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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IwasshywhenIwasyoung—everyonemademenervous.Iwasalsowhatmostteachersandparentswouldcalla
“goodkid”,followingtherules,andrarelyquestioningauthority.Butthenoneday,onesinglerideonaschoolbuschangedallthat.Theschoolbusthatdaywassmellyandcrowded.Thewindowswereallrolledupbythebusdriver'sorders—itwasrainingtoohardoutside.Mostoftheotherkidswereengagedinconversationsandgames.Isataloneasusual,speakingtonoone.Overandover,IcarefullywipedasmallcircleonmywindowsothatIcouldwatchoutside.Thebusstopped,waitingforanaccidenttobecleared.Thedriver,Mrs.Foster,wasparticularlytensethatdayandhadyelledatseveralkidswhohadbeenstandingupintheirseats.AsIsatquietly,Isawalittlecatontheothersideoftheroad.Itwasallwetanddidn'tseemtoknowwheretogo.Iwantedtohelpthecat,butthebusdriverwouldneverallowmeoffthebus.Iwouldgetintobigtroublefortryingtorescueacatacrossabusy,rainystreet.IalsothoughtthatifIpointedoutthemiserablecat,theotherkidswouldprobablythinkIwasstrange.Icouldn'tbearthat.Mywindowwascloudyagain,andwhenIwipedthewindowclear,Icouldseethecatwasnowstrugglinginrunningwaterandshaking.Isawabsoluteterrorinitsdark,roundeyes.IfeltlikeIwasdrowningalongwiththelittlecat,tearsrollingdownmycheeks.Iwantedtorushoffthebuswithoutaskingforpermissiontosavethecat.ButIalsopicturedtheotherkidsstaringatme.Isatstill,unabletoact.Thebusbegantomoveforward.Icouldseethecatpanicked.Iglancedaround,butnooneelseseemedtohavenoticed.Ihadn'tevenrealizedthatIwasstandingup.WhenMrs.Fosteryelledatmetositdown,Iwasshocked.“Nooneistoleavethisbus!
”Mrs.Fostersaidseriously,rushingintotherain.文本分析1.角色:_____________________________2.視角:第________人稱3.時(shí)空線:theschoolbus4.請(qǐng)?jiān)谖恼轮袑⒖赡艿木€索都找出來。Intheeyesofteachersandparents,whatkindofpersonwasI?
:______________________Howwastheweathertoday?:___________________________________________________WhatwasthedifferencebetweenIandotherchildren?:_____________________________Whydidthebusstop?:_________________________________________________________Howdidthedriverperformthatday?:_____________________________________________Howwasthelittlecatdoing?:____________________________________________________Whatwasmydilemma?
________________________________________________________Whydidn'tthedriverallowmetogetoffthebus?___________________________________WhatdidIdosubconsciously?___________________________________________________5.情節(jié)線:我小時(shí)候很害羞,是老師和父母眼中的"好孩子",直到一次校車經(jīng)歷改變了她。→___________________________________
→____________________________________
→________________________________→(續(xù)寫)在福斯特太太對(duì)我大喊大叫要我坐下時(shí),我感到震驚?!罢l都不許下車!”福斯特太太嚴(yán)肅地說,然后沖進(jìn)雨中。6.情感線:I:shy→___________→___________→___________(續(xù)寫)7.
綜合以上信息,請(qǐng)用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個(gè))中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.句式:表語從句;非謂語;狀語從句;同位語;定語從句;賓語從句_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.本文屬于人與自我:_______________________________________情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:WhenMrs.Fosteryelledatmetositdown,Iwasshocked.銜接句1———對(duì)前面的Iwasshocked提問“我的反應(yīng)”:
HowdidIrespondtoheryellingatme?過渡句推演:銜接1→______?______←銜接2銜接句2———對(duì)“Nooneistoleavethisbus!
”Mrs.Fostersaidseriously,rushingintotherain.
中提問“Mrs.Foster為什么要下車?”:WhydidMrs.Fostergetoffthebus?第二段提示句:“Nooneistoleavethisbus!
”Mrs.Fostersaidseriously,rushingintotherain.銜接3———對(duì)rushingintotherain提問“Mrs.Foster下車去做什么?”:WhatwasMrs.Fostergoingtodoaftershegotoff?過渡句推演:銜接3→_____?_____←主題主題:_________________________________第一段:在福斯特太太對(duì)我大喊大叫要我坐下時(shí),我感到震驚?!賍_________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:“誰都不許下車!”福斯特太太嚴(yán)肅地說,然后沖進(jìn)雨中?!躝_________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________基于以上分析,完成相應(yīng)作文WhenMrs.Fosteryelledatmetositdown,Iwasshocked.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Nooneistoleavethisbus!
”Mrs.Fostersaidseriously,rushingintotherain.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案:中文:文章通過第一人稱敘述了一個(gè)害羞的“好孩子”在一次校車上的經(jīng)歷,這次經(jīng)歷讓她面臨內(nèi)心的掙扎和選擇,最終可能改變了她對(duì)規(guī)則和權(quán)威的看法。英文:Thenarrative,toldinthefirstperson,recountstheexperienceofashy"goodkid"onaschoolbus,anexperiencethatconfrontsherwithaninternalstruggleandchoice,potentiallyalteringherviewsonrulesandauthority.角色:主人公(我),福斯特太太(Mrs.Foster),其他孩子,小貓視角:第一人稱時(shí)空線:校車(theschoolbus)情節(jié)線:我小時(shí)候很害羞→校車上的經(jīng)歷→看到小貓的困境→內(nèi)心的掙扎→福斯特太太的干預(yù)情感線:害羞→同情→掙扎→震驚→可能的勇敢行動(dòng)句式:表語從句,非謂語,狀語從句,同位語,定語從句,賓語從句本文屬于人與自我:成長與自我認(rèn)知第一段:WhenMrs.Fosteryelledatmetositdown,Iwasshocked.HowdidIrespondtoheryellingatme?Ihesitated,myheartpoundinginmychest.WhydidMrs.Fostergetoffthebus?Wasittoreprimandmeinpersonortocheckonthecat?第二段:“Nooneistoleavethisbus!”Mrs.Fostersaidseriously,rushingintotherain.WhatwasMrs.Fostergoingtodoaftershegotoff?Wasshegoingtosavethecat,orwasthereanotherreasonforherurgency?基于以上分析,完成相應(yīng)作文:WhenMrs.Fosteryelledatmetositdown,Iwasshocked.Mymindracedwiththoughtsofwhattodonext.ShouldIobeyhermandandstayseated,orshouldIseizethemomentandruntothecat'said?Theraincontinuedtopour,andthecat'sfrightenedeyeswereetchedinmymind.Ilookedaround,buttheotherkidswereoblivious,stillengrossedintheir
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