觀點建議篇【仿寫句子】1.Beforeyougotoyourfriend'shome,youaresupposedtomakeacall.2.You'dbetterprepareforyourlessonsinadvance.3.It'sagoodwaytoimproveyourspokenEnglishbyreadingEnglishnewspapersandwatchingEnglishmovies.4.Ithinkit'sawasteoftimetospendtoomuchtimesurfingtheInternet.1.中學生是否應該有零花錢學校正舉辦主題為“MyPocketMoney”的英語征文活動，請你就以下三個方面談談自己的看法：中學生是否應該有零花錢？你平時是如何使用零花錢的？怎樣更好地管理你自己的零花錢？提示詞語：pocketmoney,buy,makeuseof,managemoney提示問題：?Shouldstudentshavepocketmoney??Howdoyouusuallyspendyourpocketmoney??Howcanyoumanageyourpocketmoneybetter?經(jīng)典范文：Ithinkstudentsshouldhavesomepocketmoneybecausesometimesweneedtobuysomenecessariesanddeveloptheskillofmanagingmoneyaswell.Iusuallyspendmypocketmoneyonsnacks.Schoolthingsalsocostmoney.Besides,IoftenbuymyfavoritethingssuchasbooksorCDs.Inmyopinion,itisreallyimportanttomakebetteruseofthemoney.Aboveall,makingplansisagoodchoice.Inthisway,IcanthinkaboutifIspendthemoneyproperly.Secondly,it'snecessarytosavesomemoneyforsomethingurgent.Ifpeopleneedmyhelp,Iwilltrytogivethemahand.2.中學上網(wǎng)網(wǎng)絡為我們的日常學習與生活帶來了極大的便利，但是也有一部分中學生上網(wǎng)成癮，嚴重影響到他們的健康和學習。假如你們班在下周班會上將談論有關問題，請你根據(jù)所給提示，用英語寫一篇演講稿。提示詞語：learn,play,spendtoomuchtime提示問題：?Whataretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofgettingonline??Whatdoyouthinkofgettingonlineformiddleschoolstudents??Howshouldstudentsgetonlineproperly?Goodafternoon,class.Todaylet'stalkaboutgettingonline.Manystudents經(jīng)典范文：Goodafternoon,class.Todaylet'stalkaboutgettingonline.Manystudentslikegettingonlineverymuch.Theycanlearnmoreknowledgeandhowtousethemodernmachine—puterwheretheycangetmoreinformation.Inthisway,it'sagoodwaytoenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizon.Butsomestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingputergamesandevenstayuplatetochatwithfriendsonline.Ittakesthemtoomuchtime.Gradually,theyfindithardtofocusonthestudy.What'sworse,someareevencheatedorrobbedbytheirnetfriends.It'sunwisetobantheInternetintheinformationage.Soit'sbettertomakeaplanofthefreetime,andcontrolthetimewellontheputer.MakesurenottospendtoomuchtimeontheInternet.【題目要求】李梅最近睡不好，她父母想要她取得好成績，送她去各種課外俱樂部，她壓力很大，不知道怎么辦。假如你是Tom，請給她一些建議。

【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】DearLiMei,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetoomuchpressureanddon’tsleepwellatnight.

Yourparentswantyoutogetgoodgrades，sotheysendyoutoallkindsofafterschoolclubsincludinglanguagelearning,music,mathclassesandsoon.Andyoureallydon’tknowwhattodo.Ithinkyourparentsreallyloveyouandtheyhopeyouhaveawonderfulfuture.Ifyoufeelunfortable,therearemanythingsyoucando.Youcouldtalkaboutitwithyourparents.Youshouldtellthemthatkidsneedmorefreetimetorelax.Atthesametime,youshouldstudyhardandtryyourbesttogetgoodgrades.Bestwishes!

Yours,Tom.假如你是David，你所在的城市新建了一個兒童博物館。現(xiàn)在要向社會征集館規(guī)和建議，請你給博物館的館長Mr.Black寫一封信，談談你的建議吧。要求：80詞左右，可適當發(fā)揮。

【短語/句型】throwrubbish扔垃圾

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【范文參考】

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them.1.Don’tbringfoodordrinkstothemuseum.2.Keepyourpetsoutofthemuseum.3.Don’tthrowrubbisharound.4.Takenotesifnecessary.5.Childrencandoexperimentsinthismuseum.Sincethemuseumisachildrenmuseum,I

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theirparents.That’sall.Thankyou!Yours,David.三年的初中生活讓你收獲滿滿。假如你校英語報邀請你寫一篇短文，給即將升入九年級的學弟學妹提一些建議。請你結合自己的學習（生活）經(jīng)歷，根據(jù)以下提示和要求，用英語寫一篇短文，闡述你的觀點。提示：要求：1.短文應包括所有要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；2.詞數(shù)80左右（文章開頭、結尾已給，不計入詞數(shù)）；3.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。Howtimeflies!NowyouarestudentsofGrade9.HereI’dliketotellyousomethingtomakeyourschoollifemoremeaningful.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwillenjoyyourschoollifeandachieveyourdreams.Howtimeflies!NowyouarestudentsofGrade9.HereI’dliketotellyousomethingtomakeyourschoollifemoremeaningful.Firstofall,itisimportantforyoutokeephealthy,sodon’tforgettoexerciseeverydayandhaveabalanceddiet.Youshouldalwayslookonthebrightsidewhenyou’reintrouble.Second,you’llbeabletomakegreatprogressifyoudevelopyourstudyskills.Forexample,youcanhaveagoodstudyplanandpreviewthenewlessonsaswell.Besides,youshouldfinishtheexercisesonyourownandsolveproblemswiththehelpofyourclassmatesorteachers.Third,youshouldbethankfulforyourparentsbecausetheyarethepersonswhoarealwaysbehindyou.Youcanmunicatemoreandsharethehappinessandsadnesswiththem.Youcanalsohelpthemwithsomehousework.Inaddition,youshouldtakegoodcareofthemwhentheyfeelsick.Ihopeyouwillenjoyyourschoollifeandachieveyourdreams.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：閱讀題干可知，要求結合自己的學習生活經(jīng)歷，給學弟學妹們一些關于生活與學習的建議。題干已經(jīng)給出了寫作內(nèi)容提示，可分別從保持身心健康、提高學習技能和應當感恩父母三個方面來寫，寫作時要根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容作一定的補充，寫作手法要符合英語的表達方式。2.寫作指導：這是一篇建議類作文，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第二人稱為主，例文采取三段式的寫作手法。文章開頭、結尾題干已經(jīng)給出，可知主要寫第二自然段——具體的建議點。我們在寫建議點時，要適當?shù)剡\用邏輯詞（Firstofall;Second;Besides;Third;Inaddition），這樣使文章邏輯更加清晰。作為中學生，我們現(xiàn)在的學習壓力很大，經(jīng)常面對各種考試，因此有時會產(chǎn)生焦慮情緒。請你根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，簡單描述一下我們的考試壓力主要體現(xiàn)在哪些方面，并針對此種情況給出合理的建議。提示：1、表現(xiàn)：擔心考試；考前很難入睡；考試時發(fā)揮失?！?、建議：請從考前學習準備、作息時間和放松方式這三方面，給出至少四條緩解考試壓力的具體建議。要求：1、觀點鮮明，結構合理，內(nèi)容連貫，要用到所有提示內(nèi)容，并適當發(fā)揮；2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息；3、詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofus_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofusaresoworriedaboutexamsthatit’shardtofallasleepbeforethem.Whenwepaymuchattentiontotheexam,thetestresultswon’tbegood.Parentsandteacherswillblamethem,theywillalsoloseconfidence.Ifwehaveproperstress,wecanworkharder,butifwehavetoomuchpressure,itmayhaveabadeffectonourstudy.Weshouldlearntoreleasepressure.Firstofall,weshouldreviewcarefullyandmakefullpreparationbeforetheexam.Second,weshouldn’tstayuplatetoreviewfortheexam.Third,afterreviewingforaperiodoftime,weshouldalsorelaxourselvesappropriately.Inaddition,ifwedowellintheexam,wewillgiveourselvesappropriaterewards.SoIhopeeveryonecandealwiththeexamstressproperlyandgetgoodgrades.【解析】【分析】【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，寫出考試壓力的表現(xiàn)，提出自己的建議等，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導：寫作時要與已給出的開頭融合起來，用第一人稱和其他人稱相結合來寫作，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，多用情態(tài)動詞should提出建議，要做到要點齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Jenny因視力減退感到不安，向你傾訴。請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一封電子郵件給她，談談你在保護視力方面的一些做法，并提出建議。要點提示：1.近視原因：閱讀壞習慣、使用手機時間過長、……2.提出建議：戶外活動、做眼保健操、……3.……要求：1.文中必須包括以上內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮，增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名、人名和其他真實信息；3.詞數(shù)不少于80（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：eyesight視力

mobilephone手機DearJenny,I’msorrytoknowthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】例文：DearJenny,I’msorrytoknowthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.I’d

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題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和提示要點，寫出自己認為造成近視的原因以及提出的建議等，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導：寫作時要與已給出的開頭融合起來，用第一人稱和其他人稱相結合來寫作，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，要做到要點齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。你打算在抖音中發(fā)布一條短視頻，主題為“如何做文明中學生”，請你給出五條建議。要求：1.字跡工整，表達清楚，語法正確，句式多樣；2.詞數(shù)：3050詞。1.________________________________________________2.________________________________________________3.________________________________________________4.________________________________________________5.________________________________________________【答案】例文1.Bepolitetoourteachersandparents.2.Weshouldn’tfightwithourclassmates.

3.Offerourseatstotheoldwhenweareonabus.4.Pleasedon’twastefood.5.Behonest.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇小作文。要求以“如何做文明中學生”為主題，給出五條建議，注意要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一人稱來介紹，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。建議可分別從禮貌對待師長、與同學和平相處、幫助他人、節(jié)約不浪費和誠實等方面進行寫作。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。下面是Kate在英語網(wǎng)站上發(fā)給網(wǎng)友們的救助帖。假如你是她的好朋友Peter，請你結合她的帖子內(nèi)容，用英語給她回張?zhí)硬⑻岢瞿愕慕ㄗh。要求：1.回帖內(nèi)容要緊緊圍繞救助帖，可適當發(fā)揮，但必須健康向上；2.意思通順、語氣連貫、過渡自然；3.80詞以上；4.回帖的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。Dearfriends,Idon’tfeelwellthesedays.IgetlotsofheadachesbecauseIhavenotimetoexercise.Myparentswantmetogetbettergrades,sotheysendmetomanyafterschoolclubs,includingLanguageLearningClub,MusicClubandMathClubetc.Also,myelderbrotherisn’tnicetome.HerefusestoletmewatchmyfavoriteTVshow.Instead,hewatcheswhateverhewantsuntillateatnight.Idon’tthinkthisisfair.AthomeIalwaysfeellonelyandnervous.I’malwaysundertoomuchpressure.Isthatnormal?WhatcanIdo?Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?KateDearKate,It’snoteasybeingyourage,andit’snormaltohavethesefeelings.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Peter【答案】例文DearKate,It’snoteasybeingyourage,andit’snormaltohavethesefeelings.Firstly,whydon’tyoutalkaboutyourfeelingswithyourparents?You’vehadsomuchpressurebecauseofschoolwork.Workinghardatschoolisveryimportant,butyoualsoneedsomefreetimetorelaxyourself.Trytomunicatewithyourparents,andmakethemallowyoutodothingsyoulike.Secondly,whynotsitdownandmunicatewithyourelderbrother?Youshouldexplainthatyoudon’tmindhimwatchingTVallthetime.However,heshouldletyouwatchyourfavoriteshow.Ihopethingswillbebetterforyousoon.Yours,Peter【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)Kate救助貼中的內(nèi)容，針對她的問題和煩惱，以她好朋友Peter的名義給她回張貼子并提出你的建議。注意要包含所有的問題，可以適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫作，針對她提出的問題提出相應的解決方法和建議；寫作時可以適當用一些連詞，短語或句型；使文章看起來層次分明。同時語言的表達也要符合語法結構，注意思路清晰，語言表達準確，用詞恰當，通俗易懂。保持一份好心情（keepinagoodmood）有利于身體健康，也有助于學習。假如你是周川，你朋友李玲近來心情一直不佳，請你用英語寫一封信，建議她如何保持一份好心情。要點提示：1.積極參加體育運動；2.保持健康的飲食習慣；3.與父母和老師多交流，與同學和睦相處；4.積極參加公益活動。參考詞匯：公益活動volunteeractivity注意：（1）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名和學校；（2）80詞左右（短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；（3）注意信件的完整性（必須有過渡語和結束語）；（4）短文必須包含要點提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻譯），并在此基礎上適當發(fā)揮。DearLiLing,Iheardyouwereinabadmood.Howisitgoingrecently?Asweknow,keepinginagoodmoodisgoodforhealthandstudy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearLiLing,Iheardyouwereinabadmood.Howisitgoingrecently?Asweknow,keepinginagoodmoodisgoodforhealthandstudy.Whynottakepartinsomesports?Suchasrunning,skatingandplayingbasketballandsoon.Exercisingcanmakeyourelax.Second,youneedtocareaboutyourhabitofeatingfood.You’dbetternoteattoomanysnacks.Ithinktheyarenotgoodforyourbody.Doyouthinkso?Third,Ihopeyougetalongwellwithyourfriendsinyourschool.Youcantellthemyourtrouble.Maybeit’snotaseriousproblemwhenyouheartheiradvice.Youcanoftentalkwithyourteachersandyourparents.Listeningtotheirthoughts,youwillknowhowyoushoulddealwithyourlife.Haveyouheardofvolunteers?Theyoftenhelppeopleintrouble!Wouldyouliketojoinvolunteeractivities?Youwillbehappywhenyouhelpothers.Ihopeyouwillgetbettersoon.Yours,ZhouChuan【解析】【分析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。這篇作文要求以周川的身份給好朋友李玲寫信，李玲最近心情不好，在信中應給她提出一些好的建議，讓她保持好的心情。題干中給出了具體的寫作要點，這也就是學生們寫作的主要依據(jù)。四個要點必須都包括在內(nèi)，不能遺漏。注意要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第二人稱來行文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段給李玲提出四個建議；第三段表達自己的期望，結束全文。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。假如你是LiHua，你被評為學校的“美德少年”，初中三年的學習生活即將結束，你遠在英國的表妹Linda即將回國學習，她來信請你給她即將開始的初中生活提出一些建議，請根據(jù)下面的要點提示，寫一封回信。1.要點：在學校努力學習知識；關注社會新聞；培養(yǎng)興趣愛好；在家里經(jīng)常與家人交流；知錯就改；在公共場合遵守規(guī)則；注意安全；樂于助人；你的建議……2.要求：(1)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和姓名等；(2)語言要通順，表達要正確；(3)要求包含所有要點提示，為了行文需要，可適當增加要點；(4)詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.參考詞匯：培養(yǎng)興趣developinterests

社會新聞socialnews與人交流municatewith

在公共場合inpublicDearLinda,I’mverygladtohearthatyouwillebacktoChinaandstudyinmyschoolnextterm.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,andI’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouearlier.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearLinda,I’mverygladtohearthatyouwillebacktoChinaandstudyinmyschoolnextterm.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Atschool,youshouldstudyhardtolearnalotofknowledge,youshouldpayattentiontosocialnews,youcandevelopsomeinterestssuchasreadingbooksandplayingsports.Athome,youshouldmunicatewithyourfamily.Ifyoudosomethingwrong,youshouldcorrectit.Inpublic,youshouldfollowtherules,especiallythetrafficrules,andyoushouldpayattentiontothesafety,don’tgooutaloneatnight;Youshouldhelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ifyouliketraveling,youcangoonatripinyourfreetime.Bestwishes,andI’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouearlier.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】1、題干解讀：題目要求你給的遠在英國的表妹寫一封信，對她即將開始的初中生活提出一些建議，要求包括在學校、在家里以及在公共場所應該怎么做給出你的建議，可適當發(fā)揮。2、寫作指導：本文應該以第二人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；敘述建議時，應詳細具體，語言通順，表達正確，保證條理清晰。假定你是李華。李明同學正就讀初中二年級。他在信中說，他在英語學習和生活中遇到了很多問題，請你用英語給他回一封信，給他提出一些建議。要點如下：1、

養(yǎng)成良好的英語學習習慣；(havea...habit)2、

學會與同學融洽相處；(getalongwellwith)3、

多與老師交流；(municatewithsomebody)4、

理解并感恩父母。(thanksomebody(forsomething))注意：1.

詞數(shù)80?100，開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；2.

短文必須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使其連貫、通順；3.

文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。DearLiMing,I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youtoldmethat___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.YoursLiHua【答案】參考范文：DearLiMing,I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youtoldmethatyouhadsomeproblemswithyourEnglishlearninganddailylife.Asyourolderschoolmate,I’mfamiliarwiththatfeeling.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou:First,youshouldhaveagoodEnglishlearninghabitoflistening,speaking,readingandwriting.Second,ifyouwanttohaveagoodlearningenvironment,youshouldgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.Third,you’dbettermunicatewithyourteachersasmuchaspossibleifyouhaveanyproblems.Finally,don’tplainab