WriteablogpostUnit3TheInternetWireFraud（電信詐騙）cyberbully(網(wǎng)絡(luò)暴力）identitytheft(身份盜竊)Informationleakage(信息泄露)troll(網(wǎng)絡(luò)挑事者)Whatproblemsarementionedinthepicture?OnlineSafetyProblemsLeadinHowcanwestaysafeonline?2Whattypeofpassageisit?AblogTitleBeginning/IntroductionBodyEndingCommentstructurePre-writingReadparagraph1

andfindoutthemainideaoftheblogpost1TodayIthoughtI'dblogaboutaquestion

thathasbeenaskedmanytimes—howdoyoustaysafeonlineandavoidbadexperiencesontheInternet?I'mnotanexpert,butmanyyearsasabloggerhavetaughtmeathingortwo.IntroductionTellthereaderaboutyourselfandwhatyouknowaboutthetopic.____________________。OnlineSafety/HowtoStaySafeOnlineTrytowriteatitlefortheblogpost.Pre-writing

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andfindout3guidelinestheauthorprovided1BodyTellthereaderwhattheyshoulddoorkeepinmind.Definenewwordsorkeyterms.dosdon'ts

If…leavethesiteimmediatelyprotectyourprivacybepolitegiveoutyouraddress/phonenumberTip1：Useimperativesentences(祈使句)tomakethelanguagepowerful,andpersuasive.Pre-writing

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connected?besides;inaddition;additionally;moreover;furthermore;what'smore;ontopofthat;firstofall;tobegin/startwith;inthefirstplace;firstandforemostlastly;mostimportantly,lastbutnottheleast;intheendSignalWordsTip2：Uselinkingwordstoexpressideasclearly,logicallyandcoherently(連貫地).Pre-writing

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andfindout3onlinetroublemakerstheblogpostmentions.1IdentitytheftTroll

Cyberbully

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…stirup...definitionLikeatroll...however..√Pre-writing

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andchoosethebestanswer.1EndingEndbyaskingthereaderstowritecomments.stronginteractivity(互動(dòng)性)ToheardifferentvoicesfromtheoutsideworldBlogpostTitleintroductionBodyEndingTellthemainidea.Introducethetopic.Backgroundinformation.Guidelines/suggestions/tipsUselinkingwordstoexpressclearly.Useimperativesentencestomakethelanguagepowerful.Adddetails.（Examples/Definitions/Comparison)Asummaryofablogpost.

Headline標(biāo)題醒目Introduction引入話題+背景Ending邀請(qǐng)?jiān)u論HowtowriteablogpostOrganizationofablogpost博文結(jié)構(gòu)Body圍繞話題提出建議Use

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havelearnttowriteablogpostaboutonlinesafety.SocialnetworkingappsDon’tpostpersonalinformation.Don’tbelieveeverything.Bepolite.OnlinechatroomsDon’tgiveouttoomuchinformation.Nevermeetsomeoneyoumetonlinealone.Chooseoneofthetopicsbelowandusethenotestodraftyourblogpost.Writing

2Usefulexpressionsaboutgivingadvice：EvaluationCriteria評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)itemsScores(25’)Contents內(nèi)容(10’)Introducethetopic

Includeexamples,comparisons,orexplanationsAskreaderstoleavecommentsorsuggestionsStructure(6’)Thetipsandsuggestionsare

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;grammarorspellingmistakesOthers(3’)Handwriting書寫Let'spolishthepassage.1.當(dāng)談及網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物安全，作為一個(gè)有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的網(wǎng)民，我確信對(duì)此我還是

略知一二的。Para1:introduction

2.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的快速發(fā)展，在過去幾年里網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物也大幅度地增長(zhǎng)。但網(wǎng)上

購(gòu)物真的安全嗎？當(dāng)然不！WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternet,onlineshoppinghasgreatlygrowninthepastfewyears.However,isonlineshoppingreallysafe?Ofcoursenot!3.雖然網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物給我們帶來極大的便利，但也有著很多不安全的隱患。我

們要如何使網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物更加安全呢？Althoughonlineshoppingbringsusgreatconvenience,therearemanyinsecurerisks.Howshouldwemakeonlineshoppingsafer?1.有著以下幾點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)單的建議，你可以愉快地享受網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的便利。Para1:introductionWiththesefollowingsimpletips,youcanenjoytheconvenienceofonlineshoppingwithmuchpleasure.2.當(dāng)你在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物時(shí)，這些簡(jiǎn)單的建議能夠幫助你避免一些糟糕的購(gòu)物

體驗(yàn)。Whenyoushoponline,thesesimplesuggestionscanhelpavoidsometerribleexperiences.3.建議當(dāng)你在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物前，有必要閱讀以下幾點(diǎn)建議，這會(huì)使網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物

毫無風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。+transitionalsentences過渡句

首先，挑選熟悉的購(gòu)物網(wǎng)站。最好在你了解且信任的網(wǎng)站上購(gòu)物，它會(huì)保護(hù)好你的隱私。如果你很需要從不知名的網(wǎng)址購(gòu)買商品，在購(gòu)買前先試著去瀏覽一下網(wǎng)站的其他評(píng)價(jià)。Para2:rules/advice

Firstofall,choosethewebsiteyouarefamiliarwith.It’sbesttoshopfromthewebsiteyouknowandtrust,becauseitcanprotectyourprivacy.Ifyoufeeltheneedtoshopfromanunknownwebsite,trytogothroughothers’reviewsonit.linkingwords+imperativesentences其次，使用較為復(fù)雜的密碼。只有幾個(gè)數(shù)字或字母的簡(jiǎn)單的密碼很容易被入侵(hack)。為了安全起見,更加推薦使用較為復(fù)雜的密碼。而且,不要輕易泄露你的密碼。Para2:rules/advice

linkingwords+imperativesentences最后，勿使用公共網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物。使用公共網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物有著巨大的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。你可以使用手機(jī)熱點(diǎn)(hotspot)去購(gòu)物，而不是公共網(wǎng)絡(luò)?；蛘?，可以將你想要購(gòu)買的商品加入購(gòu)物車，直到回家后再使用安全網(wǎng)絡(luò)去購(gòu)買。Para2:rules/adviceThird,don’tshoponpublicnetwork.ShoppingonpublicWifiisahugerisk.(Youcan)useyourphoneasahotspotinsteadofpublicWifi.Or,addthoseitemsthatyouwanttobuyintoyourshoppingcartandshopuntilyouareathomeandonyoursafenetwork.linkingwords+imperativesentences1.你有什么關(guān)于安全網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的建議嗎？歡迎在下方評(píng)論！2.歡迎大家分享自己的故事和發(fā)表任何與安全網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的評(píng)論！Samplewriting1:SampleSamplewriting2:HowtostaysafeintheonlinechatroomTodayIthoughtI'dblogaboutaquestionthathasbeenaskedmanytimes---howdoyoustaysafeonlineandavoidbadexperiencesintheonlinechatroom?I'mnotanexpert,butmanyyearsasabloggerhavetaughtmeathingortwo.

Firstofall,there'sthegoldenruleoftheInternet:keepoutofwhatmakesyouuneasy.Don'tpostcommentsorclickonanything.Besides,protectyourprivacy.Don'tgiveouttoomuchprivateinformationlikeyouraddress,phonenumbers,theIDnumbers,etc.