打造明廚亮灶保證學(xué)生舌尖安全【熱點(diǎn)材料】明廚亮灶，是指餐飲服務(wù)提供者采用透明玻璃、視頻等方式，向社會(huì)公眾展示餐飲服務(wù)相關(guān)過(guò)程的一種形式。使餐飲企業(yè)顧客可以直觀地看到后廚員工的操作是否規(guī)范，衛(wèi)生是否合格，是否有一些不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)的物品。明廚亮灶是對(duì)餐飲企業(yè)員工的一種監(jiān)督。據(jù)市場(chǎng)監(jiān)管總局消息，近日，市場(chǎng)監(jiān)管總局辦公廳聯(lián)合教育部辦公廳、國(guó)家衛(wèi)生健康委辦公廳、公安部辦公廳印發(fā)《關(guān)于做好2022年秋季學(xué)校食品安全工作的通知》(以下簡(jiǎn)稱(chēng)《通知》)，部署各地有關(guān)部門(mén)全面做好秋季學(xué)校食品安全各項(xiàng)工作，全力守住校園食品安全底線(xiàn)，全心守護(hù)師生“舌尖上的安全”?！锻ㄖ芬?，要進(jìn)一步健全管理機(jī)制，壓緊壓實(shí)學(xué)校食堂、校外供餐單位主體責(zé)任和屬地管理責(zé)任，完善末端發(fā)力、終端見(jiàn)效的制度機(jī)制，形成一級(jí)抓一級(jí)、層層抓落實(shí)的良好局面。督促學(xué)校加強(qiáng)對(duì)食堂及承包者或委托經(jīng)營(yíng)者的日常管理，嚴(yán)格落實(shí)食品安全校長(zhǎng)(園長(zhǎng))負(fù)責(zé)制和學(xué)校相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)人陪餐制度?！锻ㄖ窂?qiáng)調(diào)，要進(jìn)一步突出工作重點(diǎn)，強(qiáng)化風(fēng)險(xiǎn)隱患排查。對(duì)學(xué)校食堂、校外供餐單位和學(xué)校周邊食品經(jīng)營(yíng)者開(kāi)展全覆蓋監(jiān)督檢查，加強(qiáng)對(duì)中小城市和縣、鄉(xiāng)學(xué)校的食品監(jiān)督抽檢。督促校外供餐單位和學(xué)校食堂嚴(yán)格落實(shí)餐飲服務(wù)活動(dòng)中食品采購(gòu)、貯存、加工、供應(yīng)、配送和餐(飲)具、食品容器及工具清洗、消毒等各環(huán)節(jié)有關(guān)場(chǎng)所、設(shè)施、設(shè)備、人員要求，健全學(xué)校食品安全風(fēng)險(xiǎn)防控體系，重點(diǎn)強(qiáng)化復(fù)用餐(飲)具監(jiān)管。指導(dǎo)校外供餐單位和學(xué)校食堂對(duì)采購(gòu)的食品和食用農(nóng)產(chǎn)品嚴(yán)格落實(shí)進(jìn)貨查驗(yàn)要求，加強(qiáng)進(jìn)口冷鏈?zhǔn)称返戎攸c(diǎn)食品原料管理，推動(dòng)采購(gòu)的食品源頭可追溯。【典型范文】小賣(mài)部（SnackShop）曾出現(xiàn)在中小學(xué)校園中，但現(xiàn)在已逐漸消失了。考慮到食品安全和校園秩序，一些人認(rèn)為校園中不該設(shè)有小賣(mài)部；但也有人十分喜愛(ài)小賣(mài)部的便捷和在小賣(mài)部的歡樂(lè)時(shí)光。請(qǐng)你以ShouldWeHaveSnackShopsattheSchool？為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題的看法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.陳述你的觀點(diǎn)。2.說(shuō)明至少兩點(diǎn)理由。注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的校名和姓名等真實(shí)信息。ShouldWeHaveSnackShopsattheSchool？___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ShouldWeHaveSnackShopsattheSchool?Inmyopinion,Ithinkthereshouldbesnackshopsattheschool.Myreasonsareasfollows.First，it’sveryconvenientforstudentsandteachers.Iftheyneedsomethingurgent,theycanbuytheminsnackshops.Second,itcangivestudentssomerelaxation.Afteralongperiodofintensestudy,itisagoodwaytotakeawaytheburdenfromtheirbrains.Allinall,havingsnackshopsattheschoolhasvariousadvantages.Anditwillhelpusmakeamorewonderfulschool.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“ShouldWeHaveSnackShopsattheSchool？”為題，談一談自己對(duì)小賣(mài)部曾出現(xiàn)在中小學(xué)校園中這一現(xiàn)象的看法；注意要緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)文句要通順，內(nèi)容要完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等；語(yǔ)言的表述要符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰?！就卣褂?xùn)練】A疫情期間，為避免交叉感染，并讓學(xué)生吃到更加營(yíng)養(yǎng)、安全的食品，學(xué)校出臺(tái)配餐制，由老師陪同學(xué)生一起在教室用餐。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。要點(diǎn)：1.食堂環(huán)境干凈衛(wèi)生，學(xué)生們吃得健康、安全；2.飯菜種類(lèi)多樣，學(xué)生們有很多選擇，營(yíng)養(yǎng)也更全面；3.省去了在家和學(xué)校之間往返所花的時(shí)間；4.家長(zhǎng)們更加放心，也更輕松；5.你的觀點(diǎn)；注意:1.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；參考詞匯：regulation規(guī)定；cafeteria食堂；nutritious有營(yíng)養(yǎng)的Inordertoimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools,wewereaskedtoeatdinnerintheclassroomwithourteachers._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertoimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools,wewereaskedtoeatdinnerintheclassroomwithourteachers.Thankstotheregulation,somethinggreathastakenplaceinourschool.First,thecafeteriaiscleanandworkersareworkinghardtoprovideuswithdifferentkindsofnutritiousfood.Also,ifthereisanyproblemaboutfoodsafetyorothers,ourschoolleadersareabletoknowandsolveitintime.Becauseoftheregulation,weeathealthierandsaferthanbefore.What’smore,itsavesthetimespentcommutingbetweenhomeandschool.Atthesametime,ourparentsneedn’tworryaboutourdietanymoreandtheyfeelmorerelaxed.Weteenagersarethefutureofourcountryandneedtogrowhealthy,soIthinkthenewregulationreallybenefitsusandisnecessary.Ihopeitwillbecarriedonforever.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以學(xué)校配餐制為主題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第一和第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話(huà)題；第二段介紹學(xué)校配餐制的好處和帶來(lái)的便利；第三段表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。B2022年3月15日，央視“315”晚會(huì)曝光康師傅、統(tǒng)一等企業(yè)老壇酸菜供應(yīng)商存在衛(wèi)生不達(dá)標(biāo)、生產(chǎn)無(wú)保障等諸多食品安全問(wèn)題，引來(lái)輿論嘩然，食品衛(wèi)生安全再次成為人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。作為一名中學(xué)生消費(fèi)者，該如何維護(hù)自己的權(quán)益，吃到放心的食品？請(qǐng)參考下面提供的要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。注意?.詞數(shù)：80詞左右，第一段已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；3.參考詞匯：overdue過(guò)期的；gobad變質(zhì)；ConsumerAssociation消費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)SinceChina’s315EveningGalapointedtothehygiene(衛(wèi)生)problemsinmakingpickledcabbage(酸菜)attheHunanChaqiVegetableCoLtd,thesafetyoffoodhasbecomeahottopicagain.Whatshallwedotofightforourrightsandinterests?

_______________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】SinceChina’s315EveningGalapointedtothehygieneproblemsinmakingpickledcabbageattheHunanChaqiVegetableCoLtd,thesafetyoffoodhasbecomeahottopicagain.Whatshallwedotofightforourrightsandinterests?First,beforebuyingfood,weneedtocheckthedateandseewhetheritisoverdue.Thenweshouldstudycarefullywhatwebuyanddecideifitisfreshoritgoesbad.Afterwepayforthefood,weshouldgetthebillandtakegoodcareofit.Lastbutnotleast,ifwefindthere’saproblemwiththefood,call12315orgotolocalConsumerAssociationforhelp.Foodsafetyisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.Inmyopinion,thegovernmentshouldtakeactiontopunishtheproducersandcompaniesthatwentagainstconsumers’rights.Ontheotherhand,weshouldlearntobewiseconsumers.【詳解】題干解讀：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類(lèi)話(huà)題作文。結(jié)合思維導(dǎo)圖提示，談?wù)勛约簩?duì)如何維護(hù)自己的權(quán)益，吃到放心的食品的看法。話(huà)題貼近學(xué)生生活，使學(xué)生易于發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)首先承接開(kāi)頭，然后具體介紹該如何維護(hù)自己的權(quán)益，如識(shí)別食品是否新鮮或變質(zhì)，購(gòu)物以后索取并保管好發(fā)票，以及發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題食品以后，撥打12315或向當(dāng)?shù)叵M(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)尋求幫助；最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)。注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)要準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)要齊全，內(nèi)容要合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)要連貫，還應(yīng)滿(mǎn)足詞數(shù)要求。C健康的生活習(xí)慣一直是人們關(guān)注的話(huà)題，針對(duì)班上同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣老師準(zhǔn)備開(kāi)展有關(guān)健康飲食的重要性的主題班會(huì)課。請(qǐng)以GoodLivingHabits為主題，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勅绾巫龅浇】碉嬍骋约敖】档纳盍?xí)慣的重要性。提示:1、擁有健康的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)我們很重要;2、現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生經(jīng)常熬夜，吃很多垃圾食品;3、我們應(yīng)該早睡早起、多運(yùn)動(dòng)；4、我們應(yīng)該多吃健康食物；5、如果你想擁有健康的身體，你就必須有健康的生活方式。要求:1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并補(bǔ)充適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)；2.語(yǔ)言通順,表達(dá)清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GoodLivingHabitsHello,everyone,let’stalkaboutlivinghabits.Itisimportantforustohavegoodlivinghabits.Nowadays,manystudentsoftenstayuplate,theyhardlydosportsandtheyofteneatalotofjunkfood.Ithinkweshouldgotobedearlyandgetupearly,weshouldeatmorehealthyfoodandexercisemore.Ifyouwanttobehealthy,youmusthavehealthylifestyles.Withoutgoodlivinghabits,thereisnohealthybodyandmind.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本篇屬于材料作文，談?wù)摻】瞪盍?xí)慣的重要性以及如何做到健康飲食。開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，說(shuō)明好的生活習(xí)慣很重要；然后談?wù)撛S多學(xué)生的壞習(xí)慣以及為了養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣我們應(yīng)該怎么做；最后點(diǎn)題，要有一個(gè)好的生活習(xí)慣，沒(méi)有好的生活習(xí)慣就不會(huì)有健康的身體和頭腦。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：全文主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，針對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)具體闡述，切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)使行文連貫。寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量多使用所學(xué)過(guò)的單詞、短語(yǔ)以及句型使文章出彩，如let'sdo,nowasays,dosports,more,without,therebe以及itisadj.forsb.todosth.等。D為了讓學(xué)生吃到更加營(yíng)養(yǎng)、安全的食品，政府出臺(tái)了陪餐制，要求從4月1日起，學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)陪同學(xué)生用餐。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?.學(xué)生吃得健康、安全；2.及時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)就餐問(wèn)題；3.食堂提供食品多樣；4.父母更加放心。注意:1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.參考詞匯:規(guī)定regulation(n.)；食堂cafeteria(n.)；營(yíng)養(yǎng)的nutritious(adj.)AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolmanagerstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolmanagerstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias.Thankstotheregulation,somethinggreathastakenplaceinourschool.First,we

eathealthierandsaferthanbefore.Second,ifthereisanyproblemaboutfoodsafetyorother,ourschoolleadersareabletoknowandsolveitquickly.Also,thecafeteriaworkersaretryingtoprovidedifferentkindsoffoodforus.Inotherwords,ourparentsneedn’tworryaboutourdietanymore.Weteenagersarestillyoungandneedtogrowhealthy,soIthinkthenewregulationisreallygoodandnecessary.Ihopeitwillbecarriedonforever.【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，就政府出臺(tái)的“陪餐制度”談?wù)勀愕目捶ā８鶕?jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如thanksto,takeplace,beableto,providesthforsb,inotherwords,worryabout,not...atall,carryon,first,second以及also，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。E假如你是李華，與美國(guó)筆友Mike正在對(duì)肯德基（KFC）食品展開(kāi)討論。根據(jù)你所了解的情況，請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，談?wù)勀銈儼嗉?jí)同學(xué)對(duì)肯德基（KFC）食品的不同看法，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。要求：1.必須包含表格內(nèi)所有信息；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantages)缺點(diǎn)(disadvantages)同學(xué)們的看法1.美味

2.時(shí)尚

3.體驗(yàn)西餐1.太貴

2.不安全

3.垃圾食品你的觀點(diǎn)……DearMike,Iseverythinggoingwell?GladtohaveadiscussionabouttheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofKFCwithyou.Wedidasurveyaboutit.Herearetheresults._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMike,Iseverythinggoingwell?GladtohaveadiscussionabouttheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofKFCwithyou.Wedidasurveyaboutit.Herearetheresults.Ontheonehand,wethinkKFChasitsadvantages.It’sdeliciousandeatinginKFCisakindoffashion.It’salsoagoodwaytoexperienceWesternfood.Ontheotherhand,KFCalsohasitsdisadvantages.MostfoodinKFCisjunkfood,whichisbadforourhealth.Besides,thefoodmaynotbesafebecauseit’snotfresh.What’smore,thefoodinKFCisusuallyveryexpensive.ThoughKFCisdelicious,IprefertraditionalChinesefoodwhichismoredelicious.Tokeephealthy,weshouldeatlessjunkfood.It’sagoodideatohavemorehealthyfoodlikevegetablesandfruit.Justasthesayinggoes,anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一封電子郵件。圍繞“肯德基食品”發(fā)表不同的看法。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主。分為三段式：第一段開(kāi)頭已給出，用于引出主題；第二段介紹學(xué)生們對(duì)這種食品的不同看法；最后一段發(fā)表自己的看法。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。F近年來(lái)，寧波的食品安全問(wèn)題層出不窮，先是寧波奶大腸菌群超標(biāo)，合格率低;再是新美心蛋糕致百人中毒。而這兩種食品是許多中學(xué)生的每日必需品。中學(xué)生正處于生長(zhǎng)發(fā)育的關(guān)鍵時(shí)期，食品安全極為重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生如何健康飲食并給出理由。注意：80詞左右。開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人詞數(shù)。文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Nowadays,thereissomuchillegal(非法的，違規(guī)的)food.Manypeoplearesickbecauseofeatingit.Moreandmorepeoplepayattentiontothefoodsafety.Asyoungstudents,wealsofacetheproblem.Weneedtoeatwelltomakesurewecangrowuphealthily