主題寫作：人與社會(huì)--科學(xué)與技術(shù)--科學(xué)技術(shù)與工程，人類發(fā)明與創(chuàng)新

人與自我--生活與學(xué)習(xí)--多彩、安全、有意義的學(xué)校生活WritingandImprovementAnInvitationtothe2025ScienceFestival匯報(bào)人：FeedbackExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectEngage:shareontopicLessontask:Improvethefirstdraft.Engage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflect

假設(shè)你叫李明，你所在的學(xué)校擬組織一年一度的科技節(jié)。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)主席的身份，寫信給姊妹學(xué)校澳門濠江中學(xué)的外籍學(xué)生Linda，邀請(qǐng)她過來參加此次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括:Agoodcomposition(15’)completecontent(內(nèi)容完整)(6’)goodlanguage（語言得體）(9’)Invitation1Engage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectLearnwhatmakesagoodcomposition.Watchandreviewtheactivities.design3D___________enteramodel-making________showhandmade____________tryoutsomefun___________payavisitto_______________artworkscompetitionscienceprojectsthesciencefairexperimentsEngage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectEngage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectInvitation2spellingmistakes?grammarmistakes?Invitation1

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②1.usecorrectspellingandgrammarEngage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectHowtoimprovethelanguage?Invitation1Engage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectInvitation2goodphrases?goodexpression?

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②③④⑤⑥⑦Engage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectHowtoimprovethelanguage?Goodlanguage1.usecorrectspellingandgrammar2.usegoodexpressionsEngage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflect?Youcan_______________thesciencefair.3.TheScienceFestivalcanhelpstudentsstudy

science.(**健)?TheScienceFestivalwill________________________studentsto______________________science.payavisittoprovideachanceforlearn(more)aboutTip1:Changeforabetterexpression.?I__________youwill_________________it.1.I

thinkyouwilllikeit.(**妍)Languagebank1.besure2.beinterestedin3.learnabout4.payavisitto5.provideachanceforsb.toamsurebeinterestedin2.Youcangotothesciencefair.festivalEngage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectTip2:Combineforabetterexpression.Youwillhaveagreattimeatthefestival.Ipromise.Ipromise(that)youwillhaveagreattimeatthefestival.Itincreasesourknowledge.Itbringsusalotoffun.Itnotonlybringsusalotoffunbutalsoincreasesourknowledge.

(that)(notonly…butalso…)Engage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflect--ThomasEdisonSurpriseistheseedofscience.（驚奇是科學(xué)的種子。）Tip3:

Addasaying(名人名言)forabetterexpression.Asthesayinggoes,surpriseistheseedofscience.Engage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflect3.Useatopicsentence.Change(變)Combine(合)Add(增)expressionGoodlanguage1.usecorrectspellingandgrammar2.usegoodexpressions3.usetopicsentences

Howtoimprovethelanguage?Engage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflect

假設(shè)你叫李明，你所在的學(xué)校擬組織一年一度的科技節(jié)。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)主席的身份，寫信給姊妹學(xué)校澳門濠江中學(xué)的外籍學(xué)生Linda，邀請(qǐng)她過來參加此次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括:注意：

1.可在寫作內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息。2.不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和地名。3.詞數(shù)80詞左右，作文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Engage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectLessontask:Improveyourfirstdraftwiththetipswelearnedtoday.

Attention：Pleaseimproveyourhandwriting.Engage:shareontopicExplore:learntowriteExperience:writetolearnEvaluate:assesstoreflectPair-work:Check(√)yourpartner’sseconddraftwiththechecklist.ItemPeercheck(√)PointLanguage9’1.Doesthewriterspellthewordscorrectly?是否有拼寫錯(cuò)誤？（紅筆圈出

）Yes/No2.Doesthewriterusethegrammarcorrectly?是否有語法錯(cuò)誤

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）Yes/No3.Doesthewriterusegoodexpression?是否使用好的表達(dá)（利用變-合-增技巧）

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）Yes/No4.Doesthewriterusetopicsentence?是否使用主題句（紅筆

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）Yes/NoAttentionIsthehandwritinggoodenough?Yes/NoCommentGoodpoints:.

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