2024年外研版英語七年級(jí)上冊(cè)期末復(fù)習(xí)寫作技巧+書面表達(dá)專練+滿分范文一、寫作步驟：四步法步驟一：審題審題注意八個(gè)方面：一審主題（寫什么），二審體裁（記敘、說明、議論、夾敘夾議），三審時(shí)態(tài)，四審人稱（別犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤），五審內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)（一定要在試卷中畫出，免得寫的時(shí)候忘記，導(dǎo)致跑題），六審長難要點(diǎn)（找出主干或者分解成若干個(gè)簡單句或者用自己熟練的詞匯或習(xí)慣用語替換難點(diǎn)），七審作文開頭，如果開頭給出了半句話，應(yīng)該思考如何把這句話簡單明了地續(xù)寫完整。步驟二：打草稿：列出要用的主要時(shí)態(tài)，短語，句型和詞匯等（不要在答題紙上涂涂改改，不要用修正帶，修正液等）步驟三：正文寫作做到兩點(diǎn)，一要凝練，二要變化。文章80—100字為宜，一定要注意使用過渡詞、從句、句型和詞組搭配。穿插使用簡單句和復(fù)合句。步驟四：檢查：1內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：缺少一個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，文章直接降到第三檔2語法錯(cuò)誤：名詞查單復(fù)數(shù)和冠詞問題，動(dòng)詞查時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)和三單問題。3變換句式：過于簡單的結(jié)構(gòu)要試著變化4單詞拼寫：低級(jí)的單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤5標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)：英文和漢語標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)有差別6作文內(nèi)容：不要出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)身份姓名等信息。二、選擇好自己喜歡或者常用的邏輯過渡詞，默寫和背誦它們直到爛熟于心并且運(yùn)用到作文中。 1.開始：firstofall,atfirst,firstandforemost,inthebeginning,tostartwith,tobeginwith2.另外/然后：what’smore,andthen,next,atthesametime,inaddition,besides,moreover,furthermore(在寫作時(shí)，每篇作文，不超過三個(gè))3.一方面，另一方面：ononehand,ontheotherhand;foronething,foranother(thing);inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace.(同時(shí)使用)4.最后，總之：intheend,inshort,inall,allinall,inaword,lastbutnotleast,inconclusion，atlast,Generallyspeaking,ingeneral5.在我看來：Ithink/believe,asforme,frommypart,inmyopinion,inmyview,asfarasI’mconcerned,asfarasIknow,asastudent.6.表轉(zhuǎn)折:but,yet,however,insteadof,instead，nevertheless，oppositely(相反地)，what’sworse(更糟糕地),evenworse.7.表原因：becauseof,because，hence,thanksto/dueto(因?yàn)?，由于，幸虧，歸功于),8.表結(jié)果：so,thus,asaresult,therefore.(因此，所以，結(jié)果)9.表目的：inorderto,inorderthat,sothat,（為了）三、常見褒義詞：fantastic,wonderful,meaningful(有意義的),,great,excellent,super，四、常見開頭句型1.Letmetellyousomethingmoreabout…2.Everybodyknowsthat…（眾所周知）3.Itcanbeeasilyseenthat…（顯而易見）4.Itistruethat…（…確實(shí)是如此）5.Iamhappytotellyouthat…6.Hello,everyone!TodayI'dliketosharemyideasabout…7.Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.8.Howareyou?Ihaveamoving(感人的)storytotellyou.9.寫信旅行話題開頭：I’mwritingtotellyousomethingabout…Starter初中是你人生的一個(gè)新起點(diǎn)。假如你是李華，你的同班同學(xué)和老師想了解你的情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇自我介紹?；厩闆r：姓名、年齡、所在班級(jí)；愛好和性格；今年暑假所做的趣事；4.希望：想在新學(xué)校交到新朋友。要求：1.適當(dāng)拓展，行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作指導(dǎo)】1.人稱：第一人稱。2.時(shí)態(tài):介紹自己的情況應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);描述過去的活動(dòng)應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí);介紹未來的打算應(yīng)用一般將來時(shí)。3.構(gòu)思:開篇介紹自己的基本情況:Mynameis...lam..Ilike.Myhobbyis/are...中間介紹假期活動(dòng):Iwentto...with..Ivisited/bought…結(jié)尾介紹未來的打算:I'mgoingto.../Ihope..【參考范文】Helloeveryone!MynameisLiHua.Letmeintroducemyself.Iam13yearsoldthisyear.IamfromClassOne,GradeSeven.Myhobbyisdoingsports.Basketballismyfavorite.Iamahelpfulstudent,soIoftenhelppeopledolotsofthings.Thissummerholiday,IwenttoHainanwithmyparents.Itwashotbutbeautiful.Iswamandtookmanyphotosthere.Iwasveryhappy.Hereinthisschool,Iamgoingtomakesomenewfriends.Doyouwanttobemyfriend?

Unit1小學(xué)生活精彩紛呈?；厥走^去，你是否感到充實(shí)和快樂?展望未來，你是否對(duì)初中生活充滿期待?請(qǐng)以“Anewstart”為題，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕母形颉(1)Whatdidyougetinprimaryschool?(2)Whatdoyoufeelsorryaboutinprimaryschool?(3)Whatdidyouthinkoftheschoollifebeforeyoustartjuniorhigh?(4)Howdidyoufeelwhenyouwereinjuniorhigh?(5)What'syourplanforyourfuturelifeinjuniorhigh?(1)詞數(shù):80左右。(2)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Anewstart【參考范文】Primaryschoolwasatimeofjoyandlearning.Igotknowledge,madefriends,andhadfun.However,Iregretnotworkingharderformyexams.Lookingback,IreallylikethosetimesbutIthoughtIcoulddobetter.Beforejuniorhigh,Ithoughtitwouldbeharder.Yet,whenIgothere,Ifounditisreallyfun.Theteachersarekind,andIreallylikethem.Formyfutureinjuniorhigh,Iplantoworkhardonmystudies,joinsomeclubsandmakenewfriends.I'mexcitedforthisnextpartofmylifeandhopetogrowevenmore.Unit2假設(shè)你是李華,是光明中學(xué)七年級(jí)一班的一名學(xué)生。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一篇題為“MyHobby”的短文。內(nèi)容包括:(1)你的愛好是什么?列舉你喜歡這個(gè)愛好的原因(至少兩個(gè))。(2)你的愛好對(duì)你學(xué)習(xí)、生活的影響。注意:(1)詞數(shù)70左右(文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù))。(2)內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn),但不要逐條翻譯。(3)在所提示的要點(diǎn)之外,要求有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順。MyHobbyHello,everyone【參考范文】Hello,everyone,mynameisLiHua.Ihavemanyhobbies.Ofallmyhobbies,Ilikeplayingbasketballbest.WhydoIlikeplayingbasketball?Firstofall,playingbasketballmakesmerelaxedandhappy.What’smore,Icanmakealotoffriendswhenplayingbasketballwithotherpeople.Andthen,Icankeephealthybyplayingbasketball.Ithinkplayingbasketballcanbringhappinesstome,andIcanstudybetterafterIplayit.Mylifewillbemeaninglesswithouthobbies.Ihopeeveryonecanhaveagoodhobbyandkeeplovingitfortheirwholelife.Unit3(一)假設(shè)你是李林,根據(jù)爸爸和你一起放風(fēng)箏的一張照片。請(qǐng)你以“Father'sLove”為題,根據(jù)提示介紹一下這張照片以及你從這張照片中感受到的父愛。(1)簡單介紹一下父親的情況:父親是一名醫(yī)生，工作很忙,但會(huì)盡量抽時(shí)間陪我。(2)描繪一下照片的內(nèi)容和感想:上周日爸爸陪我放風(fēng)箏時(shí)拍的照片,他教會(huì)了我如何放風(fēng)箏。(3)表達(dá)一下你從照片中感受到的父愛:父親的愛是深沉的,像山一樣。要求:(1)不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和考生的真實(shí)姓名。(2)語句連貫,70詞左右。Father’sLove【參考范文】Father'sLoveMyfatherisadoctorandheworksinahospital.Heisverybusy.Buthetrieshisbesttospendsometimewithmeeveryweek.LastSunday,wewenttotheseasidetoflyakite.Mothertookthephotoofus.Inthephoto,myfatherwasteachingmehowtoflyakite.Itwasaverywarmmoment.Ilikespendingtimewithmyfather,becausehecanalwaysteachmesomethingnewandwealwaysplayhappily.Ilovemyfather.Ithinkthefather'sloveisstrong,likeamountain.(二),你們家每年都給爺爺奶奶舉辦生日聚會(huì)嗎?根據(jù)提示寫一篇英語短文，要求語句通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，詞數(shù)80左右。提示:(1)我奶奶70歲了。每年家里人都會(huì)給她舉辦生日聚會(huì);(2)家人們總是帶禮物和生日蛋糕給我奶奶;(3)我媽媽和伯母們經(jīng)常做一頓大餐;(4)飯后，孩子們通常開心地唱歌、跳舞;(5)對(duì)我奶奶來說，這是一個(gè)特殊的(special)日子。那天她總是很開心?！緟⒖挤段摹縈ygrandmaisseventyyearsold.Everyyearmyfamilyhaveabirthdaypartyforher.Allofmyfamilyalwaysbringsomepresentsandabirthdaycaketomygrandma.Mymotherandmyauntsoftencookabigdinner.Afterdinner,childrenusuallysinganddancehappily.It'saspecialdayformygrandmaandsheisalwaysveryhappyonthatday.Unit4（一）假如你是李華,你的英國筆友Mike非常想了解春節(jié),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示詞語和提示問題,給他寫一封不少于60詞的電子郵件介紹春節(jié)。郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示詞語:cleanthehouse,haveabigdinner,visit,important提示問題:●WhatdoyouusuallydoduringtheSpringFestival?●Whatdoyouliketodo?Why?●WhatdoyouthinkoftheSpringFestival?DearMike,Howisitgoing?TheSpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalsinChina.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearMike,

Howisitgoing?

TheSpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalsinChina.ItoftencomesinJanuaryorFebruary.Beforethefestival,wealwayscleanthehousetosweepawaybadluck.OnNewYear’sEve,allthefamilymemberscometogethertohaveabigdinner.Themosttraditionalfoodisdumplings.Theyaredelicious.Afterdinner,weusuallywatchaspecialprogrammeonTV.

IliketovisitrelativesandfriendsbecauseIcangetsomepresents.IthinktheSpringFestivalisveryimportanttous.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua（二）母親節(jié)是一個(gè)感恩母親的節(jié)日，假如你是劉丹，今年你給媽媽過了一個(gè)特別的母親節(jié)，請(qǐng)你和同學(xué)們分享一下，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?1)我為媽媽準(zhǔn)備了很多。(2)母親節(jié)當(dāng)天媽媽仍然在工作。她是一名護(hù)士，很多病人需要她照顧。(3)我決定給她打電話，并用快遞寄給她一些花。(4)我告訴媽媽我們愛她，感謝她，媽媽很感動(dòng)。(5)我認(rèn)為…參考詞匯:感動(dòng)的touched用快遞byexpressdelivery要求:(1)詞數(shù):80左右(2)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Mother'sDayiscoming.Iprepared【參考范文】Mother'sDayiscoming.Ipreparedalottocelebrateitformymother.Butsheisstillatwork.Mymotherisanurseandneedstotakecareofthepatients.Idecidedtogiveheranunusualfestival.Icalledherandsenthersomeflowersbyexpressdelivery.ItoldmymotherhowmuchIlovedherandthankedher.Shewasverytouchedandhappy.Inmyopinion,eventhoughmymothercouldn'tbewithustogether,ourlovecrossedthedistance.Unit5(一)根據(jù)所給提示用英文寫一篇文章,簡要介紹一下中國的國寶(nationaltreasure)----大熊貓(panda)。不少于70詞。主要棲息地:四川、陜西、甘肅等省份體貌特征:黑白相間,黑眼睛,圓耳朵;身體雖胖但動(dòng)作敏捷(movenimbly);非常惹人喜愛生活習(xí)性:最愛吃竹子;會(huì)爬樹呼吁:應(yīng)得到保護(hù)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】PandasareChina'snationaltreasure.TheyliveinSichuan,Shaanxi,Gansuandsoon.Theyareblackandwhite.Theyhaveblackeyesandroundears.Theyarefat,buttheycanmovenimbly.Theyareverycuteandmanypeoplelovethem.Theylikeeatingbamboobest.Eachpandaneedstoeatalotofbambooeveryday.Theycanclimbtrees.Wemusttryourbesttoprotectthem.（二）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你在筆記本記下此刻正在發(fā)生的事情。(1)今年，超過70種候鳥在天津北大港濕地找到了它們的新家。(2)你和杰克、亨利、米婭正在游覽天津北大港濕地。(3)亨利對(duì)東方白鸛有著濃厚的興趣，他甚至在圖書館里做了深入的研究。杰克和亨利正在觀察東方白鸛。他正用知識(shí)來幫助自己理解鳥類的行為。(4)米婭正在喂鳥，所以很多鳥都飛向她，她很開心。參考詞匯:北大港濕地BeidagangWetland東方白鸛:OrientalWhiteStorks候鳥migratorybirds對(duì)……有興趣beinterestedin行為behavior(1)詞數(shù):80左右。(2)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Now,wearevisitingtheBeidagangWetlandinTianjin.Over70kindsofmigratorybirdsfoundtheirnewhomehere.MyfriendsJack,Henry,MiaandIareexcitedtobehere.Henry,withhisgreatinterestinOrientalstorks,isespeciallyexcited.Hedidsomeresearchontheminthelibrary,andnowheissharinghisknowledgewithus.Heisusinghisknowledgetoknowthebehaviorsofthebirds.Jackisrighttherewithhimandwatchingthebirds.Meanwhile,Miaisfeedingthebirds,andthey'reflyingtoher.Sheisreallyhappy.Thistripismorethanjustawalkinthewetlands.Nowweknowanimalsarebeautifulandimportanttothenaturalworld.Whatagreatday!Unit6(一)植物，是人類必不可少的伙伴。那芳草連天、山泉汨汨、鳥語花香和林海的陣陣音濤樂浪，對(duì)于我們來說，都是一種美的享受。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，以“Theimportanceofplants”為題寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)：1.植物在自然界中的重要性；2.植物對(duì)人類日常生活的幫助；3.保護(hù)植被的主要措施。注意：1.不少于80詞(開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。TheimportanceofplantsPlantsareimportantinthenaturalworld.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’stakeactionnowandprotectourlovelyplantstogether.【參考范文】TheimportanceofplantsPlantsareimportantinthenaturalworld.Theyprovideanimalswithhomeandenoughfood.Moreimportantly,plantscanhelpkeepthebalanceofnatureaswellasstopearthmovingawaywithwater.Forhumans,plantshavealotofusesandmakeourlivesconvenient.Plantscanprovideuswithmanythings，suchasfruit，medicineandwood.Plantscanalsoproduceoxygenforustobreathe，keepaircoolandclean.Asanaturelover，Ithinkweshouldnotonlystopcuttingdowntoomanytreesbutalsoplantmoretreesandothergreenplants.Let’stakeactionnowandprotectourlovelyplantstogether.(二).假如你是李華，請(qǐng)描述你和朋友們?cè)诓桊^里的一次難忘經(jīng)歷。(1)我們今天下午參觀了一個(gè)茶館，那里有很多香氣撲鼻的茶。(2)Jack和Henry對(duì)制茶過程感興趣，并向茶藝師學(xué)習(xí)了很多。(3)服務(wù)員微笑著給客人們上茶和點(diǎn)心，讓茶館氣氛更加溫馨。(4)老茶師教孩子們泡茶，幫助一個(gè)小男孩成功泡出好茶。(5)你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯:泡茶pourthetea要求:(1)詞數(shù):80左右。(2)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Today,Iwenttoanoldteahousewithmyfriends.Thereweresomanykindsoftea,andeachsmelledwonderful!JackandHenrylovedlearninghowteaismade.Theyaskedtheteamasterlotsofquestionsandlistenedcarefully.Afriendlywaitermadeeveryonehappywithherbigsmile.Sheservedhotteaandtastysnacks,makingtheteahousefeellikeacozyhome.Akindoldteamastertaughtkidstomaketea.Alittleboyhadahardtimeatfirst,buttheteamasterhelpedhim.Soon,theboycouldpourtheteawellandfeltveryproud.Wehadagreattimeandlearnedaboutthefriendlycultureoftea.Itwasadayfullofsmilesandgoodfeelings!期末綜合(一)假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你給你的朋友David寫一封信，講述你在新學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)戲劇的經(jīng)歷和收獲。(1)開學(xué)第一堂課我上了戲劇課，我很感興趣。(2)我們學(xué)校有個(gè)戲劇俱樂部，我誠邀你參加。(3)每周五下午三點(diǎn)，我們聚到學(xué)校小劇場學(xué)習(xí)和表演戲劇。(4)這張照片展現(xiàn)的是我們表演戲劇的開心時(shí)刻。(5)戲劇提高了我的英語，同時(shí)……參考詞匯:戲劇drama邀請(qǐng)invite劇場theatre表演perform要求:(1)詞數(shù):80~100，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。(2)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearDavid,Longtimenosee.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon!Yours,Hua【參考范文】DearDavid,Longtimenosee.Iwantedtosharewithyou