Let’stalkteens主題寫作指導(dǎo)GrowingpainsLanguageBankmonsymptomsofgrowingpains(parents)don’tunderstandthem/valuetheireffort(parents)havetoomuchcontrolovertheirlife(parents)expecttoomuchofthem(期望過高)Haveunrealistic(不切實(shí)際的)expectationsoftheirchildrenFailtomeet/liveuptotheirparents’expectationsStruggletokeepupwiththeirclassmatesinstudiesStruggletogetalongwithclassmates/friendsFeelleftout/isolated(孤立)byclassmatesStruggletobalancetheiracademicworkloadwithextracurricular(課外的)activitiesHavedifficultystayingawayfromdigitaldistractions(數(shù)字干擾)Finditchallengingtomaintaininterestandenthusiasm(熱情)intheirstudiesBefaced/confronted(面臨)withgreatstressandanxietyfromstudy/examsSuggestionsforaddressingparentchildtensionsForparents:Showconstant(持續(xù)的)concern/loveandsupportforteensShowrespectforteenagers’privacy(隱私)/opinionsandideasListentoteenagersactivelywithoutjudgmentSetclearboundaries(界限)andruleswhileallowingroomfornegotiation(協(xié)商)AvoidconstantcriticismandfocusonpraisingtheireffortsandachievementsCreateopportunitiesforqualityfamilytimesuchregularmealsandsharedactivitiesDon’tmakeallthedecisionsforteenagersDon’tcontroleverything/allowteenagerstohavecontrolovertheirownlivesDon’tignorechildren’sinnerthoughtsDon’tattachtoomuchimportanceto(過分重視)scoresDon’tpushthemtoohard(逼迫太緊)instudiesDon’texpecttoomuchofteensForteenagers:keepabalancebetweenrelaxationandstudyexpressgratitude(感恩)toparents/showappreciationforparents’effortsandguidanceExpressyourthoughtsandfeelingscalmlyandrespectfullymunicatewithparentslikefriendsTrytounderstandyourparents’pointofviewbyputtingyourselfintheirshoes(設(shè)身處地)Takepartinsharedactivitiesofthewholefamily/ofclassmatesDon’tblame/quarrelwithourparentsforoverprotecting/misunderstandingyouDon’tturnadeafearto(充耳不聞)parents’suggestionsDon’tlosetemper(發(fā)脾氣)easilyMakescientificplansfordailytasksandsticktothemTurntoteachersforhelpwhenfacedwithlearningdifficultiesBeopentoothers’criticismBefriendlyandhelpfultoclassmateswhenTakeresponsibilityforyourownactionsandmistakesAboutLettersofAdvice(建議信)OutlinePara.1:寫信原因（題干背景信息介紹）+寫信目的Para.2:建議的具體內(nèi)容+建議原因（切忌假大空，要具體、可行、有針對(duì)性和說服力）Para.3:希望采納建議+表達(dá)美好祝愿Usefulsentences[Thebeginningpart]呈現(xiàn)問題，表明寫作目的：1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.../conveymyconcernabout...2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.3)Inresponsetoyourlettertellingmeyouhopeto...,Ihavesomeideasforyou.4)I’msorrytohearyou'rehavingdifficulty/troublein...;I’monlytoowillingtohelpyouandmytipsareasfollows…[Themainbody]建議內(nèi)容并說明建議好處：1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...,sothat...2)You’dbetter.../It’sbetterto...Inthatway,...3)Whynotdo...?/Whataboutdoing...?/It’sstronglyadvised/suggestedthatyoushould...Thus,...4)IfIwereyou,Iwould.../Itwouldbeagoodchoiceto...Bydoingthat,...[Theendingpart]希望建議有用或被接受。1)Ihopemysuggestionscanmakeadifferencetoyou.2)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.3)Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.4)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.Sample假定你是李華，你的朋友Rebecca寫信告訴你，她的母親過度關(guān)注她的學(xué)習(xí)，希望她把時(shí)間都用在學(xué)習(xí)上，她感到壓力很大，心情低落。請(qǐng)給她寫一封信，給出你的建議，幫助她擺脫困境。要點(diǎn)如下：

安慰對(duì)方；2.

提出建議(注意：1.

詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.

可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。)DearRebecca,Iamsorrytohearthat____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Warmregards,LiHua【寫作點(diǎn)撥】一、審題定調(diào)本寫作任務(wù)要求給朋友寫一封建議信，屬于應(yīng)用文。建議信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建議，并說明理由，以便讓對(duì)方接受自己的想法或主張。建議信要給出寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容和提出建議的理由。語氣要得當(dāng)，既要委婉禮貌，又要有說服力。謀篇布局主題就如何解決和父母矛盾給朋友建議體裁應(yīng)用文人稱以第一、第二人稱為主時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主布局第一部分：進(jìn)行安慰，表明寫作意圖；第二部分：根據(jù)提示，給出解決朋友與父母矛盾的建議及理由；第三部分：表達(dá)希望和祝愿（希望朋友考慮建議）。SampleappreciationDearRebecca,I'msorrytohearthatyou'refeelinganxiousaboutthepressurefromyourmother.I’monlytoowillingtohelpyouandmytipsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,Iwouldsuggesthavinganopenandhonestconversationwithyourmotheraboutyourfeelings.Youshouldletherknowthatyouappreciatehersupportandconcern,butrelaxationandleisurearealsoanessentialpartofahealthyandfulfilled（充實(shí)的）life.municationiskey,anditwillhelpherunderstandyourperspective.Inaddition,ifpossible,youcouldinvolveyourteachersorschoolcounselorsintheconversation.Theycanprovideinsightsintoyourprogressandreassureyourmotheraboutyourdedicationtoyourstudies.Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyouaddresstheproblemswithyourmother.Wishingyoustrengthandunderstandinginthisjourney.Yourssincerely,

LiHua[plus]DearRebecca,I'msorrytohearthatyou'refeelingoverwhelmed(不堪重負(fù)的)bythepressureofyourmother’sexcessive（過度的）caresaboutyoureducation,butIcanunderstandhowitmightfeelstiflingattimes.Firstandforemost,knowthatyourwellbeingisofutmost(最大的)importance.It'spletelynaturaltoindulgeinhobbies,listentomusic,orspendtimewithfriends.Balancingacademicswithpersonaltimeisnottoomuchtoaskfor,andit'sanessentialpartofnurturing(培養(yǎng))ahealthyandfulfilled(充實(shí)的)life.Moreover,Iwouldsuggesthavinganopenandhonestconversationwithyourmotheraboutyourfeelings.Letherknowthatyouappreciatehersupport,butalsoexpresstheimportanceoffindingmomentsforrelaxationandleisure.municationiskey,anditwillhelpherunderstandyourperspective.Ihopethesesuggestionshelpyouinnavigatingthissituation（應(yīng)對(duì)處境）withyourmother.Wishingyoustrengthandunderstandinginthisjourney.Warmregards,LiHuaWritingpractice[Practice1]假定你是李華，你的朋友Laura寫信告訴你，她的父母總是不讓她和朋友出去玩，過分控制她的生活，她對(duì)此很苦惱。請(qǐng)你按照一下要點(diǎn)給她回一封信。1.

安慰對(duì)方2.

提出建議注意：1.

詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2.

可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearLaura,Iamsorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua[Practice2]假設(shè)你是李華，你的外國網(wǎng)友Peter因迷戀游戲而被父母批評(píng)，他為此寫信向你抱怨。請(qǐng)給他寫一封回信，要點(diǎn)包括：DearPeter,Iamsorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHuaWritingpractice參考范文[Practice1]DearLaura,I’msorrytohearthatyoufeelstressedaboutyourparents’strongdesireforcontrol.Icanunderstandhowyoumightbefeeling,soIwouldliketogiveyousomesuggestionsfrommyperspective.Tobeginwith,yourparents'intentionsarerootedinloveandadesiretokeepyousafe,sooneapproach（方法）couldbetohaveanopenandhonestconversationwiththemaboutyourfeelings.Whatyoushoulddoistopursue（追求）morefreedomwhileassuringthemthatyoucanshouldertheresponsibilityandmakesafechoices.Additionally,youcanconsiderinvolvingyourparentsinyourplans.Forexample,youcantellthemwhereyou'regoing,whoyou'llbewith,andwhatactivitiesyou'llbeengagingin（參與）.Thisnotonlyreassures（使安心）thembu