備戰(zhàn)2024年中考英語書面表達(dá)類型模版與能力拔尖必備09慰問信【真題示例】（2022·遼寧沈陽(yáng)·統(tǒng)考一模）假定你是李華，你了解到在英國(guó)的筆友James在學(xué)校運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)賽跑比賽中弄傷了腳，請(qǐng)你給他寫封慰問信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示慰問；2.給予建議；3.表示祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100。開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.短文須包括所給內(nèi)容信息。可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。HiJames,I’msorrytohearthatyouhurtyourfootataschoolsportsmeeting______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】HiJames,I’msorrytohearthatyouhurtyourfootataschoolsportsmeeting.Iknowyouareverysadbecauseyoudon’tgetanyprizeduringthissportsmeeting.Don’tbediscouraged.Cheerupanddosomethingtogetbetter.Ithinkyoushouldhavearestandlieonthebed.Don’twalkorrun.Takethedoctor’sadviceandpaymoreattentiontoyourfoot.Youneedn’tworryabouthomework.Youcanaskyourclassmatesandteachersforhelp.Meanwhile,youshouldeathealthily.Eatmorevegetablesandfruit,andtheyaregoodforyourhealth.Ihopeyoucangetbettersoon.Yours,LiHua【必背句式】開頭句型1.

Iwas(awfully)sorrytohearthat

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句子

(your

teamlostthegame.)2.

Iwasshockedtohearof

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sth.(yourfailureintheexam.)3.

I’mwritingtotellyouhowsorry

I

amtohearabout

sth.

(yourloss

…)4.

Knowingyoursituation,

I

feelterriblysorryabout

sth.…中間段句型1.

Iquietunderstandhowyoufeelnow，but...我特別能理解你現(xiàn)在的感覺，但...2.

Youhavedevotedyourselfto...你在...方面付出了大量的精力和時(shí)間3.

Butasweallknow,itisextremelydifficulttodo...但是眾所周知，做...本身就極其困難4.

Toprepare...,youhavemadeeveryeffort.為了準(zhǔn)備這次...,你已經(jīng)盡了最大努力5.

It’snotyourfaulttodo........不是你的錯(cuò)結(jié)尾句型1.

Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,don’thesitatetoletmeknow.2.

If

I

candoanythingforyou,doletmeknow.3.

Remember,wewon’tbefarawayifyouneedanyhelp!4.

Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.【模版示例】模板=1\*GB3①Dear,Iwasverysorrytohearthat.（交代事由）It’sunderstandableforyouto.（表明主要觀點(diǎn)）However,ifyoucan

adopt

different

perspectives,.（提出建議）First,it’snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,foryoucaneitherwinorlose.Ifyou’vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritsto

faceupto（直面）theresult?Anyway,.Besides,youcanalso.Therefore,if,youwill.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua模板=2\*GB3②Dear______,Iam______,Iamverysorrytohaveheardofyourpresentsituationthatyouaresobitterafter________./Iamshockedatthenewsabout______________(引出具體實(shí)情，表示惋惜和同情)Atpresent,_________decidesthatitwillgiveyou________whenyoureceivealetter.Thatwillofferyousomuchcourage.Ihopeyouwillmakeeffortstoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty,nomatterhowharditis.Youaresuretomakeit.(進(jìn)一步安慰并鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方)Iwilltrymybestto________,whichmayhelpyou.Itwillgivemorecouragetoliveon.(表示自己意愿提供幫助)Mayyourecoversoon./Goodluckandbestwishestoyou!(表達(dá)愿望與祝福)Yourssincerely,__________________【突破策略】一、題型特點(diǎn)慰問信是向失敗者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天災(zāi)人禍的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此類信要寫得及時(shí)、簡(jiǎn)明扼要，感情要真誠(chéng)，措辭要貼切，盡量以樂觀的口吻減輕親友的煩惱和痛苦，并鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方對(duì)日后煩人生活、學(xué)習(xí)、工作充滿信心。二、寫作思路第一步：引出事實(shí)，表達(dá)惋惜和同情；第二步：安慰對(duì)方或鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方，預(yù)測(cè)未來；第三步：表達(dá)愿望和祝福。二、套用句式：1.Iwasshockedatthenewsabouttheearthquakein…聽聞……地震的消息我很震驚。2.On…,anincredibleandunknownearthquakesuddenlyhappenedin…,…Province.在……，……省……市突然發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)驚人的、未曾預(yù)知的地震。3.Wearesosorrytohearthenewsabouttheearthquake.聽到地震的消息我們很難過。4.Weareverysorrytolearnthat…我們非常遺憾地得知……5.Ijustheardthatyou’vebeenonthesicknesslastweek.我無法告知你當(dāng)你聽到你發(fā)生事故我是多么難過。6.Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyouraccident.我剛剛得知上個(gè)星期你病了。7.IwasdeeplyconcernedwhenIlearnedthat…當(dāng)我聽說……時(shí)，我非常關(guān)心8.Ijustwantedtoletyouknowhowconcernedweare.我只想要你知道我們是多么擔(dān)憂。9.Ihopeyouaregettingsomerelieffromthepain.我真心希望能減輕你的痛苦。10.Wearehopingforyourquickreturntohealth/earlyrecovery/rapidrecovery.我們真心/祈禱你能很快完全康復(fù)。11.Wearelookingforwardto/hopingandprayingforyourspeedyandfullrecovery.我們真心希望你早日康復(fù)。12.Onlywehavetheperseverancecanwedefeatthenaturaldisaster.我們只有不屈不撓才能戰(zhàn)勝自然災(zāi)難。13.Pleaseextendourdeepsympathytoyourfamily.請(qǐng)向你的家人轉(zhuǎn)達(dá)我們最深切的同情。14.IfthereisanythingIcandotohelpyou,pleaseletmeknow.如果需要我的幫助，請(qǐng)告知。【寫作演練】1．假定你是李華，通過對(duì)話了解到你的好朋友Paul面對(duì)過去長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的網(wǎng)課及將要到來的考試等問題，心理壓力很大，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封安慰信。內(nèi)容包括：1、表示安慰問候；2、提供減輕壓力的建議或辦法；3、美好祝愿。要點(diǎn)：1、詞數(shù)80—100：開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3、作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)校名和姓名。DearPaul,Iknowyourproblemsandrecentsituationthroughthelastconversation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearPaul,Iknowyourproblemsandrecentsituationthroughthelastconversation.Facedwiththelongonlinecoursesinthepastandthecomingexams,youfeltalotofpressure.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.First,youshouldlearntorelaxyourself.Youcanlistentosomemusicordosomethingyoufeelcomfortable.Next,youshoulddosomesportseveryday.Sportscanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.Atlast,smileatyourselfeveryday.Ithelpsyoukeephappy.It’sverycommonthateveryonecanmeetdifficultiesinthelife.Ihopemysuggestionscangiveyousomehelp.Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】1.題干解讀：該題目要求寫封信安慰好友Paul，他面對(duì)過去長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的網(wǎng)課和即將到來的考試感到心理壓力很大。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)一共有3個(gè)，寫作時(shí)要根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)去寫。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：人稱以第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，先敘述一下Paul的問題，然后給出建議，最好不要少于3條，最后表達(dá)對(duì)他的祝福。行文時(shí)注意前后連貫，保證條理清晰。2．你是班長(zhǎng)李華，得知同班同學(xué)Stella生病需要在家休息一段時(shí)間。你希望寫一封慰問信轉(zhuǎn)達(dá)全班同學(xué)對(duì)她的關(guān)心和祝愿。信中包含以下要點(diǎn)：1表達(dá)關(guān)心；詢問病情2.給予建議：謹(jǐn)遵醫(yī)囑，保持良好心情3.提供幫助，........(請(qǐng)至少補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)）4.鼓勵(lì)及祝愿注意：（1）文章80-100左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）（2）文章內(nèi)容必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，并且有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮（3）不得透露學(xué)號(hào)/姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分DearStellaIamsorrytohearthatyouapplyforatemporaryleavebecauseofyourillness._______________________________________________________________________________________Cheers,LiHua【參考范文】DearStellaIamsorrytohearthatyouapplyforatemporaryleavebecauseofyourillness.Isitserious？Ihopeyou'reallright.Ihavesomeadvicethatmaybehelpfultoyou.First,youshoulddoexerciseeveryday.Second,youshouldalwayseatsomehealthyfood,likefruitandvegetables.Asthesayinggoes“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway”.Third,youshouldenjoyyourselfeverydayandstayhappy.Themostimportantthingisyoushouldlistentothedoctor.Whenyoucomebacktoschool,Icanhelpyouwithlessons.Ifyouneedanything,Iwillbealwaysready.Allthestudentshopethatyouwillbebettersoon.Cheers,LiHua【寫作解析】題干解讀：這是一篇書信作文。本文給出了需要包含的內(nèi)容，并且有發(fā)揮的部分，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把相關(guān)內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，用英語把要點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)要表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容。可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，寫作中適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞以突出層次，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文以第一人稱書寫，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要求中包含的部分全部給出，并做了發(fā)揮。First、Second、Third序數(shù)詞的應(yīng)用讓作文更有條理性。文中的諺語為作文增色不少。高分亮點(diǎn)：賓語從句；behelpfulto；Asthesayinggoes；enjoyyourself；help…with…；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。3．你校英語校報(bào)有一個(gè)名為JustAsk的專欄。平日你校學(xué)生會(huì)將自己的困惑投稿到這個(gè)專欄，小編則需對(duì)投稿進(jìn)行回復(fù)。假設(shè)你是李華，恰好是這個(gè)專欄的小編。近日你收到一封來自Amanda的投稿，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你閱讀此封投稿并回復(fù)。Ihavehadalotofarguments(爭(zhēng)吵)withmyparentssinceIbecameaninth-grader.Weargueaboutdifferentthingsbutmostlyaboutmyschoolwork.Forexample,Iamneverallowedtousethemobilephonebecausetheywantmetopayfullattentiontomystudy.Ifeelquiteuncomfortableandthisterriblefeelingislikeadarkcloudaboveme,sowejustkeeparguing.IknowitiswrongbutwhatshouldIdo?Yours,Amanda回信的開頭已給出?；匦判韬w以下要點(diǎn)：1.表示關(guān)心與慰問；2.分析學(xué)生提到的問題；3.針對(duì)問題給出合理的建議；1)告訴父母你的真實(shí)感受，被控制的感覺讓你感到不舒服；2)制定合理使用手機(jī)的規(guī)則，……3)……要求：1.詞數(shù)要求80詞以上；2.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名等；3.需恰當(dāng)?shù)淖晕野l(fā)揮，使文章更完整。提示詞匯：充滿壓力的stressed

合理地reasonablyDearAmanda,Iamsorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearAmanda,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleincommunicatingwithyourparents.IcantotallyunderstandhowupsetyouarerightnowasIhadthesimilarproblemlikeyoubefore.Herearesomeusefultips.Ifyourparentsa