讀后續(xù)寫專題訓(xùn)練07目錄TheGivenTextSampleConceptionComprehensionAccumulationTheGivenText01ASpecialBirthday Ilovemyjobasamidwife.Ialwayshave,butIfeelparticularlyproudtodoitatthemoment.WithCOVID-19sweepingthroughthecountry,peopleareavoidinghospitalsinanywaytheycan.However,pregnantwomenstillneedtocomeintothehospital.Babiesstillneedtobeborn.

Rightnow,itisevenscarierforthesewomen,astheyhavetocomeinontheirown,oftenfeelingfrightened.Theirfamiliesareseparatedfromthemduetosafetymeasures.We’vealwaysprovidedphysicalsupport,butnowwearedoingsoonadifferentlevel—wealsohavetokeepthemcompanyandofferemotionalsupport.Unfortunately,someofthewomenhavecaughtcoronavirus,andbeingatthehospitalputsmeatrisk.Personally,Ifeelprotectedbecausewehavefullpersonalprotectiveequipment,whichwewearallthroughour13-hourshifts.Youdon’tknowifsomeoneiscarryingcoronavirusornot.

Ididn’twanttoputmyfamilyindangerbybringingthevirushomeandpossiblypassingitontothem.AsasingleMomtomychildren,Hannah,12yearsold,andLouis,9,IrealizedIhadtomakeaverytoughdecisionaboutmyfamily’ssafetywhenthecountrywentintolockdown.Givingupworkwasn’tanoptionforme.Iwantedtobeabletolookafterthewomenwhowerefeelingpoorlyandveryscared,butIcouldnotleavemylittleangelsbehindeither.

Atthispoint,mysister,Rachael,suggestedthatthechildrenstaywithherandherhusbandforthetimebeingandleavemetomyhospitalduties.Ithoughtitwasagreatidea,sowesetadateforhertopickthemup.WhenIexplainedthesituationtomyangelsandtoldthemtheyneededtostaywiththeirauntforawhile,theybothseemedupset,butagreedtogo.OnthedayIsawthemoff,theykeptlookingbackatmeuntiltheyweretoofartobeseen.Paragraph1:Afterthat,myworkloadincreasedbecausesomeofmycoworkersfellill.Paragraph2:Aweeklater,itcametoLouis’sbirthday.Comprehension02KeyElementsFromtheGiven

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relationshipIHannah;Louisunselfish;bravenodescriptioninhernurseuniformnodescriptionmotherandchildrenRachaelhelpfulnodescriptionsister/auntKeyElementsFromtheGivenText(2)timeplacefinalgiventimefinalgivenplaceWhenCOVID-19sweepingthroughthecountry...inthehospitalOnedayIsawthemoff...probablyatmyhomeworriedIwasworkinginthehospitalasamidwifewhenCOVID-19sweptthroughthewestcoast.unwillingIdecidedtosendmychildrentomysister’stoensuretheirhealth.upsetIpartedwithmychildren.relativeemotionswiththedevelopmentofthestoryline(1)We’vealwaysprovidedphysicalsupport,butnowwearedoingsoonadifferentlevel—wealsohavetokeepthemcompanyandofferemotionalsupport.Iwasreallybusywithtakingcareofpregnantwomen.(2)Atthispoint,mysister,Rachael,suggestedthatthechildrenstaywithherandherhusbandforthetimebeingandleavemetomyhospitalduties.(3)…theybothseemedupset,butagreedtogo..Rachelwashelpful.Thechildrenweresensible.MoreHiddenInformationConception031234Para1Para2PLOTEMOTION二條四點(diǎn)Paragraph1:Afterthat,myworkloadincreasedbecausesomeofmycoworkersfellill.IemotionplotdedicatetoworklookaftermypatientsmakeupforLouisexhaustedtroubledParagraph2:Aweeklater,itcametoLouis’sbirthday.Imakeavideocallgreetthemonthescreencheerfulemotionplot1.WhatwouldIdonext?

Istayedatthehospitaltostandreadyforwork.Imissedmychildrenbadly.2.WhathappenedbeforeLouis’sbirthday?

IpreparedawonderfulpresentforLouis.

Idecidedtodosomethingtomakeupformyabsence.IalmostforgotLouis’sbirthdayandRachaelremindedme.Paragraph1:Afterthat,myworkloadincreasedbecausesomeofmycoworkersfellill.Paragraph2:Aweeklater,itcametoLouis’sbirthday.Innitiatetheframeworkaccordingtothefinalgivenplotandthetwoinitialgivensentenceswiththe4connectedsentences.3.WhatmighthappenonLouis’sbirthdayparty?

Imadeavideocalltocheckonthekids.

ItookmyphonetothehallwheremycoworkerssangtheBirthday

SongforLouis.Paragraph2:Aweeklater,itcametoLouis’sbirthday.4.Whatmightbetheendingofthisstory?

BothmychildrenandIenjoyedLouis’sspecialbirthdayparty.

Mychildren’sunderstandingandmycoworker’ssupportmovedme.Innitiatetheframeworkaccordingtothefinalgivenplotandthetwoinitialgivensentenceswiththe4connectedsentences.ThepossiblelessonsorconclusionsFromthisexperience,welearnedthat...Thoughdistanceseparatesus,lovewillbringustogether.Whenfacedifficulties,weshouldhelpeachother.Parents’companyisveryimportantforthegrowthofchildren.…Sample04Paragraph1:Afterthat,myworkloadincreasedbecausesomeofmycoworkersfellill.Wehadtoworkdoubleshiftsandmylifewasdedicatedtonothingbutwork.EverydayIcamebackhomecompletelyexhaustedandfellasleep.AssoonasIwokeup,Ineededtogotothehospital.Ipouredallmyeffortsintomypatients,whichwasveryrewarding.However,ittroubledmethatIdidn’thavetimeformyownkids.Louiswasgoingtocelebratehisbirthdaysoon.Ihadtodosomethingtomakeupforhim.Readonepossibleversionandmakesureyouknowhowtheplotdevelops.轉(zhuǎn)折Readonepossibleversionandmakesureyouknowhowtheplotdevelops.Paragraph2:Aweeklater,itcametoLouis’sbirthday.ImadeavideocalltoRachaelfromthehospital.Igreetedthemonthescreenwithmymaskandgoggleson.HannahandLouisrecognizedmeimmediately,shoutingexcitedly.Itookthephonetothehallwheremycoworkerssang“HappyBirthday,Louis!”Theyalsoencouragedhimtobestrong,andagrinappearedonhisface.Mychildren’sunderstandingandmycoworker’ssupportgavemeawarmfeeling,andIbelievenothingcouldevertrulyseparatemeandmybelovedones.(165words)動(dòng)作出彩結(jié)尾神態(tài)肖像Accumulation05UsefulExpressionsshift

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1.Wehadtoworkdouble_____________(shift)andmylifewasdedicatedtonothingbutwork.2.Ipouredallmyeffortsintomypatients,which