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Unit1TeenageLife

Writealetterofadvicegenerationgap(代溝)withparentsbeingaddicted(上癮的)

totheInternet/computergamesgreatpressure(巨大的壓力)fromheavyschoolworkfeelinglonelyandisolated(孤立的)conflicts(矛盾)betweenfriends/classmates

highexpectations(期待)fromparentsandteachers......

Asateenager,whatproblemsdoyouhaveinyourdailylife?Lead-intalkwithafriendfindawaybyyourselfgotoanschooladviser......askparentsforhelpturntoanetfriendWhenyouhavesomeproblemsinlifeorinstudy,whatwillyoudo?Step1

SusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.1.Whatkindofletteritis?

2.Howmanypartsaretheletter?Whatarethey?

Step2ReadandAnswerAnadviceletter;Alettergivingsuggestions

Five:Date;Greeting;Body;Close;SignatureDiscoverWhatisWorriedFriend'sproblem?MsLuo'sadviceLanguageFeaturesWhatexpressionsdoesSusanLuousetomakesuggestions?Circlethemintheletter.Canyouthinkofmoreexpressionsofmakingsuggestions?WhatexpressionsdoesSusanLuousetoshowherunderstanding?Canyouthinkofotherwaystoexpressunderstanding?作者:AnadviserIknowwhattheproblemis.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Thisismyadviceandreason(s).Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.1234體裁:Narrative主題:Offeradvice讀者:QuestionerIrecommendthat...whynot...Doingsthis....IthinkyoushouldIunderstandquitewellthat...Youwrotethat...Iamsure...ExtractsomeusefulexpresionsfromthesampleletterQ1:WhatwouldyouNOTsaywhenyouwanttoshowyourunderstanding?1.Youhaveeveryrighttofeelupsetaboutthat.2.Iamsorrytohearthatyoufeellonelyandupsetwhen...3.It’stotallynormaltofeelthisway.4.Howcanyouhavesuchafeeling...NotconsiderateQuizzes第一步

精準審題,謀篇布局明確體裁話題確定時態(tài)人稱建議信;如何適應(yīng)新環(huán)境一般現(xiàn)在時;第二人稱為主第一步

精準審題,謀篇布局3.布局文章框架稱呼DearXXX,(頂格)首段:對收到信進行反饋;安慰對方;想給建議引出后文中段:建議1/2/3+原因/結(jié)果尾段:希望我的建議可以幫到你;期待你的來信落款

Yours,(右對齊)XXX4.分析題目,列出核心要點1.指出問題所在2.提出擺脫困境、適應(yīng)環(huán)境的建議二、頭腦風暴,遣詞造句

在寫建議信時,應(yīng)具體點明寫信的目的、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由和根據(jù),理由要合情合理,語氣一定要禮貌。建議信的正文通常采取“三段式結(jié)構(gòu)”:首段(Topicsentence—yourpointofview):一般指明建議的前提和事情的原委,對自己的立場作一些解釋。

中段(Body—youradvice):圍繞問題,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、科學委婉地提出有針對性的建議。注意充分考慮對方的實際情況,選擇得體用語。切忌用語生硬強制,泛泛而談。

尾段(Conclusion—yourwishes):簡單予以希望。希望自己的建議能對對方有所幫助,同時闡明你所提供的建議僅供對方參考。1.I'msorrytoknowthatyouarenowhavingtrouble(in)doingsth….知道你現(xiàn)在在……方面有些麻煩,我很抱歉。2.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高興收到你就……征求建議的來信。3.Myadvice/suggestionsareasfollows./Thefollowingismyadvice./Herearesometipstohelpyou.我的建議如下/這里有幫助你的一些建議。第一部分:交代背景+寫信目的First/Firstofall,whynot...?Ifyoudothis,youcan….Secondly/What'smore,youshould/hadbetterdo...Then/Thatway,...Itisalsohelpful/usefultodo...,whichwill…Thirdly/Inaddition/Besides,itwouldbeagoodideaif....Bydoingthis,....AsfarasI'mconcerned/Lastbutnotleast,doing...isabetterchoice.Whenitcomestothisproblem,Isuggestthatyoushould....第二部分:介紹詳情、提出建議應(yīng)試版

writingDear_________,Ifeelsorrytolearnthatyouhavetroubleindoing______.Suchproblemisquitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionswillbeofsomehelp.I’dliketosuggestthat...Youaresupposedtodo,...IfIwereyou,Iwould...because_________________.Hopefully,youwillfindmysuggestionsuseful/constructive.Bestwishes! YoursLiHuaIunderstandhowyoufeel.Thisismyadviceandreasons.Iknowwhattheproblemis.Ihopemyadvicewillhelp.

CloseandsigntheletterOnepossibleversionDearEric,

Ifeelsorrytolearnthatyouhavetroubleincommunicatingwithyourparents.

Suchproblemisquitenormalforweteenagers.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionswillbeofsomehelp.You’resupposedtoknowthatyourparentspossiblywon'tconsideryourideasifyouareshoutingatthemorifyoufailtoexpressyourselfwell.Therefore,becalmandpatienttoclearlymakeyourselfunderstood.

Besides,youcanexchangeyourvaluestobetterunderstandwhatyoucareaboutandwhy,whichwillhelptobridgeyourgenerationgap.(縮小代溝)

Hopefully,youwillfindmysuggestionsconstructive.Yours, LiHuaAfter-classassignment

假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Tom將在暑假期間來中國交流學習。他學了兩年中文,但仍然擔心中文交流時遇到困難,寫信向你求助。請你用英語給Tom回信,要點如下:1.寬慰對方;2.提出建議;3.期待收獲。詞數(shù)要求:80詞左右。Post

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