高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習小熊代女孩踏上五十州之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Afterseeingaprogramontelevisionaboutareporterwhohadhitchhiked(搭順風車)acrossAmerica,myten-year-olddaughter,Ashleysaid,“IwishIcoulddothat!”Ashleywasdiagnosedwithcancerthreeyearsearlier.Althoughsheiscancer-freenowafterasurgery,numeroustestsandthescaryprocedureoftreatmentshadmadeherunwillingtoriskoutsideherknownworld.SoIwantedtoencouragethatspiritofadventureinher.Ibegantryingtothinkofawayforherto“hitchhike”acrossthecountrywithoutleavinghome.That’showCarmenwasborn.CarmenisateddybearAshleyhadreceivedwhileshewasinthehospital.WedecidedtosendCarmeninAshley’splace.SowepurchasedanotebookasatraveljournalandabagforCarmentotravelin,togetherwithaletterwrittenbyAshley:4續(xù)寫原文MynameisAshleyandIamtenyearsold.Thisismybear,Carmen.IgotherwhenIwasinthehospital.ShewantstogotoallfiftystatesjustlikethereporterguyonTVwhohitchhikedacrossAmerica.Butshecan’twalk,sowillyoupleasehelpher?Couldyouletherridewithyouandkeephersafe,aswellastellheraboutyourselfsoshewon’tbelonely?Pleasewritealittleaboutyourselfinthejournalandthenintroducehertosomeonenew.Shewantstomeetasmanynewpeopleasshecan.IthinkbyaboutSeptembershewillbereadytocomehome.Inhercoinpurseis$5.00.PleaseputherinaboxwithherjournalandsendhertoSacCityStateBank.Attention:CaretakerofCarmenBear.IfyouwouldliketohearfromCarmenaftershegetshome,pleaseleaveyouraddressinhernotebookandwewillsendyouanoteandletyouknowwhenshegetshomesafely.5續(xù)寫原文ThankyoufortakingcareofCarmen,andthankyoufortakingthetimetowriteinhernotebook.Yournewfriends,CarmenandAshley6段首句Paragraph1：WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer(巡警).Paragraph2：ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-expectedpackagewithCarmeninsidefinallyarrived.____________________________________________________________________7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了十歲的Ashley三年前被診斷出癌癥，盡管術后已無癌癥，但此前的治療讓她不敢冒險走出熟悉的世界。在看到記者搭順風車橫穿美國的節(jié)目后，她表示希望自己也能如此。為鼓勵她的冒險精神，媽媽決定讓Ashley的小熊Carmen代替她踏上旅程。她們?yōu)镃armen準備了旅行日記和背包，并附上Ashley的信，請求陌生人幫助Carmen前往美國的五十個州。信中詳細說明了幫助方式和后續(xù)聯(lián)系方法。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer(巡警).隨后，我們把Carmen交給了我們的家庭朋友菲爾，他是一名公路巡警。菲爾非常樂意幫忙，他小心翼翼地將Carmen安置在巡邏車的副駕駛座上，還特意給她系上了安全帶，仿佛Carmen是一位真正的乘客。一路上，菲爾帶著Carmen見識了各種各樣的風景，從繁華的城市街道到寧靜的鄉(xiāng)村小路。每到一處，菲爾都會熱情地向同事和遇到的路人介紹Carmen。在日記里，菲爾詳細記錄下他們的行程，分享有趣的巡邏故事，還有那些與Carmen相遇的人們的善良和熱情。有一次，他們遇到一群可愛的孩子，孩子們好奇地圍過來，輕輕地撫摸著Carmen，還在日記里畫了可愛的圖案，為Carmen的旅程增添了許多歡樂。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-expectedpackagewithCarmeninsidefinallyarrived.然后，在九月的一天，期待已久的裝有Carmen的包裹終于到了。阿什利一聽到門鈴聲，就像離弦的箭一樣沖過去開門。她顫抖著雙手接過包裹，眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒?；氐椒块g后，她迫不及待地打開包裹，看到Carmen安然無恙，激動得差點落淚。她輕輕拿起旅行日記，一頁一頁地仔細閱讀，仿佛跟著Carmen一起經歷了那些奇妙的旅程。看到陌生人在日記里寫下的溫暖話語和有趣經歷，阿什利被深深打動。這次經歷讓她感受到了世界的廣闊和人們的善意，也讓她原本有些怯懦的心變得更加勇敢，她開始期待未來自己也能去探索更多未知的地方。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer.Philwasmorethanhappytotakeonthisspecialmission.HegentlyplacedCarmeninthepassengerseatofhispatrolcarandcarefullybuckledherup,treatingherjustlikearealpassenger.Duringthejourney,PhilshowedCarmenvarioussceneries,fromthebustlingcitystreetstothepeacefulcountrylanes.Wherevertheywent,PhilwouldenthusiasticallyintroduceCarmentohiscolleaguesandthepassers-bytheymet.Inthejournal,Philmeticulouslyrecordedtheirtrips,sharinginterestingpatrolstoriesandthekindnessandenthusiasmofthepeoplewhoencounteredCarmen.Once,theymetagroupoflovelychildren.Thechildrencuriouslygatheredaround,gentlystrokingCarmenanddrawingcutepatternsinthejournal,addingalotofjoytoCarmen'sjourney.14范文呈現(xiàn)ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-expectedpackagewithCarmeninsidefinallyarrived.AssoonasAshleyheardthedoorbellring,sherushedtothedoorlikeaboltoflightning.Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementasshetookthepackage.Backinherroom,shecouldn'twaittoopenit.SeeingCarmensafeandsound,shewassoexcitedthattearswelledupinhereyes.Shegentlypickedupthetraveljournalandreaditcarefullypagebypage,asifshehadexperiencedthosewonderfultripswithCarmen.Beingdeeplytouchedbythewarmwordsandinterestingexperienceswrittenbystrangersinthejournal,Ashleyrealizedthevastnessoftheworldandthekindnessofpeople.Thisexperiencemadeheroriginallytimidheartbecomebraver,andshebegantolookforwardtoexploringmoreunknownplacesinthefuture.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WethentookCarmentoourfamilyfriendPhil,ahighwaypatrolofficer.Phil,elatedtobepartofthisheart-warmingadventure,tenderlyinstalledCarmeninthepassengerseatofhispatrolcar,fasteningherseatbeltwithutmostcare,asifshewereapreciouscargo.Throughouttheirexpedition,PhilexposedCarmentoakaleidoscopeoflandscapes,fromthevibrantcitythoroughfarespulsatingwithlifetotheidyllicruralbywayssteepedintranquility.Ateverystop,Phil,withunbridledenthusiasm,introducedCarmentohisfellowofficersandthechancepassers-by.Inthejournal,Philchronicledtheirodysseyinminutedetail,regalingitwithengagingpatrolanecdotesandthetalesofthekindsoulswhocrossedpathswithCarmen.Ononeoccasion,agroupofadorablechildrenflockedaround,theireyeswidewithcuriosity,gentlycaressingCarmenandadorningthejournalwithcharmingdoodles,infusingCarmen'sjourneywithacascadeofjoy.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ThenonedayinSeptemberthelong-awaitedpackagehousingCarmenfinallyarrived.Theinstantthedoorbellchimed,Ashleycatapultedtowardsthedoor,herheartpoundingwithanticipation.Withtremblinghands,shereceivedthepackage,anduponreturningtohersanctum,shetoreitopenwithbarelycontainedexcitement.ThesightofCar