高考英語真題讀后續(xù)寫必背清單1.定語從句PaulhandedabottleofwatertoMac,whomanagedaweaksmile,murmuringsomethinglike“Thankyou”.(2017年浙江高考范文)保羅遞給一瓶水給麥克，麥克微微一笑，喃喃地說著“謝謝”。Thefluffylittlecreatureexaminedhernewsurroundingscuriously,andthenquicklyfixedhergazeatPoppy,whowasnudginghernosetowardthenewdogandwagginghertailvigorously.(2018年浙江高考范文)這個毛茸茸的小家伙好奇地審視著她的新環(huán)境，然后迅速地把目光盯著波比，波比正在向那只新狗推著鼻子，使勁地?fù)u著尾巴。Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.(2023年浙江高考范文)我的成功要?dú)w功于我的社會老師，她是我人生寫作道路上的燈塔。Asisoftenthecasewitholdpeople,mygrandfatherisfondoftalkingaboutgoodolddays.就像其他老人一樣,我祖父也喜歡談?wù)撨^去的美好時光。ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,she’dberightthere,whichIfoundquitecomforting.(2022年浙江高考原文)她對我笑了笑，說，如果我需要幫助，她就在那里，我感到很安慰。Elli,quickenoughtograspwhatImeant,flungthebreadwithallhermight,sendingitcrashingtoadistantfrozenpuddle,towhichthebearranatonce.(2020年浙江高考范文)埃莉很快就明白了我的意思，用盡全力把面包扔了出去，扔到遠(yuǎn)處一個冰凍的水坑里，熊立刻跑到了那里。AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb當(dāng)我的車接近它時，我的思緒又回到了我從蜘蛛網(wǎng)中救出蜂鳥的那一刻Inhindsight,themindtrick（that）sheemployedshouldtakethecredit。(2024年浙江高考原文)事后看來，她使用的思維技巧應(yīng)該得到功勞。Shegaveuptheideaofnavigatinginthebuildingatwillwithrotememory.Instead,shestudiedthebuildinglayoutcarefullyandhighlightedthetrickyhallwaysandturnswhereshegotlostpreviously她放棄了用死記硬背在大樓里隨意導(dǎo)航的想法。相反，她仔細(xì)研究了建筑的布局，并突出了她之前迷路的棘手的走廊和轉(zhuǎn)彎Hepickedmeupatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.他在四天前送我下車的汽車站接我。2.狀語從句Ifyouhavesometrouble(in)gettingalongwithyourfriends,youcanwritetotheeditorandaskforadvice.如果你在和朋友的相處上有問題,你可以寫信給編輯向他征求建議。Thevillagersdidn’trealizehowseriousthepollutionwasuntilallthefishdiedintheriver.直到河里的魚全死光了,村民們才意識到污染是多么嚴(yán)重。Asitsdarkshapeloomednear,myheartlurched,mypulseracing.(2020年浙江高考范文)當(dāng)它黑暗的形狀逼近時，我的心怦怦直跳，我的脈搏在跳動。3.名詞性從句Ofallthesports,Iliketable-tennisbest.Iholdtheviewthatitisnotonlyasportbutalsoanart,becauseitisagamethatneedsstrengthandskill.在所有運(yùn)動中,我最喜歡乒乓球。我認(rèn)為它不僅是一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動,而且是一門藝術(shù),因?yàn)樗且豁?xiàng)需要力量和技巧的運(yùn)動。Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatworldgovernmentsshouldconductseriouscampaignsagainstsmoking.通過以上討論,我們可以肯定地得出結(jié)論:世界各國政府應(yīng)該竭力開展反對吸煙的運(yùn)動。Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.(2023年浙江高考范文)那只鳥似乎在等著我，它那明亮的眼睛盯著我，仿佛在試圖表達(dá)某種深深的、不言而喻的感激之情。(2023年浙江高考范文)IknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.(2023年浙江高考范文)我知道，當(dāng)我鉆進(jìn)車?yán)?，開車離開時，我會永遠(yuǎn)珍惜我們分享的回憶。IwassohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.聽到這個消息，我立刻把它分享給了我的老師。4.it作形式主語Itisthecustomtogivetipstowaitersinrestaurantsandtaxidrivers.在餐館給服務(wù)員小費(fèi)、給出租車司機(jī)小費(fèi)(被認(rèn)為)是習(xí)俗。ItissaidthatCangJiecreatedtheChinesewritingsystem.相傳,漢字的書寫體系是倉頡發(fā)明的。5.Therebe句型IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.我被告知我在寫作比賽中獲得了一等獎，兩天內(nèi)就會有一個頒獎典禮。6.It強(qiáng)調(diào)句型Itisonlywhenyoutakeaction,whenyoucommit,thatthingswillstarttohappen.只有當(dāng)你采取行動、當(dāng)你去做時,事情才會發(fā)生。Itsuddenlyoccurredtoherthatitwasthemindtrickonherselfthatworked.她突然想到，她自己的思維技巧起了作用。Itwasn’tuntilacoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner.(2022年浙江高考原文)直到幾個小時后，我們才開門，開始提供晚餐。7.分詞作狀語AnInternationalHighSchoolStudentPhotographyShow,organizedbyourschoolphotographyclub,istobeheldfromJune15thandlastforthreeweekswiththethemeofenvironmentalprotection.由我們學(xué)校攝影俱樂部組織的主題為環(huán)境保護(hù)的國際中學(xué)生攝影展,將在六月十五日舉行并持續(xù)三周時間。Aimingtoexpressourloveandcarefortheelderly,westudentsintendtogoonavisittothenearbynursinghomefortheDoubleNinthFestivalnextSaturday.為了表達(dá)我們對老人的愛和關(guān)心,我們學(xué)生想要在下周六重陽節(jié)去拜訪附近的敬老院。8.倒裝句Notonlydidweseethepicturesquescenery,wealsomanagedtoconsiderMom’sscandalsasakindoffun.(2017年浙江高考范文)我們不僅看到了風(fēng)景如畫的風(fēng)景，我們還設(shè)法把媽媽的誹謗當(dāng)作一種樂趣。Seeminglyabsent-mindedandforgetfulasshewas,sheneverfailedtodemonstratethebeautyoflifetoherchildren,andendoweduswithafun-filledchildhoodandanever-drainedpassiontoembracelife.盡管她似乎心不在焉、健忘，但她總是向孩子們展示生活的美，并賦予了我們一個充滿樂趣的童年和一種永不枯竭的擁抱生活的激情。(2017年浙江高考范文)Onlybychangingthewaywelivewillwebeabletosavetheearth.只有改變生活方式,我們才能拯救地球。Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.(2016年浙江高考原文)她這輩子從來沒有嘗到過比這更好的味道。SonervouswasMarythatshecouldnotspeakout.瑪麗很緊張，她都說不出來了。Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.(2016年浙江高考范文)她雖然身體虛弱，卻掙扎著站起來，繼續(xù)尋找?guī)椭?。Yet,dangerousasthesituationwasatthatmoment,itwasallworthit.(2020年浙江高考范文)然而，盡管當(dāng)時的情況很危險，但這一切都是值得的。NosoonerhadthepoormangotinthanPaulclosedthedoorinstantly.(2017年浙江高考范文)那可憐的人剛進(jìn)去，保羅就立刻關(guān)上了門。9.虛擬語氣Ourheadteachertreatsusasifwewereherownchildren,soallthestudentsinourclassthinkhighlyofher.我們班主任對待我們就像對待自己的孩子一樣,所以我們班的學(xué)生都很尊重她。HowIwishwestudentshadmorefreetimetorelaxourselves!我多么希望我們學(xué)生有更多的自由時間放松自己!It’shightimethatwedid(shoulddo)somethingtoimproveourenvironment.該是我們?yōu)楦纳骗h(huán)境做些事情的時候了。Withthesocietydevelopingveryfast,it’squitenecessary/importantthatwe(should)haveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer.隨著社會的快速發(fā)展,我們有必要精通英語和電腦。Ifitweren’tforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldnotbetrappedhere.(2016年浙江高考范文)如果不是因?yàn)槟谴斡薮赖臓幊常揖筒粫焕г谶@里了Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.(2016年浙江高考范文)要不是我和湯姆吵了一架，走開，爬到高處，我就不會被困在這個可怕的地方，面臨死亡的危險。Muminsistedthatweshouldmakefulluseofitsincewehadbroughtit.(2017年浙江高考范文)媽媽堅(jiān)持要我們應(yīng)該充分利用它，因?yàn)槲覀円呀?jīng)帶來了它。Wereheabird,hewouldflyovertheskyfreely.如果他是一只鳥，他就會自由地飛過天空。KnowingthatMachadbeenchasedbyawolf,theywerestumpedforwordsandparalysedwithfear.(2017年浙江高考范文)他們知道麥克被狼追趕，啞口無言，被嚇得愣住了。Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”(2023年浙江高考范文)如果沒有你的認(rèn)可和指導(dǎo)，我就不可能寫這篇文章。再次非常感謝你！”10.with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)Withtheirheavyburdenremoved,studentscankeepmentalhealth.去除沉重的負(fù)擔(dān),學(xué)生們才可以保持心理健康。Withthebrightmoonupinthesky,wesittogetherandeatmooncakesandfruits,sharingourstories.皓月當(dāng)空,我們圍坐在一起,吃著月餅和水果,分享往事。Withournosepressedhardagainstthewindowandeyesgluedtothewindingroadahead,DavidandIanticipatedeverydayforathrillingadventure,whichwasonlyrivaledbyourjoyofreunitingwithourgrandparents.(2016年浙江高考范文)我們的鼻子緊緊地貼在窗戶上，眼睛盯著前面蜿蜒的道路，大衛(wèi)和我每天都期待著一場激動人心的冒險，只有我們與祖父母團(tuán)聚的喜悅才能與之媲美。11.形容詞放句首或句末Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.(2016年浙江高考原文)Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.(2016年浙江高考原文)Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryellowblouseandsparednoefforttoyellsoastoattractothers’attention.(2016年浙江高考原文)她急切而興奮，揮舞著她的黃色襯衫，不遺余力地大喊大叫，以吸引別人的注意。Naturally,wewereback,safeandsound.(2018年浙江高考原文)12.使用非謂語動詞Feelingrefreshed,Janecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.(2016年浙江高考范文)簡感到神清氣爽，繼續(xù)沿著小溪走著，尋找出去的路。Besides,theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determiningtolivethelifetothefullest.(2016年浙江高考范文)此外，他們同意再也不爭吵，決定過上最充實(shí)的生活。SeeingPaulwaveathimkindlyandopenthecardoorforhim,Macjumpedoffhisbicycleandrushedintothecarwithoutanyhesitation.(2017年浙江高考范文)看到保羅親切地向他揮手，并為他打開了車門，麥克跳下自行車，毫不猶豫地沖進(jìn)了車?yán)铩tartledbythewhitefluffy(毛茸茸的)rabbit,thehorsealmostthrewmeoffitsback.(2018年浙江高考范文)Tracingmyvoice,Dadfinallyfoundmeandwegotreunited.(2018年浙江高考范文)跟隨著我的聲音，爸爸終于找到了我，我們又團(tuán)聚了。Envelopedinamixtureofwindanddirt,thebearwriggledrestlesslyonthegroundbutdecided,afterawhile,tobeataretreat.(2020年浙江高考范文)在風(fēng)和泥土的包圍下，熊在地上不安地扭動著，但過了一會兒，它決定退撤退.Dayslater,browsingthroughthepicturesItookofthebearonmycamera,Icouldstillfeelashiverdownmyspine.(2020年浙江高考范文)幾天后，瀏覽我用相機(jī)拍的熊的照片，我仍然能感到脊椎在顫抖。13.使用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)Hertailwaggingfuriously,Poppybarkedwithjoy.(2020年浙江高考范文)波比憤怒地?fù)u著尾巴，高興地吠叫著。Hairinknots,noseandchaincoveredinpumpkinflesh,Iletoutasighofrelief.(2021年浙江高考范文)頭發(fā)打結(jié)，鼻子和鐵鏈上覆蓋著南瓜肉，我松了一口氣。14.On/Upondoingsth一...就...Onspottingthewolfswallowedbytheroad,Mac,bathedinperspiration,sighedwithreliefandsankdowntothebackseat.(2018年浙江高考范文)一看到狼消失在路的盡頭，麥克就汗流浹背，松了一口氣然后倒在后座上。15.Itis/wasthefirsttimethatIhave/haddoneItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtMomcouldbewiseasIwasadmiringourtent.這是我第一次認(rèn)為媽媽可以是明智的，因?yàn)槲艺谛蕾p我們的帳篷。16.Toone’s..,havingdonesth..,sb.didsthHowever,toourgreatdismay,havingwolfeddownthebread,thebearreturned.(2020年浙江高考范文)然而，讓我們非常驚愕沮喪的是，熊狼吞虎咽地吃下了面包，于是又回來了。17.beabouttodo...whenIwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.(2023年浙江高考范文)我正要離開時，蜂鳥出現(xiàn)了。高考續(xù)寫真題場景素材整理11.2016年2月浙江高考續(xù)寫樣題(國家考試中心命題)Paragraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”A.心理活動：以為被歹徒追趕+逃離1.PanicSetsIn:Withtheblaringalarmstillechoinginhisears,Arthurfeltasurgeofpaniccoursingthroughhim.TheoncepeacefulParkAvenuehadtransformedintoachaoticscene,andtheurgencyofthesituationbegantodawnonhim.2.HeartRacing,MindRacing:Ashesprintedthroughthebustlingcrowd,Arthurcouldfeelhisheartpoundinginhischest.Thoughtsracedthroughhismindlikeawhirlwind,fueledbythefearofbeingwronglyaccusedandtherealizationthathehadunwittinglybecomeentangledinabankrobbery.3.TheWeightofSuspicion:CarryingthesuitcaseaddedaburdensomeweighttoArthur'ssprint.Eachstepseemedheavier,notjustphysically,butundertheweightoftheyoungwoman'ssuspiciousgaze.Theironyoftryingtobehelpfulonlytobeperceivedasacriminalintensifiedhissenseofdread.4.TheUnlikelyFugitive:Inthemidstofthechaos,Arthurfoundhimselftransformedfromaregularcommuterintoanunlikelyfugitive.Thesurrealnatureoftheeventsunfoldingaroundhimfueledhisadrenaline,propellinghimforwardwithanalmostsurrealsenseofurgency.5.ChasingShadows:Runningthroughthelabyrinthofpanickedonlookers,Arthurfeltasthoughshadowswerechasinghim.Thesoundoftheyoungman'sshoutsaddedaneeriesoundtracktohisescape,heighteningthetensionofthemoment.B.坐上出租車，前往警局1.TheUnknownAwaits:AsArthurfledfromthescene,heenteredarealmofuncertainty.Theshoutsbehindhimwereaconstantreminderoftheunfoldingdrama,andhismindracedwiththequestionofhowhecoulduntanglehimselffromthisunexpectedpredicament.2.HailingaTaxiAmidstChaos:Spottingataxiamidstthechaos,Arthurwavedfrantically,desperatetodistancehimselffromthestreet.Thedoorswungopen,andhehastilyclimbedin,theadrenaline-fueledurgencystillpulsatingthroughhisveins.Asthetaxispedawayfromthetumultuousscene,Arthur'sheartcontinuedtorace,uncertaintycloudinghisthoughts.Thedestinationwasunclear——ablendoffear,confusion,andthepressingneedtoclearhisnameattheforefrontofhismind.3.TenseTaxiRide:Thetaxiridefelttense,thecityscapepassingbyasablur.Arthur'seyesdartednervously,constantlycheckingtherearviewmirrorasifexpectingtheshadowsofsuspiciontocatchupwithhim.4.SilentArrivalatthePoliceStation:Thepolicestationloomedahead,adauntingsymbolofauthority.Thetaxipulledtoasilentstop,andArthur,stillcarryingthesuitcase,hesitatedforamomentbeforesteppingoutintotheunknown.5.NavigatingthePoliceStation'sAtmosphere:TheairinsidethepolicestationwaschargedwithtensionasArthurnavigatedthroughtheunfamiliarsurroundings.Theclickingofhisfootstepsechoedinthesterilehallway,addingtotheweightofthesituation.Paragraph2:ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur...A.告知警察實(shí)情，開箱檢查/匆忙下車，告訴警察實(shí)情1.Enteringthepolicestation:AsArthurenteredthestation,hewasgreetedbythelowhumofconversationamongofficers.Theweightofthesuitcaseinhishandseemedtointensifyasheapproachedthefrontdesk,whereastern-facedofficerglancedupfromapileofpaperwork.2.Explainingwhathadhapped:AsArthurbegantoexplainthestrangeseriesofeventsthatledhimtothestation,theofficer'sskepticismslowlygavewaytoarealizationthatArthurmightbeaninnocentbystandercaughtupintheaftermathofthebankrobbery.Theofficerradioedforbackup,andwithinmoments,thepolicestationbuzzedwithaheightenedsenseofurgency.3.OpeningtheSuitcaseforInspection:Understandingthegravityofthesituation,Arthurvoluntarilyopenedthesuitcaseforinspection.Thecontentsinstantlybecameapeculiarexhibitinthisdrama.4.AwaitingResolution:Havingsharedhisaccount,Arthurawaitedaresolution,hisfutureuncertain.Thepolicestation'satmospherebecameablendofofficialexaminationandthelingeringechoesofthebankalarm,leavingArthurrestlesslywonderingtheunpredictableturnsofanordinaryday.B.描述歹徒形象，抓住歹徒/小伙出現(xiàn)，誤會解除1.Providingmoreinformation:Arthur'sheartracedasheprovidedadetaileddescriptionoftheyoungmanhehadencountered.Theofficerrelayedtheinformationtopatrolunits,settinginmotionacitywidesearchforboththerealcriminalandthemissingsuitcases.Thesuitcase,nowacentralpieceofevidence,wascarefullyexaminedforanytracesthatmightlinkittothecrime.2.WitnessStatements:Witnessesfromthechaoticscenewerebroughtin,includingtheyoungwomanArthurhadaccidentallybumpedinto.Thesuitcase,positionedasakeyelementintheunfoldingdrama,promptedvariedreactionsandstatementsthateitheraddedtooralleviatedthesuspicion.3.Therealrobber:Outsidethepolicestation,Arthurfoundhimselfamidstawhirlwindofactivity.Patrolcarsspedawaywithflashinglights,determinedtoarresttheactualwrongdoer.Theyoungman'sshoutsechoedthroughtheairashedesperatelytriedtoexplainhisinnocence,furtherfuelingtheurgencyofthesituation.TheyoungmanwhohadsoughtArthur'shelpwiththesuitcaseswasapprehendednearthebank,hispanickedexpressionbetrayingasenseofguilt.Thestolenpropertyfromthebankrobberywasrecovered,andthesurroundingcrowdwatchedinamixofreliefandcuriosityasthepolicetookchargeofthesituation.C.主旨升華:1.Intheheartbeatbetweenahelpfulgestureandacaseofmistakenidentity,Arthurfoundhimselfentangledinawebofunexpectedeventsthatwouldalterthecourseofhisordinaryday.2.Fromthemundaneactofassistingastrangerwithsuitcasestothesuddenchaosofabankrobbery,Arthur'sjourneyonParkAvenueunfoldedintoataleofchanceencountersandunforeseenconsequences.3.ThesymphonyofParkAvenue,oncefilledwitheverydaysounds,transformedintoacacophonyofalarmsandpanickedshouts,revealingtheunpredictablenatureoflife'stwistsandturns.4.Arthur'swillingnesstolendahelpinghandbecamethecatalystforaseriesofeventsthatwouldtesthismettle,navigatingapathbetweenassistanceandsuspicion.5.Amidthechaosofafailedcarandafatefulencounter,Arthurunknowinglysteppedontoastagewheretherolesofhelperandsuspectblurred,illustratingthefragilebalanceofintentionsinthefaceofunexpectedcircumstances.6.Asthealarmechoedthroughtheair,thenarrativeunfoldedintoagrippingtaleofordinarymomentscollidingwithextraordinaryevents,emphasizingthefragilityofnormalcyintheunpredictablelandscapeofurbanlife.7.Arthur'ssprintthroughParkAvenuebecameametaphorfortheunpredictabilityoflife,areminderthatintheblinkofaneye,onecanshiftfrombeingamerebystandertoacentralcharacterinalarger,unforeseendrama.8.Thesuitcase,onceasymbolofassistance,turnedintoaweightyburdenasArthurfoundhimselfunintentionallyimplicatedintheunfoldingdrama,exploringthethinlinebetweengoodwillandsuspicion.9.Withtheyoungman'spleatostopechoinginthebackground,Arthur'sflightthroughthecitystreetsencapsulatedtheessenceofastorywhereactions,innocentornot,setoffachainreactionofevents.10.Arthur'sunexpectedsprintbecameametaphoricalraceagainsttheunpredictablecurrentsoffate,highlightingthefragilityofourdailyroutinesinthefaceofunexpecteddisruptions.2.2016年10月浙江高考Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.A.環(huán)境描寫：野外“夜晚”的刻畫Thewildernesslaybathedinthesoftglowofthemoon,castingasilveryblazeoverthelandscape.Thenighttime/nightlysymphonybeganascricketstunedtheirinstruments,andtherustleofleavesinthegentlebreezeprovidedthebackgroundmelody.Ablanketofstarsornamented/adornedthenightsky,eachoneadistantlighthouseinthevastuniversal/spatialsea.Theairwascool,carryingtheearthyfragranceofpineanddampsoil.Aloneowlhooted/cryinthedistance,itscallechoingthroughthestillness.Thecalmnessofthenightenvelopedthewilderness,creatingasereneshelter/hideawayundertheheavenlycrown.Asdarknesssettledoverthewilderness,anairofmysteryandintrigueunfolded.Themoon,shielded/shroudedinwispsofdriftingclouds,intermittently/incessantlyilluminatedthelandscapewithanotherworldlyglow.Shadowsdancedamongthetrees,concealingsecretswithintheirinkydepths.Thenighttime/nightlycreatures,hiddenfromsight,orchestratedanelusivesymphonyofchirpsandcalls.Adistanthowlechoed,addinganelementofwildmystiquetothenight.Therustleofunseencreaturesheightenedthesenseofanticipation,asifthewildernessheldsecretswaitingtobeunveiled.Undertheveilofnight,thewildernesstransformedintoanenchantingdominion/spherewhereimaginationandrealitycoexisted.B.恐懼情緒：因?yàn)橐购诙a(chǎn)生1.Theonce-familiarwoodstransformedintoanbottomlessabyssasdarknessswallowedthelasttracesofdaylight.Sarah'severystepechoedlikeaspine-chillingdrumbeat,amplifiedbytherustlingleavesandthehauntinghoots【(貓頭鷹等鳥類的)鳴叫聲】ofunseencreatures.Achillingbreezesentshiversdownherspine,makingherawareofthespreadingshadowssubtly.Theroughbranchesoverheadtwistedintooddshapes,playingtricksonhermind.Themurmurofthewindbecameanindistinctwhisper,asiftheverynightconspiredtokeepherlostanddisoriented.Eachdistantsoundgavewaytoaterrifyingpresence,fuelingtheknotoffeartighteninginherchest.2.Theancientmansioncreakedandgroanedwiththeweightoftheintrusivedarkness.Jake,exploringitsdisrepairedhalls,feltanoppressivestillnesssettleovertheair.Thefaintbeamofhisflashlightcastlong,distortedshadowsthatseemedtodancereluctantlyonthedecayingwalls.Dustparticlesgleamedinthedimlight,creatinganotherworldlyatmosphere.Unseendraftswhisperedthroughtheemptycorridors,whisperingtalesofthemansion'sforgottenhistory.Everysqueakofafloorboardechoedlikeaspirit'sgroan,andthecreakingofthedoorsseemedtomockJake'ssolitude.Intheheartofthatbreathless/chokingdarkness,hegrappled/struggledwithanunshakablefearthatsomethingunseenconcealedintheshadows,watchingandwaiting.C.人物入睡：人物害怕以后平靜入睡Emmalayinbed,envelopedbytheoppressivedarknessthatseemedtoamplifythecreaksandwhispersoftheoldhouse.Theroom,onceashelter/hideaway,nowharboredanunsettlingenergy.Shepulledthecoverstight,attemptingtoshieldherselffromtheunseen.Thesofthumofthewindoutsideevolvedintoghostlymurmurs,andtheshadowscastbythemoonlightdancedreluctantlyonthewalls.Everyfickerofthebedsidelampsentherheartracing,castingfleeting/swiftdoubtsonthesafetyofherhaven.AsEmmaclosedhereyes,thequietofthenightwasshatteredbytheechoesofherownfears.Nightmarestookshape,vividandterrifying,asshenavigatedadistorteddreamscape.Eachtossandturninhersleepmirroredtheinternalstruggletoescapetheclutchesofherownimagination.Theoncecomfortingembraceofherbedroombecameabattlegroundbetweenwakefulnessandthelooming/faintly/hauntingspiritsofthenight.Despiteherattemptstorationalizetheirrational,Emma'ssubconsciousmindcontinuedtoevokeafantastical/otherworldlysenseofterrors,leavingheryearning/desiringforthepeacefulreprieve/easeofadreamlesssleep.Thenight,onceadominion/sphereofrest,hadbecomeanunpredictablejourneythroughthelabyrinth/mazeofherdeepestfears.Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.A.環(huán)境描寫：森林的清晨帶來希望1.Asthefirstlightofdawnpaintedtheskyinhuesofsoftpastels/coloredchalk,theforeststirredwiththepromiseofanewday.Dew-kissedleavesglistened/gleamedlikepreciousjewels,reflectingthetendercaressofthemorningsun.Theair,crispandinvigorating,carriedthesweetperfumeofbloomingflowersandtheearthyfragranceofmoss-coveredground.Birds,perchedonbranches,forecastedthearrivalofthesunwithamelodicsymphony,eachnoteacelebrationoftheforest'sawakening.Raysofsunlightfilteredthroughthetoweringtrees,creatingaspottedfabricoflightandshadowontheforestfloor.Thequietrustleofleaveswhisperedsecretsofthenight'spassing,andtheonceserenelandscapenowbuzzedwiththeactivityofcreaturesemergingfromtheirnighttime/nightlyslumber/nap.Intheembraceofthistranquil/serenedawn,theforestutteredabreathofhope,promisingadayofrenewal/rebirthandgrowth.2.Withthedawn'sgentletouch,theforestcamealiveinasymphonyofrenewal.Sunbeamsfilteredthroughthedensecanopy/blanket,castingawarmglowontheemeraldtapestry/fabricbelow.Themorningmist,likeadelicateveil,clungtothebranches,addinganotherworldlyqualitytothelandscape.Theair,floatedwiththeearthyscentofdampsoil,carriedthepromiseofrejuvenation/revitalization.Achorusofsongbirds,theirmelodiesinterweaving,echoedthroughthetrees,eachnoteacreedtotheforest'sresilience.Delicatebudsflutteredtheirpetals,revealingburstsofvibrantcolor,whilesmallcreaturesrustledintheunderbrush,contributingtotheharmoniousmelodyofthemorning.Inthisenchantingsymphony,theforestwhisperedtalesofgrowth,renewal,andtheenduringcycleoflife,instillingasenseofhopethatlingeredintheairlikeapromisefulfilled.B.自救：用黃色襯衫向直升飛機(jī)求救Withthefirstlightofdawn,theforestworeaquietserenitythatconcealed/buriedthechaosofthepreviousnight.Thewife,heryellowshirtalighthouseintheverdant/emeraldsea,stoodinasmallclearing,abackdropoftangled/interwovenbranchesframingherdesperateplea.Thehumofadistanthelicopterclatteredthroughthetrees,andhereyessearchedtheskyfortheapproachingrescue.Theyellowshirt,astrikingcontrasttothelushgreenery,waveddesperately,sendingamessageofdistresstotheunseenrescuers.Thehusband,nowregretfulandapologetic,emergedfromtheshadows,realizingthegravityoftheirsituation.Theforest,onceawitnesstoconflict,nowstoodwitnesstoapleaforreconciliationasthehelicopter'sbladesslicedthroughtheair,promisingrescueandachanceforrenewal.C.重歸于好(熱點(diǎn)，考試很喜歡考)：夫妻吵架以后重歸于好1.Asthestormoftheirargumentragedthroughthenight,theaircrackledwithtension,echoingtheharshwordsexchangedbetweenthehusbandandwife.Raindropstappedonthewindowlikeagloomydrumbeat,mirroringtheheavinessintheirhearts.Yet,withthefirstlightofdawn,aserenecalmsettledoverthescene.Therainhadceased,leavingbehindaglisteningworldwashedanew/afresh.Inthequietmorning,thecouplestoodonthecommencementofforgiveness.Thehusband,remorseful/regretful,extendedanolivebranch,andthewife,withtear-streaked/tearfulcheeks,accepted.Thesunrisepaintedtheskyinsofthuesofpinkandgold,castingawarmglowontheirreconciledfigures.Intheserenedawn,theechoesoftheirdisagreementfaded,replacedbyasharedunderstandingthatweatheredtheemotionalstorm.2.Intheaftermathoftheirheatedexchange,thenightlingeredwiththeresidue/scene/leftatmosphereofunresolvedtension.Butasthefirstraysofmorninglightspilledthroughthecurtains,atentativepeaceenvelopedtheroom.Thewife,eyestiredbuthopeful,foundsolace/comfortintheforgivingembraceofthedawn.Thehusband,realizingthegravityoftheirdisagreement,reachedoutwithagestureofreconciliation.Thewarmthofthesunrisebathedtheirsharedspace,castingasidetheshadowsofthepreviousnight.Withawhisperedapologyandagentletouch,thecouplebridgedtheemotionalgap.Astheystoodtogether,silhouetted/reflectedagainstthesofthuesofdawn,thehealingpowerofthemorninglightstitched/sewedtogetherthefrayed/worn/brokenedgesoftheirrelationship,promisinganewdayofunderstandingandrenewedconnection.3.2017年6月浙江高考Paragraph1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.A：動作描寫：上車避險，狼緊追不舍1.Paulslammedonthebrakes,bringingtheircartoascreechinghalt.Thedoorsflungopen,andMac,withasurgeofadrenaline(腎上腺素),leapedoffhisbike,racingtowardsthesafetyofthevehicle.Beeky,panicinhereyes,gesturedurgentlyforhimtogetinside.2.Macswiftlysteeredhisbiketowardsthesideoftheroadand,withouthesitation,threwhimselfontothebackseatofthecar.3.Paulslammedthedoorshut,andthevehicleaccelerated,leavingthepersistentwolfbehind.Thewolfcontinueditsrelentlesspursuitdespitethesuddenobstacle.4.Thewolfspersistentpursuitsentshiversdownhisspine,achillingreminderthatdangerwashotonhisheels.Intheshadowofthemoonlight,thewolfstirelesspursuitpaintedahauntingimageofapredatorunwillingtoabandonitsprey.5.Thewolf'spresencedeclined,unabletokeeppacewiththeacceleratingcar,untilitbecameamerespotonthehorizon./Asthevehiclegainedspeed,thewolf'sformgraduallydissolved,mergingintothelandscapeuntilitvanishedfromsight.6.Mac'sheartracedashepeeredthroughtherearwindow,watchingthedeterminedcreaturefadeintothedistance.B：心理/情緒描寫：車子駛離險境，心有感嘆1.Asthecarspedaway,thewolf,nowleftinthedust,continueditsvainpursuitforamomentbeforefinallygivingupthechase.Mac,stillcatchinghisbreath,castagratefullookathisunexpectedsaviors.2.AshiverrandownMac'sspineashereflectedonthenarrowescape,hisheartpoundingwiththehauntingm