寫人記敘文寫作指導(dǎo)真題再現(xiàn)題目分析（審題+構(gòu)思）素材積累（詞匯+短語+句型）范文賞析（全文背誦）真題訓(xùn)練1234561.寫人要寫“魂”

寫人記敘文是通過對(duì)人物思想性格的刻畫來表現(xiàn)中心思想的。2.寫作角度要新、小、集中、典型。寫作指導(dǎo)真題再現(xiàn)

假設(shè)Lucy是你的好朋友，下面是Lucy的個(gè)人信息，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以“Mygoodfriend”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

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要點(diǎn)提示：NameLucy

Age14CountryAmericaAppearancegood-looking,tall,blueeyes,goldenhairCharacterkind,outgoing,helpfulHobbiesreading,listeningtomusic,doingsportsInterestsChinesehistoryandculture題目分析1.審題體裁：____________要點(diǎn)：____________人稱：____________時(shí)態(tài)：____________記敘文7三一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)2.構(gòu)思3.寫作4.檢查Beginningpart:Bodypart:Endingpart:

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評(píng)論，點(diǎn)綴這個(gè)人：拼寫、語法素材積累1.好看的2.熱心的3.大方的4.有志向的5.好競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的6.有創(chuàng)造力的good-lookingwarm-heartedgenerousambitiouscompetitivecreative必備詞匯7.誠實(shí)的8.金色的9.積極的10.多愁善感的11.幽默的12.感激的honestblonde/golden/fairactive/positivesensitive/sentimentalhumorousgrateful/thankful1.一位名叫Lucy的好朋友2.一名14歲大的女孩3.金發(fā)碧眼4.中等身材的女孩5.喜歡做……常用短語agoodfriendnamed/calledLucyafourteen-year-oldgirlwithfairhairandtwoblueeyesagirlofmediumheight/buildlike/enjoydoingsth.6.擅長(zhǎng)……7.在某方面幫助某人8.在某人的幫助下9.在某人的空閑時(shí)間10.此外begoodat/dowellinsth.helpsb.withsth.withthehelpofsb.=withone’shelpinone’sspare

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freetimebesides/what’smore1.我有一個(gè)好朋友，名叫Lucy.Ihaveagoodfriend___________________.2.她是一名14歲的女孩，來自美國。Sheis______________________fromAmerica.3.她個(gè)子高，很漂亮，金發(fā)碧眼。Sheistallandpretty_____________________________.4.Lucy也是一個(gè)善良誠實(shí)的女孩，樂于助人。Lucyisalsoakindandhonestgirl,

______________________.句型練習(xí)named/calledLucyafourteen-year-oldgirlwithfairhairandtwoblueeyeswhoisalwaysreadytohelpothers5.力所能及去幫助他人是她的愿望。

________________________________iswhatshewishes.6.她總是面帶笑容，向身邊的每一個(gè)人傳遞著友善______________________,shespreadskindnesstoeveryonearoundher.7.在她的幫助下，我的英語學(xué)習(xí)在這學(xué)期取得了很大進(jìn)步。_____________,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglishthisterm.8.這就是Lucy，一個(gè)我應(yīng)該向之學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)秀女孩。____________,anexcellentgirlthatIshouldlearnfrom.DoingwhatshecandotohelpothersAlwayswearingasmileWithherhelpSuchisLucy范文賞析MybestfriendIhaveagoodfriendnamedLucy.Sheisa14-year-oldgirlfromAmerica.Sheistallandprettywithfairhairandtwoblueeyes.Lucyisakindandhonestgirl,who

isalwaysreadytohelpothers.Doingwhatshecandotohelpothersiswhatshewishes.Alwayswearingasmile,shespreadskindnesstoeveryonearoundher.Besides,sheisalsohelpful.ShealwayshelpsmewithEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglishthisterm.I’mverythankfulforwhatshehasdoneforme.Inhersparetime,sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What’smore,sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.

SuchisLucy,anexcellentgirlthatIshouldlearnfrom.名叫Lucy一個(gè)14歲大的女孩金發(fā)碧眼樂于助人力所能及地去幫助別人面帶笑容此外幫我學(xué)英語在她的幫助下取得很大進(jìn)步感激的此外對(duì)......感興趣這就是Lucy范文賞析MybestfriendIhaveagoodfriendnamedLucy.Sheisa14-year-oldgirlfromAmerica.Sheistallandprettywithfairhairandtwoblueeyes.Lucyisakindandhonestgirl,who

isalwaysreadytohelpothers.Doingwhatshecandotohelpothersiswhatshewishes.Alwayswearingasmile,shespreadskindnesstoeveryonearoundher.Besides,sheisalsohelpful.ShealwayshelpsmewithEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglishthisterm.I’mverythankfulforwhatshehasdoneforme.Inhersparetime,sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What’smore,sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.

SuchisLucy,anexcellentgirlthatIshouldlearnfrom.真題訓(xùn)練假如你是校報(bào)編輯，學(xué)校決定在校報(bào)上宣傳一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你用英文向全校同學(xué)介紹優(yōu)秀學(xué)生之一王磊，內(nèi)容如下：1.王磊，男，九年級(jí)一班學(xué)生；