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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ihadalwayswantedadogsinceyoung.Myparentswereagainsttheidea,sayingthattakingcareofadogwasalifetimecommitment.Onmytenthbirthday,Fathersteppedintothehouseandannounced,“Nancy,youhaveanewpuppy!”IshoutedindelightandrantowardsFather,onlytofinditwasatoypuppy.Myfacefell.Iturnedaway.Fatherexplained,“Thisisa‘Think-It-Over’puppy.Youshouldtrytakingcareofitbeforedecidingaboutarealdog.”Thepuppydidlooklikearealdogfromadistanceanditevenhadadogsmell.Insideitsbodywasacomputerprogrammedtomakebarkingsounds.Fatherhandedmeakey,whichcouldbestuckintoitsbacktostopitsbarking.Iacceptedthepuppy,whichInamedFridaysinceitwasFridaythatday.Thatevening,myfriendsandIdecidedtotakeFridaytoadogcafé.Itwasfreezingcold,soIwrappeditinablanketasifitwerearealdog.Thecomputerinsidecouldtellifsomeonetreateditbadly,likeshakingornotcaringforit,andIdidnotwantthatrecorded.Havingwaitedinline,wefinallygotatable.Thewaiter,notknowingIwascarryingafalsepuppy,askedattentivelyifIwouldneedabasketwithcushion.Itoldhim,“Oh,it’snotarealpuppy,but...”BeforeIcouldfinishmysentence,hegavemeanunpleasantlook,turnedandservedotherdinerswhowererighttheretoplaywiththecafé’sdogs.Imighthaveseemedunusualtohim.Duringourmeal,myfriendsandIreceivedstrangelooksfromtheotherdogownersinthecafé.Weignoredthemandcontinuedwithourownconversation.Afterdinner,wewenttoanearbyshoppingmall,wherecustomerswereselectingtheirfavorites.Myfriendswerelookingatclothes,butIcouldn’t.ThepuppyIwascarryingwasbecomingincreasinglyheavy.ExtremelytiredofFriday,Iputitdowninacornerandjustwanderedaround,seekingclothesIcouldtryon.注意:(1)續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenly,F(xiàn)ridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.ThemomentIgothome,IhandedFridaytoFather,tearsineyes.南希與小狗故事續(xù)寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)(兩段)?第一段:?場(chǎng)景渲染:細(xì)致描繪周五突然吠叫后商場(chǎng)內(nèi)的混亂景象,如周?chē)赇伒牡陠T探出頭張望,廣播聲因吠叫戛然而止,背景音樂(lè)也被掩蓋?!癝uddenly,Friday'sbarkingshatteredthenormalatmosphereofthemall.Shopassistantspokedtheirheadsoutfromthestores,andthemall'ssoft-spokenannouncementscametoanabrupthalt.Thebackgroundmusicwasdrownedoutbythecontinuousbarking,whichechoedthroughthevastspace,makingthewholeplaceseemchaotic.”?他人反應(yīng):進(jìn)一步刻畫(huà)周?chē)櫩偷姆磻?yīng),除了驚訝的目光,有的匆忙護(hù)住自己的寵物,有的開(kāi)始小聲議論,猜測(cè)這突如其來(lái)吠叫的緣由?!癈ustomerswiththeirownpetsquicklypulledthemcloser,lookingaroundnervously.Othersbegantowhisperamongthemselves,speculatingaboutwherethebarkingwascomingfromandwhythistoydogwasmakingsucharacket.”?自身行動(dòng):深入描述“我”在慌亂中尋找鑰匙關(guān)閉吠叫的過(guò)程,包括內(nèi)心的焦急,腦海中不斷閃過(guò)糟糕的念頭,以及雙手因緊張而不聽(tīng)使喚,連口袋的拉鏈都難以拉開(kāi)?!癕yheartpoundedinmychestlikeadrum.Thoughtsofhowembarrassingthissituationwasracedthroughmymind.MyhandstrembledsoviolentlythatIcouldbarelyunzipmybag.Ifumbledaround,pushingasidevariousitems,myeyesdartingbetweenthebagandthebarkingFriday,prayingtofindthekeysoon.”?朋友互動(dòng):生動(dòng)展現(xiàn)“我”關(guān)閉吠叫后朋友的不同反應(yīng),有的笑得前仰后合,眼淚都快出來(lái)了,有的則趕緊過(guò)來(lái)詢問(wèn)“我”是否沒(méi)事,幫忙整理弄亂的物品?!癘ncethebarkingceased,myfriends'reactionswereablendofamusementandconcern.Onefrienddoubledoverwithlaughter,tearsstreamingdowntheirface,whileanotherrushedtomyside,asking,‘Areyouokay,Nancy?Here,letmehelpyoutidyup.’”?第二段:?歸家狀態(tài):具體描述“我”回家時(shí)的狀態(tài),腳步沉重,像拖著千斤重?fù)?dān),身體微微顫抖,臉上還殘留著未干的淚痕。“ThemomentIsteppedthroughthefrontdoor,mystepswereheavy,asifIwerecarryingahugeburden.Mybodytrembledslightly,andthedried-uptearstainsonmyfacewerestillvisible.Ishuffledtowardsthelivingroom,whereFatherwassitting,feelinglikeIwaswalkingtomydoom.”?父子對(duì)話:詳細(xì)闡述父親安慰“我”時(shí)的表情、語(yǔ)氣和具體動(dòng)作,父親放下手中的報(bào)紙,起身迎向“我”,臉上帶著溫和的笑容,眼神中滿是理解與包容,然后輕輕將“我”擁入懷中?!癋atherputdownthenewspaperhewasreadingandstoodupassoonashesawme.Hewalkedtowardsmewithagentlesmileonhisface,hiseyesfilledwithunderstanding.Hewrappedmeinawarmhugandsaidsoftly,‘Nancy,don'tbesohardonyourself.Takingcareofalivingbeing,evenatoyone,isnotaseasyasitseems.’”?內(nèi)心轉(zhuǎn)變:深入描寫(xiě)“我”聽(tīng)了父親的話后的內(nèi)心變化,從最初的自我否定,覺(jué)得自己一無(wú)是處,到逐漸被父親的話語(yǔ)打動(dòng),開(kāi)始反思自己的不足,同時(shí)也對(duì)未來(lái)養(yǎng)真狗有了更清晰的認(rèn)識(shí)和期待?!癆tfirst,Iwasstilllostinself-blame,thinkingthatIwascompletelyincompetent.ButasFathercontinuedtospeak,hiswordsslowlysankin.IstartedtoreflectonmyactionsandrealizedthatIhadbeentoohasty.Aglimmerofhopeemergedinmyheart,andIlookedforwardtotheideaoflearningtotakecareofarealdogwithFather'sguidance.”?情感線(150字)?周五吠叫前,“我”在商場(chǎng)輕松自在,對(duì)帶著玩具狗出行感到新奇有趣。吠叫瞬間,尷尬與慌亂如潮水般將“我”淹沒(méi),在眾人目光下,緊張與不安達(dá)到頂點(diǎn)。關(guān)閉吠叫后,面對(duì)朋友的反應(yīng),羞愧感讓“我”無(wú)地自容?;丶颐鎸?duì)父親時(shí),沮喪和自責(zé)占據(jù)內(nèi)心,認(rèn)為自己辜負(fù)了父親的期望。而父親溫暖的安慰與鼓勵(lì),如同一束光,驅(qū)散了“我”內(nèi)心的陰霾,讓“我”重新燃起對(duì)養(yǎng)真狗的希望,從消沉走向積極。?故事線(6條)?“我”自幼渴望養(yǎng)狗,父母因養(yǎng)狗責(zé)任重大而反對(duì),十歲生日時(shí)父親帶來(lái)名為周五的玩具狗,讓“我”通過(guò)照顧它來(lái)決定是否養(yǎng)真狗。?當(dāng)晚,“我”和朋友帶著周五去狗咖啡館,因周五是玩具狗,遭受服務(wù)員異樣對(duì)待以及其他狗主人奇怪目光。?晚飯后前往商場(chǎng),“我”因嫌周五沉重將其放在角落,自己去挑選衣服。?周五在商場(chǎng)突然吠叫,引發(fā)商場(chǎng)內(nèi)混亂,眾人投來(lái)目光,“我”在慌亂中關(guān)閉吠叫,尷尬不已,朋友反應(yīng)不一。?“我”心情低落回家,哭著將周五交給父親,傾訴自己無(wú)法照顧好它的愧疚。?父親安慰“我”,告知養(yǎng)狗需耐心和責(zé)任,若“我”仍想養(yǎng)真狗,可從小事學(xué)起,“我”在父親鼓勵(lì)下重拾信心,期待未來(lái)養(yǎng)真狗。?主旨升華句5句英文?Thisincidentservesasavividillustrationthatthepursuitofourdreamsisoftenaccompaniedbyunexpectedhurdles,andonlybysummoningupthecouragetofacethemhead-oncanwefullyappreciatethesignificanceofouraspirations.?這次事件生動(dòng)地表明,我們對(duì)夢(mèng)想的追求往往伴隨著意想不到的障礙,只有鼓起勇氣直面它們,我們才能充分體會(huì)到自己愿望的重要性。?ThroughNancy'sexperiencewiththetoydog,itbecomesevidentthatresponsibilityisaweightymatterthatdemandsourfullattention,andeverylearningprocess,regardlessofsuccessorfailure,isanessentialbuildingblockinourgrowthjourney.?通過(guò)南希與玩具狗的經(jīng)歷,很明顯責(zé)任是一件需要我們?nèi)褙炞?duì)待的重要事情,每一個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程,無(wú)論成敗,都是我們成長(zhǎng)道路上的重要基石。?ThesuddenbarkingofthetoydogandNancy'ssubsequentself-awarenessvividlyhighlightthesignificanceofperseveranceandself-reflectioninthefaceofdifficulties,astheyarethefundamentalelementsforpersonalgrowthandself-improvement.?玩具狗的突然吠叫以及南希隨后的自我認(rèn)知,生動(dòng)地凸顯了在困難面前堅(jiān)持和自我反思的重要性,因?yàn)樗鼈兪莻€(gè)人成長(zhǎng)和自我提升的基本要素。?Thisnarrativeactsasapowerfulreminderthatourinitialpreconceivednotionsaboutthingsfrequentlydeviatefromreality,anditisthroughreal-worldexperiencesthatwecangainamoreprofoundunderstandingofourselvesandtheworldsurroundingus.?這個(gè)故事有力地提醒我們,我們對(duì)事物最初的先入之見(jiàn)常常與現(xiàn)實(shí)不符,正是通過(guò)現(xiàn)實(shí)世界的經(jīng)歷,我們才能更深刻地理解自己和周?chē)氖澜纭?FromNancy'sinitialdisappointmenttoherrekindledhope,itisclearthatsetbacksaretransient,andwiththesupportofthoseclosetous,wepossessthestrengthtosurmountobstaclesandprogresstowardsourdreams.?從南希最初的失望到重新燃起希望,很明顯挫折是短暫的,在身邊人的支持下,我們有力量克服障礙,朝著夢(mèng)想前進(jìn)。?寫(xiě)作示范一?Suddenly,Fridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.Theshrillsoundpiercedthroughthemall'scalmness,instantlydrawingalleyes.Shoppersfrozeintheirtracks,somewiththeirhandsstillreachingforitemsontheshelves.Agroupofchildrennearbyshriekedinexcitement,thinkingitwasarealpuppy.Ifeltarushofbloodtomyface,myhandsshakinguncontrollablyasIdugthroughmybagforthekey.MyheartwaspoundingsohardthatIcouldhearitinmyears.Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,IfoundthekeyandmanagedtosilenceFriday.Myfriends,whowereinitiallyshocked,nowhadamixofamusementandconcernontheirfaces.Oneofthemjoked,“Well,thatsureliveneduptheplace,Nancy!”ButIwastoomortifiedtolaugh.?ThemomentIgothome,IhandedFridaytoFather,tearsstreamingdownmyface.“I'macompletefailure,Dad.Icouldn'tevenhandleatoydogwithoutmakingamessofthings,”Isobbed.FathergentlytookFridayfrommeandplaceditaside.Hethenwrappedmeinawarmhug.“Nancy,it'snotaboutfailure.Takingcareofalivingbeing,evenapretendone,isabigresponsibility.Fridaywasmeanttoteachyouthat.Butifyoustillhaveyourheartsetonarealdog,wecanstartsmallandlearntogether.Thisisjustasmallstepontheway.”Ilookedupathim,aglimmerofhopeinmytear-filledeyes.Irealizedthatthisexperiencewasavaluablelesson,andwithFather'ssupport,Icouldstillpursuemydreamofhavingadog.?寫(xiě)作示范二?Suddenly,Fridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.Thebarkingechoedthroughthemall,causingastir.Peoplestoppedtheirconversationsandturnedtolook.Somerushedtowardsthesourceofthenoise,thinkingitwasalostpuppy.Iwasinastateofpanic,myhandstremblingasIsearchedforthekey.Idroppedmybagintheprocess,spillingitscontentsalloverthefloor.Myfriendswerelookingatme,someinshock,sometryingtohelp.Afterseveraltensemoments,Ifinallyfoundthekeyandturnedoffthebarking.IwassoembarrassedthatIwantedtodisappear.?ThemomentIgothome,IhandedFridaytoFather,myshouldersslumped.“I'msorry,Dad.IthoughtIcoulddoit,butImessedup.Ican'teventakecareofatoydogproperly,”Isaid,myvoicechokedwithemotion.Fathersatmedownandlookedatmekindly.“Nancy,it'sokay.Takingcareofadogisahugecommitment.That'swhywegotFriday.It'snotaboutwhathappenedtoday.It'saboutlearningfromit.Ifyou'restilldetermined,wecantryagain.We'lltakeitonestepatatime.”Inodded,feelingasenseofrelief.IknewthatwithFather'sguidance,Icouldovercomethechallengesoftakingcareofarealdoginthefuture.?參考答案Suddenly,Fridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.Itbarkedsoloudlyasifprotestingagainstmypr
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