高二期中考應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作假設(shè)你是李華。為了響應(yīng)國(guó)家“了解中國(guó)科技發(fā)展的偉大成就，堅(jiān)定文化自信”的號(hào)召，你校英語(yǔ)周活動(dòng)計(jì)劃舉辦一場(chǎng)主題為“AGreatScientist”的演講比賽，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿參賽。內(nèi)容包括:

1.介紹一位科學(xué)家；

2.你的感想。注意：(1)寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)分析規(guī)定話題的演講稿和文章投稿本質(zhì)上就是命題作文。英語(yǔ)命題作文的難點(diǎn)往往在于寫(xiě)作用詞和主題的關(guān)聯(lián)性。比如，介紹科學(xué)家的時(shí)候，考生光簡(jiǎn)單粗暴地套用模版稱“某某人偉大！某某人為人類作出了重大貢獻(xiàn)！”是遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠的?？忌€需要展現(xiàn)出和科學(xué)主題相關(guān)的一些詞匯，比如：科學(xué)家從事的具體領(lǐng)取、所獲成就和獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)等。這些和主題相關(guān)的詞匯考生只有通過(guò)平時(shí)廣泛閱讀和刻意積累才能獲得?？紙?chǎng)上臨場(chǎng)瞎編是不現(xiàn)實(shí)的。另外，提醒各位仔細(xì)讀題“了解中國(guó)科技發(fā)展的偉大成就”。不必多說(shuō)，介紹同樣為人類科技進(jìn)步做出過(guò)貢獻(xiàn)的外國(guó)科學(xué)家在這次寫(xiě)作中不適用。

寫(xiě)作提綱（一）第一段：引入主題并介紹科學(xué)家開(kāi)場(chǎng)表達(dá)對(duì)參與演講比賽的榮幸以及主題的重要性。簡(jiǎn)要介紹要講述的科學(xué)家的名字及領(lǐng)域。（二）第二段：詳細(xì)闡述科學(xué)家的成就及貢獻(xiàn)描述科學(xué)家的主要研究成果及其對(duì)相關(guān)領(lǐng)域的重大影響。提及科學(xué)家在研究過(guò)程中克服的困難和挑戰(zhàn)，以及他們所展現(xiàn)出的堅(jiān)韌精神?？梢灾v述一些具體的事例或故事來(lái)突出科學(xué)家的貢獻(xiàn)和特質(zhì)。（三）第三段：表達(dá)自己的感想說(shuō)明科學(xué)家的成就對(duì)你個(gè)人的啟發(fā)和激勵(lì)。強(qiáng)調(diào)科學(xué)家的貢獻(xiàn)對(duì)國(guó)家、社會(huì)乃至全球的積極意義。呼吁大家向科學(xué)家學(xué)習(xí)，為實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想和為社會(huì)做貢獻(xiàn)而努力。語(yǔ)言積累“Agreatscientistwhohasleftanindeliblemarkonthehistoryofscienceis[scientist'sname].”（一位在科學(xué)史上留下不可磨滅印記的偉大科學(xué)家是[科學(xué)家名字]。）“[Scientist'sname]dedicatedhis/herentirelifetothepursuitofknowledgeandtheexplorationof[fieldofstudy].”（[科學(xué)家名字]將他/她的一生都奉獻(xiàn)給了對(duì)知識(shí)的追求和[研究領(lǐng)域]的探索。）“Throughyearsofpainstakingresearchandunwaveringperseverance,[scientist]madeabreakthroughdiscoverythatrevolutionizedthe[field].”（經(jīng)過(guò)多年的艱苦研究和堅(jiān)定不移的毅力，[科學(xué)家]取得了一項(xiàng)突破性的發(fā)現(xiàn)，徹底改變了[領(lǐng)域]。）“Despitefacingnumerousobstaclesandsetbacks,[scientist]nevergaveupandcontinuedtostriveforexcellence.”（盡管面臨無(wú)數(shù)的障礙和挫折，[科學(xué)家]從未放棄，繼續(xù)追求卓越。）“Theachievementof[scientist]notonlybroughtgreatbenefitstohumanitybutalsoinspiredgenerationsofyoungpeopletopursuetheirdreamsinscience.”（[科學(xué)家]的成就不僅給人類帶來(lái)了巨大的利益，也激勵(lì)了一代又一代的年輕人在科學(xué)領(lǐng)域追求他們的夢(mèng)想。）“Iamdeeplyinspiredbythespiritof[scientist],whoalwaysremainedcuriousandpassionateaboutscientificresearch.”（我深受[科學(xué)家]精神的啟發(fā)，他/她總是對(duì)科學(xué)研究保持著好奇和熱情。）“Weshouldlearnfrom[scientist]andapplytheirspiritofinnovationandperseveranceinourownlivesandstudies.”（我們應(yīng)該向[科學(xué)家]學(xué)習(xí)，在我們自己的生活和學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)用他們的創(chuàng)新和堅(jiān)持不懈的精神。）“[Scientist's]contributiontothecountryandtheworldisimmeasurable,anditservesasapowerfulreminderoftheimportanceofscientificresearch.”（[科學(xué)家]對(duì)國(guó)家和世界的貢獻(xiàn)是不可估量的，它有力地提醒了我們科學(xué)研究的重要性。）“Letusfollowinthefootstepsof[scientist]andstrivetomakeourowncontributionstotheprogressofsocietyandthedevelopmentofscience.”（讓我們跟隨[科學(xué)家]的腳步，努力為社會(huì)的進(jìn)步和科學(xué)的發(fā)展做出自己的貢獻(xiàn)。）“Thestoryof[scientist]isatestamenttothepowerofhumanintelligenceandthelimitlesspossibilitiesofscientificexploration.”（[科學(xué)家]的故事證明了人類智慧的力量和科學(xué)探索的無(wú)限可能性。）寫(xiě)作示范篇（一）AGreatScientistDearfriends,Iamhonoredtostandheretodayandsharewithyouthestoryofagreatscientist-YuanLongping.YuanLongpingisafamousagriculturalscientist.Hededicatedhislifetohybridriceresearch.Hiseffortshavesignificantlyincreasedriceyields,helpingtofeedcountlesspeoplearoundtheworld.Hespentdecadesworkinginthefields,facingvariousdifficultiessuchasunpredictableweatherandcomplexexperimentalconditions.Butheneveryielded.Histeam'ssuccessindevelopinghigh-yieldhybridricevarietieshasbeenagame-changeringlobalagriculture.IamdeeplytouchedbyYuanLongping'sdedicationandperseverance.Hisworkshowsthatwithdeterminationandhardwork,wecanachievegreatthingsandmakearealdifferenceinpeople'slives.Italsoremindsusoftheimportanceofagriculturalinnovationfornationalfoodsecurityandglobalwell-being.Weshouldlearnfromhimandstrivetocontributetosocietyinourownways,whetherinthefieldofscienceorinotherareas.Let'scherishthefoodwehaveandrememberthegreatcontributionsmadebyscientistslikeYuanLongping.Thankyou!（二）AGreatScientistDearclassmates,Today,Iwanttointroducearemarkablescientist-QianXuesen.QianXuesenisapioneerinthefieldofaerospace.HemadeoutstandingcontributionstoChina'sspaceprogram.HereturnedtoChinadespitemanydifficultiesandobstaclesabroad,anddedicatedhimselftotheresearchanddevelopmentofChina'smissileandspacetechnology.Underhisleadership,Chinaachievedremarkableprogressinaerospace.HisscientificvisionandleadershiphavelaidasolidfoundationforChina'smodernizationintheaerospacefield.QianXuesen'sstorymakesmerealizethepowerofpatriotismandthepursuitofscientifictruth.Hisunwaveringbeliefanddedicationtothemotherlandaretrulyinspiring.Itencouragesustohaveabroadvision,pursueourdreamsbravely,andcontributetotheprosperityanddevelopmentofourcountry.Weshouldtakehimasanexample,studyhard,andstrivetobecomeusefultalentsforthecountry.Let'sworktogethertocreateabetterfutureandcontinuetowritethegloriouschapterofChina'sscientificandtechnologicaldevelopment.Thankyou!參考答案(117words)AGreatScientistGoodmorning,everyone.Today,Iwanttointroduceanextraordinaryscientist:TuYouyou.SheisaChinesepharmacologistwhodiscoveredartemisinin,agroundbreakingtreatmentformalaria.Herresearchhassavedmillionsoflivesworldwide.

TuYouyou'sjourneybeganwhenshewantedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,adiseasethataffectsmanyintropicalregions.Afteryearsofdedicationandhardwork,herdiscoveryrevolutionizedmedicineandearnedhertheNobelPrizeinPhysiologyorMedicinein2015.

Herstoryinspiresmedeeply.Itremindsusthatscienceisnotjustaboutknowledge,butalsoaboutcompassionanddetermination.TuYouyou’sachievementsinstillinmeasenseofprideandculturalconfidence,showingthatwecanmakeadifferencethroughourefforts.Letushonorherlegacybypursuingourpassionsinscienceandcontributingtosociety.Thankyou!寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)總體上看，寫(xiě)作語(yǔ)言地道精煉，文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，字?jǐn)?shù)控制恰當(dāng)。從內(nèi)容上看，這篇寫(xiě)作的最大亮點(diǎn)是選材合理。選擇了獲得諾貝爾獎(jiǎng)、具有較高國(guó)際知名度的中