouldonlypenetratethetopthreestepsofthecellarstairs,andthenthedarknessbititoff.2.聽覺（最易被忽略的感官）

【低級(jí)寫法】Thebattlefieldisnoisy.

【升級(jí)技巧】

聲音定位：Thewhistleofthearrowpassedbytheleftear,andthenextsecond,thedullsoundoftheshieldbreakingcamefromtherightrear.

白噪音描寫：Thecicadachirpslikearustysaw,sawingbackandforthintheafternoonair.

靜默的力量：Aftershehungupthephone,therewasonlythefainthumoftherefrigeratorcompressorleftintheroom.3.嗅覺（直接鏈接記憶的感官）

【低級(jí)寫法】Thekitchenwaftsthefragrance.

【升級(jí)技巧】

氣味組合：Theburntbuttermixedwiththewoodyscentofrosemary,withahintofscorchedbitternessunderneath.

氣味擬人化：Thedampsmellofmildew,likeasinisterthief,creptoutfromthebasementdoor.4.觸覺（最私密的感官）

【低級(jí)寫法】Hishandsareveryrough.

【升級(jí)技巧】

材質(zhì)對(duì)比：Thecallusonthepalmofhishandscrapedagainstthebackofmyhandasifsandpaperrubbedagainstsilk.

溫度變化：Themetalhiltofthedaggerwasatfirstcold,butitsoongrewwarmfrommycoldsweat.5.味覺（常與嗅覺聯(lián)動(dòng)）

【低級(jí)寫法】Thesoupissalty.

【升級(jí)技巧】

延時(shí)感受：Thefirstbiteisonlyassmoothascream,andthreesecondslater,thegraininessofseasaltburstsinthebackofthetongue.

通感運(yùn)用：Thesournessofthislemontartisbrightasatrumpet’shighnote.五、修辭手法（RhetoricalDevices）深度解析修辭手法是讓語(yǔ)言更具表現(xiàn)力的關(guān)鍵工具。以下詳細(xì)講解三種核心手法：1.擬人（Personification）定義：賦予非人類事物（自然現(xiàn)象、物體、抽象概念）以人類特質(zhì)或行為。作用：增強(qiáng)畫面感，引發(fā)情感共鳴。普通句擬人升級(jí)分

析Thewindblewstrongly.Theflowersmovedinthebreeze.Thecitywasbusy.Thewindhowled

throughthetrees,

clawing

atourjackets.Thedaisieswhisperedsecrets

toeachother,theirpetalsgiggling

inthewind.Thecitypulsed

withaheartbeatofhonkingcarsandneonlights.動(dòng)作擬人（howled/clawing）暗示危險(xiǎn)情緒行為擬人（whisper/giggle）創(chuàng)造童趣氛圍器官擬人（heartbea