讀后續(xù)寫經(jīng)典句式一、情緒感受類【名詞+無靈主語】①情緒出現(xiàn)Asenseofdelightandprideseizedhim.②情緒加深Witheverytickoftheclock,hisguiltdeepened.③情緒減弱Astimewentby,myexcitementfadedaway.④情緒替代Tom'ssenseofresponsibilityovercamehisfear.Tom'sfearwasreplacedwith/bysenseofresponsibility.補充：④的第二句可以和減弱并列在一起用：Tom'sfearfadedawayandwasreplacedwith/bysenseofresponsibility.)【名詞+介詞短語做狀語及其他】①伴隨某情緒With/Indisappointment,hesighed.②導致某情緒Totheirrelief,theirsoncamebacksafeandsound.③出于某情緒Outofcuriosity,helookedintothebox.④抑制某情緒Atthebeginning,hardlycouldIcontainmyembarrassment.（本句屬于其他類：名詞+倒裝）【形容詞+形容詞做狀語】①兩個adj用and/but連接Eagerandexcited，sheopenedthegift.Frightenedbutcurious,shefollowedthestranger.②一個adj可加副詞修飾Extremelyworried,theydecidedtocallthepolice.Completelyshocked，hewasrootedtothespot.③借助adj常見短語搭配，如todosth/ofsth等Lucyhesitated,uncertainofhowtotellhimthetruth.Iturnedoverandfacedher,readytoanswerherquestion.【形容詞+倒裝句】①情緒感受及帶來的結(jié)果So+adj+was/were+主語+that+主語+didsthSoupsetwasIthatwordsfailedus.SoexcitedwereTomandhissisterthattheyranallthewayhome.②雖有某情緒感受但仍...Adj+as/though+主語+was/were,主語didsthWeakandtiredas/thoughshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet.Exhaustedas/thoughwewere,noneofusmadeanycomplaint.【寄情于景】核心原則：客觀事實+主觀感受①正襯：Asitgrewlate/Astimewentby,hewasontheedgeofbreakingdown.Asthewolfstaredathimfiercely，hewastotallyatalossofwhattodo.②反襯Thoughthenightwasfreezingcold,itseemedlikespringtoTom.Thoughonlyafewminuteshadpassed,itseemedlikeagestome.二、動作類【動作鏈描寫】①主語發(fā)出連續(xù)動作A，B和C舉例：1.Shetookadeepbreath,walkedtowardsthedoorandknockedatit.2.Theyarrivedatthefinishingline,lookedateachotherandbrokeintosmiles.3.Alanapickedupherdaughter,putherinthebackseatofhercar,andrushedhertothehospital.②Havingdone(sth),句子主干（劃線動作必須由主語發(fā)出，且時間早于謂語動作）舉例：1.Havingstruggledinthejunglefor8days,Ireturnedhomesafeandsound.2.Havingworkedfornearly2months，Ifinallysavedenoughmoneyforthegift.【動作面描寫（主語多個動作）】①Doing(sth)，句子主干（劃線動作須由主語發(fā)出）舉例：1.Sittingbesidethefire,Icouldn'thelpmissingmyfamily.2.Noddingandsmiling,heclappedhishandswithexcitement.3.Tomstoodthere,notknowingwhattodo/whathadjusthappened.②Done(by...)，句子主干（劃線動作須由主語承受）舉例：1.Supportedbythestick,Iwalkedwithalimp.2.Terrifiedbythesceneinfrontofhim,hewasrootedtothespot.3.LookedafterbyRita,theantsendedupgrowingstrongerandbiggerthananyonehadexpected.【動作面描寫（主語及其他主體多個動作）】①(With)+sb/sth+doing,句子主干（劃線動作須由前面的sb/sth發(fā)出）舉例：1.Withtigersroaringfromfaraway,Ihadasleeplessnight.2.Withchillywindswhippingourfaces,wecouldhearnothingbutsoundofourheartsbeatingviolently.②(With)+sb/sth+done,句子主干（劃線動作須由前面的sb/sth承受）舉例：1.Withmyfootstuckinahole,Ifellonthegroundheavily.2.Withhereyesfilledwithgratefultears，sheheldmyhandandsaid,"Thankyousomuch."③(With)+sb/sth+todo,句子主干（劃線動作須由前面的sb/sth承受，且尚未發(fā)生）1.Withnoplacetogo,hewanderedonthestreet.2.Withnothingelsetoeat,theseberrieswerethebestfoodthatIhadevereaten.注意：以上句式去掉with后，將是更高級的句型結(jié)構(gòu)——獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。如果作文總出現(xiàn)不止一處with復合結(jié)構(gòu)，可以把其中一處改為獨立主格?！究床坏降男睦砘顒印竣偻蝗幌氲絀tsuddenlyoccurredto/struck/hitmethatIcouldturntoMaryforhelp.②回想反思Reflectingonwhathehadsaid/done,Tomloweredhisheadwithguilt.③下定決心ShepushedawayherfeelingsandmadeuphermindthatshewouldsparenoefforttohelpMary.④重燃希望Ournearlyextinguishedsparksofhopewassuddenlyrekindled.(暗喻)⑤毫不猶豫Withoutanyhesitation，herushedintotheburninghousetorescuetheoldlady.⑥后悔遺憾1.IfonlyIhadlistenedtomyteammate’swords.如果我聽了隊友的話多好（對過去的虛擬）2.IfonlyIhadn'tliedtomymother.如果我沒跟媽媽撒謊多好。（對過去的虛擬）⑦心想思量1.Ithoughttomyself，“What’sthematterwithme？”Marypausedandthoughtforawhileaboutwhatshewouldsay.2.Somethingdidn'tfeelright.3.Iwonderedif/whetherIwouldseethelittlebirdagain.4.Shewalkedalong