初中作文外研社八上M4Planes,shipsandtrains外研版八上Module4

Planes,shipsandtrains

寫作主題：旅游與交通一、話題分析本模塊的話題是“旅游與交通”。本模塊講述了一位旅行者征求從倫敦到阿姆斯特丹的旅行建議。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能運(yùn)用比較級和最高級對不同的交通方式進(jìn)行比較；2.介紹自己的家人通常采用的交通方式；3.能制定旅游計(jì)劃，并進(jìn)行綜合比較，分析其利弊并闡述理由。作文精講：令人期待的國慶假期就快到了，同學(xué)們紛紛打算在假期出去旅游。就選擇何種出行方式大家有不同的看法。假如你的外教Mike想了解你們班學(xué)生的出行方式。請你根據(jù)表格中的提示，向Mike作簡要介紹并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。WaysoftransportationNumberReason(原因)Plane10Fast,excitingTrain20Safe,comfortableCoach5CheapYourchoiceandreason時(shí)態(tài)：-描述同學(xué)的計(jì)劃打算用begoingto；-比較交通工具之間的特點(diǎn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)開頭引入：(國慶節(jié)到來+每個人都有不同的出行方式)1.基礎(chǔ)版本：NationalDayiscoming.Differentstudentschoosedifferentwaysoftravelling.2.進(jìn)階版本：WithNationalDaycoming(隨著假期的來臨),moststudentsplantogotravellingandtheychoosedifferentways.3.大神版本：NationalDayistimefortravellingandstudentsinourclassaregoingtotravelindifferentways.介紹班級的出行情況，并給出理由(可以從多到少寫)1.基礎(chǔ)版本：Twentystudentsaregoingtotravelbytrain,becauseitisthesafestandthemostcomfortablewaytotravel.Andtenstudentsaregoingtotakeaplane,becauseitisfastandexciting.Onlyfivestudentschoosecoachjustbecauseitischeap.2.進(jìn)階版本：Moststudentswouldliketogotravellingbytrain,becausegoingbytrainisthesafestandthemostcomfortableway,andyoucanenjoytheviewsalongtheway(你可以欣賞沿途的風(fēng)景).Besides(另外),tenstudentsprefertotaketheplane,becausetheythinktakingtheplanecanofferthemafastandexcitingtrip.However(然而),only5studentsaregoingtravellingbycoach,becauseofitslowprice.3.大神版本：Itisclearthatmoststudentschoosetrainastheirideal(理想的)wayoftravelling,becauseofitsspeedandcomfort(速度和舒適).Besides,theycanenjoytheviewsalongtheway.Moreover(另外),tenstudentsprefertotravelbyplane,becauseitisthefastestwayandoffersthemanexcitingexperience.However(另外),only5studentschoosecoach,becauseitisverycheap.介紹自己的情況：1.基礎(chǔ)版本：Asforme,Iamgoingtravellingbycar.Becauseitistheeasiestway,andyoudon'tneedtowait.2.進(jìn)階版本：Asforme,travellingbycarismychoice.Asitistheeasiestwayandyoucanenjoythejourneywithyourfamily.3.大神版本：Personally,Iamgoingtravellingbycar.Becauseitistheeasiestandthemostcomfortableway,IcanstartmyjourneywheneverIlikeandthereisnoneedtowaitforothers.AndIcanalsoenjoywonderfulfamilytime.總結(jié)：1.基礎(chǔ)版本：Thisisourtravelplan.HowdoyougotravellingthisNationalDay?2.進(jìn)階版本：Choosethegoodwayfortravellingsothatwecanenjoyourtripbetter.3.大神版本：Tosumup,holidayisthetimetorelaxourselvesandchoosingthegoodwaytotraveladdfuntoit.范文1:NationalDayiscoming.Differentstudentschoosedifferentwaysoftravelling.Twentystudentsaregoingtotravelbytrain,becauseitisthesafestandthemostcomfortablewaytotravel.Andtenstudentsaregoingtotakeaplane,becauseitisfastandexciting.Onlyfivestudentschoosecoachjustbecauseitischeap.Asforme,Iamgoingtravellingbycar.Becauseitistheeasiestway,youdon'tneedtowait.Thisisourtravelplan.HowdoyougotravellingthisNationalDay?范文2:WithNationalDaycoming,moststudentsplantogotravellingandtheychoosedifferentwaystotravel.Moststudentswouldliketogotravellingbytrain,becausegoingbytrainisthesafestandthemostcomfortableway,andyoucanenjoytheviewsalongtheway.Besides,tenstudentsprefertotaketheplane,becausetheythinktakingtheplanecanofferthemafastandexcitingtrip.However,only5studentsaregoingtravellingbycoach,becauseofitslowprice.Asforme,travellingbycarismychoice.Asitistheeasiestwayandyoucanenjoythejourneywithyourfamily.Choosethegoodwayoftravellingsothatwecanenjoyourtripbetter.范文3:NationalDayisatimefortravellingandstudentsinourclassaregoingtotravelindifferentways.Itisclearthatmoststudentschoosetrainastheiridealwayoftravelling,becauseofitsspeedandcomfort.Besides,theycanenjoytheviewsalongtheway.Moreover,tenstudentsprefertotravelbyplane,becauseitisthefastestwayandoffersthemanexcitingexperience.However,only5studentschoosecoach,becauseitisverycheap.Personally,Iamgoingtravellingbycar.Becauseitistheeasiestandthemostcomfortableway