2024年中考英語(yǔ)逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題速遞(北京專(zhuān)用)第四期專(zhuān)題06書(shū)面表達(dá)16篇1．（2024·北京東城·一模）假設(shè)你是李華，在學(xué)生會(huì)負(fù)責(zé)今年體育節(jié)吉祥物(mascot)的設(shè)計(jì)征集活動(dòng)。你校交換生Peter對(duì)該活動(dòng)很感興趣，他給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)吉祥物設(shè)計(jì)的具體要求及提交(submit)的時(shí)間和方式。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)一封郵件，介紹你所知道的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。提示詞語(yǔ)：creative,culture,colourful,draw,email提示問(wèn)題：●Whatarethedesignrequirementsforthemascot?●WhenandhowshouldPetersubmithisdesign?DearPeter,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinthemascotdesignforourschool’sSportsFestival.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodluckwithyourdesign!Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinthemascotdesignforourschool’sSportsFestival.Thedesignisexpectedtobecreative.Itshouldshowthesportsmanshipandourschoolculture.Colourfulandattractivedesignsarehighlypreferred.Youcancreateyourdesignindifferentways.Bothhanddrawingandcomputerdrawingareacceptable.YouneedtosubmityourdesignbynextFriday,June15th.Justemailittomascotdesign@.Pleasemakesureyouincludeyourfullnameandclassintheemail.Goodluckwithyourdesign!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。引出有關(guān)體育節(jié)吉祥物設(shè)計(jì)事宜；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從創(chuàng)新、文化和顏色等方面詳細(xì)介紹了吉祥物的設(shè)計(jì)思路；第三步，表達(dá)希望設(shè)計(jì)方案能被選上的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①indifferentways以不同的方式②both…and…不但……而且……③needtodosth.需要做某事[高分句型]①Thedesignisexpectedtobecreative.(一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài))②Pleasemakesureyouincludeyourfullnameandclassintheemail.(祈使句)2．（2024·北京西城·一模）初中三年，一定有很多課給你留下了深刻的印象。假設(shè)你是李華。你校英文公眾號(hào)正在開(kāi)展以“MyMostMemorableClass”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇文章投稿，介紹你最難忘的一節(jié)課，并談?wù)勥@節(jié)課為什么令你難忘。提示詞語(yǔ)：science,music,experiment,sing,interesting提示問(wèn)題：●Whatwasyourmostmemorableclass?●Whywastheclassmemorable?MyMostMemorableClass________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyMostMemorableClassWehavehadthousandsoflessonsinmiddleschool.Someofthemhaveleftadeepimpressiononme.Amongthem,themostmemorableoneisaphysicsclassIhadlastterm.Intheclass,ourphysicsteacherMr.Liubroughtsomematerialsandaskedustousethemtodoanexperiment.IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,becauseIhadworkedoutalloftheexperimenthomeworkproblems.Iofferedtoperformtheexperimentinfrontofthewholeclass.However,Ijustcouldn’tputwhatIhadlearntintopracticenomatterhowhardItried.Asyoucanimagine,Iwassoembarrassed!ThephysicsclasswasreallymemorablebecauseIlearnedanimportantlifelessonfromitsrealknowledgecomesfrompractice.Ialsolearnedtobemodestandprudent,whichwillpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹自己最難忘的課；第二步，闡述難忘的原因；第三步，總結(jié)說(shuō)明從難忘的課程中學(xué)到了什么。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①leftadeepimpression留下深刻印象②performtheexperiment做實(shí)驗(yàn)[高分句型]①However,Ijustcouldn’tputwhatIhadlearntintopracticenomatterhowhardItried.(what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句)②ThephysicsclasswasreallymemorablebecauseIlearnedanimportantlifelessonfromitsrealknowledgecomesfrompractice.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句)3．（2024·北京通州·一模）某英文網(wǎng)站青少年板塊正在開(kāi)展以“學(xué)會(huì)和父母相處”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是李華。請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，分享你和父母之間發(fā)生的一個(gè)沖突，你是如何恰當(dāng)?shù)靥幚淼?，以及你從中得到的啟示。提示詞語(yǔ)：disagreement,spend,cellphone,shout,communicate提示問(wèn)題：·Whatwastheproblembetweenyourparentsandyou?·Howdidyoudealwithit?·Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?Problemsareoftenaroundus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Problemsareoftenaroundus.Ilovemyparentsandtheylovemeaswell,butwealsohavedisagreementsandsometimeswemakeeachotherunhappy.Oneday,Ispenttoomuchtimeonmycellphonebecauseoftalkingabouttheschoolprojectwithmyclassmates.MymumwasangryandshoutedatmebecauseshethoughtIwastedmytime.IknewsheworriedaboutmesoIdidn’tclosemydoorthistime.IexplainedthereasonandtoldherthatIunderstoodherworries.Shesaidsorrytomebecauseofhermisunderstanding.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofcommunicatingandunderstanding.Irealizethatlisteningtoothersandexpressingclearlycanpreventmisunderstandings.Inaddition,takingresponsibilityformyactionsandshowingtrustworthinesscanhelpmebuildabetterrelationshipwithmyparents.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示信息，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖；第二步，介紹自己與父母之間發(fā)生的一個(gè)沖突及自己的處理方式；第三步，闡述自己從這次沖突中懂得的道理。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①talkingabout...with...與……談?wù)摗趙orriedabout擔(dān)心③saidsorryto向……道歉④takingresponsibilityfor對(duì)……負(fù)責(zé)⑤buildabetterrelationshipwith建立更好的關(guān)系[高分句型]①M(fèi)ymumwasangryandshoutedatmebecauseshethoughtIwastedmytime.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Irealizethatlisteningtoothersandexpressingclearlycanpreventmisunderstandings.（that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，動(dòng)詞ing作主語(yǔ)）4．（2024·北京大興·一模）假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Tom向你發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，想了解你在生活中有哪些處理廢舊物品的做法。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封英文電子郵件，介紹你的相應(yīng)做法及理由。提示詞語(yǔ)：waste,decorate(裝飾),protect,environment提示問(wèn)題：Howdoyoudealwiththewaste?Whatisyourreason?DearTom,I’mgladtointroducemyways...___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyouhaveanyothergoodideas,writetomesoon.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearTom,I’mgladtointroducemywaystodealwiththewaste.Ioftencutawastebottleinhalf,andthenIcangetaspecialcontainerwhichIcanputmypensandotherthingsin.Besides,Ialsotrytomakethemintoartpiecestodecoratemyroom.Intheseways,InotonlyimprovemyDIYskillsbutalsohelpprotecttheenvironment.ThemostimportantisthatIturnthesewastethingsintousefulthingsandgivethemnewlives.Ifyouhaveanyothergoodideas,writetomesoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，介紹是如何處理廢品的；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①cutsth.inhalf把某物切成兩半②notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……[高分句型]①I(mǎi)oftencutawastebottleinhalf,andthenIcangetaspecialcontainerwhichIcanputmypensandotherthingsin.（定語(yǔ)從句）②ThemostimportantisthatIturnthesewastethingsintousefulthingsandgivethemnewlives.（表語(yǔ)從句）5．（2024·北京海淀·一模）學(xué)而致知，行而致遠(yuǎn)。假設(shè)你是李華。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“學(xué)以致用”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，分享一次你運(yùn)用所學(xué)解決實(shí)際問(wèn)題的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@。提示詞語(yǔ)：skill,makeuseof,connect,improve,meaningful提示問(wèn)題：●Whatexperiencecanyoushareaboutputtingwhatyou'velearnedintopractice?●Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?It’simportanttoputwhatwe’velearnedintopractice.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：It’simportanttoputwhatwe’velearnedintopractice.Lastsummerholiday,IlearnedsomefirstaidknowledgesuchasCPRandHeimlichManeuver.Oneday,mylittersisterwaschokedbyacandyandcouldn’tbreathe.Seeingthis,IthoughtofwhatIlearntlastsummerholidayshortly.Then,Istoodbehindmysisterandappliedpressuretoherabdomen.Fortunately,thecandyinherthroatwasspitout.Atlast,Icalled120forfurthercheck.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofthecombinationoftheoryandpractice,whichnotonlyenablesustohaveabetterunderstandingofwhatwehavelearned,butalsomakescontributionstooursociety.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示問(wèn)題完成寫(xiě)作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖；第二步，介紹自己學(xué)以致用的一次經(jīng)歷；第三步，闡述自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①suchas比如②applysthtosth將……運(yùn)用……③thinkof想起[高分句型]Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofthecombinationoftheoryandpractice,whichnotonlyenablesustohaveabetterunderstandingofwhatwehavelearned,butalsomakescontributionstooursociety.(定語(yǔ)從句)6．（2024·北京海淀·一模）假設(shè)你是李華。你的好朋友Peter正在參與籌備他們學(xué)校的“校園勞動(dòng)日”活動(dòng)，他寫(xiě)信向你征求創(chuàng)意。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封回信，提供一些活動(dòng)創(chuàng)意并說(shuō)明理由。提示詞語(yǔ)：cleanup,repair,garden,fun,responsibility提示問(wèn)題：●Whatactivitieswouldyouliketosuggest?●Whydoyousuggestso?DearPeter,I’mexcitedtohearthatyou’reorganizingactivitiesforSchoolServiceDay.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpful.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearPeter,

I’mexcitedtohearthatyou’reorganizingactivitiesforSchoolServiceDay.AndI’dliketosharesomeideaswithyou.First,Ithinkit’sagoodideatoorganizeclean-upactivities.Forexample,studentscancleantheclassroomandplayground,whichcanmaketheschoolmuchcleanerandmorebeautiful.What’smore,youcanaskstudentstorepairthebrokendesksandchairs.Itwillbegreatfun.Moreover,youcanarrangeforstudentstowaterthegarden.Theywillfeelastrongsenseofresponsibilitytobeautifytheschool.Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpful.

Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示信息，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“我想和你分享一些想法”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“清潔活動(dòng)、修理活動(dòng)、給花園澆水活動(dòng)等”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“希望建議能有所幫助”的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①share...with...和……分享……②What’smore另外③arrangeforstudentsto...安排學(xué)生……④waterthegarden給花園澆水⑤feelastrongsenseofresponsibility有強(qiáng)烈的責(zé)任感⑥beautifytheschool美化學(xué)校[高分句型]①First,Ithinkit’sagoodideatoorganizeclean-upactivities.（that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，that省略；it固定句式）②Forexample,studentscancleantheclassroomandplayground,whichcanmaketheschoolmuchcleanerandmorebeautiful.（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）③Theywillfeelastrongsenseofresponsibilitytobeautifytheschool.（動(dòng)詞不定式作定語(yǔ)）7．（23-24九年級(jí)上·北京·期末）假如你是李華，你和你的英國(guó)筆友Peter都熱心參與志愿服務(wù)，他給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)你參與志愿服務(wù)的情況。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)一封郵件，介紹你所參加過(guò)的一次志愿者活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。不少?0詞。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。提示詞語(yǔ)：Children’sHome,tellstories,teach,tired,happy提示問(wèn)題：●Wheredidyoudothevolunteerwork?●Whatdidyoudothere?●Howdidyoufeel?DearPeter,I’mgladtotellyouaboutthevolunteerworkIdid.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】范文：DearPeter,I’mgladtotellyouaboutthevolunteerworkIdid.Lastsummer,IgotanopportunitytovolunteerataChildren’sHomeinthecommunity.Mymaindutywastotakecareofchildrenagedfivetosevenyearsold.Theywereveryfriendly.TheyshowedmebigsmileswhentheysawabagofgiftsIbroughtforthem.Ididlotsofthingswiththem.Itoldstories,sangsongs,andtaughtthemsomethingIwasgoodat.Itwasawonderfulday.Iwashappytobeabletodosomethingforlittlekids.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”。③提示：文章為第一人稱(chēng)，向別人介紹自己的志愿服務(wù)經(jīng)歷和感受。問(wèn)題回答完整，提示詞運(yùn)用在文章中去，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出地點(diǎn)在哪里做的志愿服務(wù)；第二步，具體介紹自己做了哪些事情；第三步，談?wù)勛约簩?duì)于這次志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng)的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takecareof照顧②wasgoodat擅長(zhǎng)③washappyto高興做某事④beableto能、會(huì)⑤opportunity機(jī)會(huì)[高分句型]①TheyshowedmebigsmileswhentheysawabagofgiftsIbroughtforthem.（時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Ireadstories,sangsongs,andtaughtthemsomethingIwasgoodat.（限制性定語(yǔ)從句）③Mymaindutywastotakecareofchildrenagedfivetosevenyearsold.（動(dòng)詞不定式作表語(yǔ)）8．（23-24九年級(jí)上·北京·期末）好的習(xí)慣有著無(wú)窮的力量，它如同種子在日復(fù)一日的堅(jiān)持中生根發(fā)芽，茁壯成長(zhǎng)。學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展“好習(xí)慣伴我成長(zhǎng)”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀愕囊粋€(gè)好習(xí)慣是什么，你是如何保持的以及它帶給你的收獲。不少于50詞；文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用；請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。提示詞語(yǔ)：reading,keepdoing,freetime,improve,knowledge提示問(wèn)題：●Whatisyourgoodhabit?●Howdoyoukeepyourgoodhabit?●Whatcanyougetfromyourgoodhabit?Goodhabitscanchangeourwholelife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文Goodhabitscanchangeourwholelife.Oneofmygoodhabitsistakingnotesinclass.Inclass,Itakedownwhatmyteacherswriteontheblackboardandotherimportantpointsaboutmylessons.Ikeepmynoteswell-organizedandtidysothatIcanfindinformationeasilylater.BeforeIdomyhomeworkandtakeexams,Ireviewmynotescarefully.Thehabitoftakingnoteshelpsmebecomeasuccessfulstudent.Itnotonlyimprovesmylearningabilities,butalsohelpsmegetgoodgrades.Agoodhabitreallyhelpsmeinmystudyanddailylife.I’llkeepitlifelong.【詳解】[總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：文章應(yīng)該包括三個(gè)問(wèn)題要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)；行文時(shí)多用第一人稱(chēng)，盡量多使用短語(yǔ)和句型；寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。［寫(xiě)作步驟］第一步，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，介紹的好習(xí)慣是什么；第二步，介紹你是如何保持你的好習(xí)慣的；第三步，介紹你從這個(gè)好習(xí)慣中得到了什么；第四步，書(shū)寫(xiě)總結(jié)。［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］①takedown記錄，記下②getgoodgrades取得好成績(jī)［高分句型］①I(mǎi)keepmynoteswell-organizedandtidysothatIcanfindinformationeasilylater.(sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句)②Itnotonlyimprovesmylearningabilities,butalsohelpsmegetgoodgrades.(notonly…butalso…引導(dǎo)并列句)9．（23-24九年級(jí)上·北京順義·期末）假如你是李華，你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)的公眾號(hào)計(jì)劃做以“MyFavoriteBook”為主題的系列推送。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給社團(tuán)公眾號(hào)留言，推薦你最喜歡的一本書(shū)，談?wù)勀阆矚g的理由及收獲。提示詞語(yǔ)：writer，interesting，encourage提示問(wèn)題：·Whatisyourfavoritebook?·Whydoyoulikeit?·Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromit?Readingcanmakeourlifecolorful.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Readingcanmakeourlifecolorful.IlikereadingnovelsbestbecauseIcanlearninterestingstoriesofdifferentpeople.MyfavoritebookisJaneEyrewrittenbyCharlotteBronte.First,IammovedbyJane’sexperienceandtraits.Janeissmallinbodybutstronginheart.Asapoororphan,shesufferedalotofdifficultiesbutshenevergaveup.Asawoman,shepursuedjustice,freedomandrespectinherlife.What’smore,thelanguageisrichandbeautiful,whichishelpfulforEnglishlearners.Ibenefitalotfromreadingit.Itnotonlybroadensmyvisionbutalsohelpsmebuildmycharacters.SoIwillkeepreadingasalastinghabit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”與為主。③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)注意題干給出的“推薦最喜歡的一本書(shū)，談?wù)勏矚g的理由及收獲?！辈⑦m當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文應(yīng)使用第一人稱(chēng)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，說(shuō)明閱讀的重要性，以及自己最喜歡的書(shū)。第二步，介紹喜歡這本書(shū)的原因。第三步，分享這本書(shū)帶給自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①gaveup放棄②benefitfrom從……中收益[高分句型]①I(mǎi)likereadingnovelsbestbecauseIcanlearninterestingstoriesofdifferentpeople.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②What’smore,thelanguageisrichandbeautiful,whichishelpfulforEnglishlearners.（定語(yǔ)從句）10．（23-24九年級(jí)上·北京順義·期末）某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“榜樣”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)務(wù)l是你心中的榜樣，你的理由，以及他/她對(duì)你的影響。提示詞語(yǔ):helpful,care,workhard,overcome(克服)提示問(wèn)題:Whoisyourrolemodel?Whyishe/sheyourrolemodel?Whatinfluencehashe/shehadonyou?Everyonemayhavehisownrolemodel._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Everyonemayhavehisownrolemodel.ThepersonIadmiremostismyfather.Inmyeyes,myfatherishard-workingandresponsibleforeverythinghedoes.Asadoctor,hespendsmostofhistimeandenergyonhiswork.Heiswillingtohelpandcareallthepatients.What’smore,hegivesmesupporttohelpmethroughhardtimes.Forexample,whenIfailedanexamlastyear,hehelpedmefindthesolutionsandencouragedmetoovercomethedifficulties.

Withhisguidanceandinfluence,Istudyhardatschoolandtrytohelpmyclassmateswiththeirhomework.IhopeIcandoaswellashiminthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，介紹自己心中的榜樣；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，描述自己的理由以及榜樣對(duì)自己的影響；第三步，表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bewillingtodosth.愿意做某事②what’smore此外③forexample例如[高分句型]①Forexample,whenIfailedanexamlastyear,hehelpedmefindthesolutionsandencouragedmetoovercomethedifficulties.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②IhopeIcandoaswellashiminthefuture.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）11．（23-24九年級(jí)上·北京門(mén)頭溝·期末）2023年7月末，我們的家鄉(xiāng)門(mén)頭溝區(qū)出現(xiàn)了災(zāi)害性特大暴雨天氣，受損嚴(yán)重。家鄉(xiāng)人民眾志成城，積極抗洪救災(zāi)。假如你是李華，你的筆友Peter非常關(guān)心你和你的家鄉(xiāng)，想了解一下這次災(zāi)情的情況。請(qǐng)你用英文回復(fù)郵件，簡(jiǎn)述家鄉(xiāng)受災(zāi)的基本情況，談?wù)劻钅阌∠笊羁痰娜嘶蚴乱约案惺?。提示詞語(yǔ)：flood(洪災(zāi)),damage,seriously,neighbour,inspiring提示問(wèn)題：●Whatwasyourhometownlikeduringtheflood?●Whoorwhatimpressedyou?●Howdidyoufeel?DearPeter，Thankyouverymuchforyourconcerns._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,

Thankyouverymuchforyourconcerns.DisastrousheavyrainsoccurredinourhometownMentougouDistrict,causingseriousdamagein2023July.Manylow-lyingcommunitiesfloodedagain.Itwasfullofmuddywater.

ThePLAmenarrivedimmediatelytorescuethevillagersofthefloodedareas.Andtheydidtheirbesttofightagainsttheflood.Theysuppliedthevillagerswithfreshvegetablesandfood.Somemedicalteamswereorganizedtohelpussothatwecouldhavehealthydiet.

Afteralongtime,everythingwentonverywell.Andthatwasasignofvictory.Iwasdeeplymovedbythesepeople.

Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文時(shí)態(tài)一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；③提示：本文要點(diǎn)以問(wèn)題形式給出，注意要點(diǎn)銜接自然。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，感謝好友的關(guān)心；第二步，描寫(xiě)洪水中家鄉(xiāng)的樣子，誰(shuí)或什么事情給你留下了深刻的印象；第三步，結(jié)束語(yǔ)，感覺(jué)如何。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wasfullof充滿(mǎn)；②immediately立即地③fightagainst與……戰(zhàn)斗[高分句型]Somemedicalteamswereorganizedtohelpussothatwecouldhavehealthydiet.（目的狀語(yǔ)從句）12．（23-24九年級(jí)上·北京門(mén)頭溝·期末）現(xiàn)實(shí)中，總會(huì)有這樣一個(gè)人。他（她）有一種獨(dú)特的人格魅力。這種魅力是令人欽佩的性格、品質(zhì)、行為……。他（她）散發(fā)出的令人欽佩的氣質(zhì)一直吸引著你，伴隨你的成長(zhǎng)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“令我欽佩的人”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，介紹一下誰(shuí)是你敬佩的人，你為什么欽佩他（她），以及你從他（她）身上學(xué)到了什么。提示詞語(yǔ)：help,enjoy,friendly,workhard,takeaction提示問(wèn)題：●Whoisthepersonyouadmire?●Whydoyouadmirehimorher?●Whathaveyoulearntfromhimorher?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Iadmiremymotherverymuch.Sheishelpfulandcareful.Everydayshegetsupveryearlyandgoestobedlate.Sheisnotonlybusywithherworkbutalsotakesgoodcareofourfamily.What’smore,sheisveryhelpfultoothers.Whenpeoplearoundherareintrouble,she’salwaysreadytohelpthemtosolvetheproblems.Allthepeoplelikeher.I’mluckytohavesuchagoodmother.IloveherandIhavelearnedalotfromher.Ihaveknowntheimportanceofresponsibilityandhelpingothers.Iwillworkhardandtrymybesttohelpothers.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，要注意不要遺漏材料中詢(xún)問(wèn)的三個(gè)主要問(wèn)題，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]①第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“我最敬佩的人”來(lái)引出下文中對(duì)三個(gè)問(wèn)題的回答；②第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“我最敬佩的人是誰(shuí)、原因和值得學(xué)習(xí)的地方”三方面入手，重點(diǎn)介紹我的母親；③第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)對(duì)母親的愛(ài)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①getsup起床②notonly...butalso...不但……而且……③bebusywithsth忙于某事④takecareof照顧⑤what’smore此外⑥introuble有困難⑦tryone’sbesttodosth某人盡全力做某事[高分句型]①Whenpeoplearoundherareintrouble,she’salwaysreadytohelpthemtosolvetheproblems.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）13．（23-24九年級(jí)上·北京石景山·期末）假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Tom與你交流如何安排課余生活，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)一封郵件。提示詞語(yǔ)：enjoy,sports,relax提示問(wèn)題：Howdoyouspendyoursparetime？Explainyourreasons.DearTom,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmysparetime._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________